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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Beautiful os dear
Loved reading it
Was extremely heart touching
Truly, it is not necessary to have a happy ending in real life
Was an amazing writing😊

Thank you so much dear

I'm gald u like it

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Poonam

@Buddhu_Sa_Mann

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

It was such a beautifully written OS. Well done

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Buddhu_Sa_Mann
It was such a beautifully written OS. Well done

Thank you dear...

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome OS Dear👏😊

It lukd like an one-sided story

It may have been hard to write

Dunno whether Zoya was naive or dumb?

Who really falls for some guy widout chatting wid him or seeing him face to face

Asad lukd disinterested in her

It was heartbreaking for Zoya wen Asad broke d alliance n moved on wid someone else

Can't blame Asad as he tried to chat wid Zoya but she did not liked chatting

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

It was Beautiful Ashii ...!!!
I really liked it ...!!!
Beautifully Written ...!!!

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Mera
Shona🤗
Tune kaha tha reality based n I know the back story very well... won't get personal here but still u made me cry😭
Poor zoya..I felt for her from the heart... asad...he did wrong n he will be punished for this deed of his...😭

Baqi review personal mai...n it was one of the best sad story of yours🤗❤️

arshu 🤗

tu roya na bs iska mtlb mast sad OS tha 😆

and about punish thing wo sab Allah k hawaly

hugs back 🤗 ❤️

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome OS Dear👏😊
It lukd like an one-sided story
It may have been hard to write
Dunno whether Zoya was naive or dumb?
Who really falls for some guy widout chatting wid him or seeing him face to face
Asad lukd disinterested in her
It was heartbreaking for Zoya wen Asad broke d alliance n moved on wid someone else
Can't blame Asad as he tried to chat wid Zoya but she did not liked chatting

yes juhi it was one-sided story and no one blamed asad here

and about zoya being dumb... there are girls who actually falls for someone just like that

i was lil bit hard but a great attempt as far as i know the real story

thank you for commenting dear 😛

Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago