*New* AsYa TS : The Ties Of Heartbeatsl completed l Last part pg13 - Page 10

Asad was hurt seeing Zoya ignoring him

No dear, u did not hurt anyone's sentiments or feelings. U wrote wat u felt like. I know d story had horrible content but it was wat actually happens in real life. Not all girls have mothers like Zoya who saves them. Not all couples r lucky to get Rashid n Dilshad to save them. A couple of days earlier, I watching a scene 4m NH10 where a random married woman was brutally killed along wid her husband by her own brother n his men as a part of honour killing. I did not watched d entire movie till now. Par jitna bhi dekhi usse ye pata chalta hai dat d leads were like some normal couple or better say normal people like us who were not some filmy couple to jump into their matter n save d couple. D leads gets into trouble due to hero's ego behaviour as he started following d goon's jeep cuz d main leader slapped him while his wife told him not to follow them. Before d killing scene, wen d girl came to d heroine to help her n her husband d heroine told her to leave her n walked past her. D leads were shown like how normal people act not wanting to get into any matter. Dat random couple were killed very badly. AsYa too were beaten a lot n wud have surely died if Rashid n Dilshad did not saw them n tuk them to d hospital. U said u can't describe Gaffur's actions which is okay as some people don't have any excuse or reason to do any wrong. Farhan was her father but he was too much in beating her n getn her married to some random guy. U sud have wrote on wat happened to Zoya's parents after d incident like whether Farhan too was arrested or not.

Awesome awesome awesome super amazing TS

Very heart touching and emotional..

Outstanding update on

Awsum story
Asad n zoya awsum so courageousnot eveeveryone has got guts to fight society for their love especially when your life is at stake
and I completely agree with you about farhaan's behaviour he wanted to save his daughter though the way he dealt it was completely wrong
all in all I lovvveeeddd it

Riddhi a.k.a DOLL ..😊