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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

wo bhi ek song hai😆

ek fish seller ne banaya tha

or kafi hit hua tha

Haaa..aacha dekhna padega..
Woh aajkal ek aur hai...ek Autowaale Ka..joh Gazal gaake famous hooraha hai..

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
yo me first 😎 😆😆 badhai ho
unres

sue... itna sensitive topic

hats off for writing this...

mai toh kabhi bhi aisy topic pe na likhti

haan yaar mann me aaya fir jaa hi ni ra tha to likhna hi pada i ko🥱 thanku

coming to the story i loved asad here
me too😃

the way he stood with zoya was too good

felt really bad for humaria

ayan was an investigator
yes isiliye vikraant ko ayaan banaya hai rishabh se investigator wali feel ni aati na😳

poem mjhy zaida sa,jh nahi aayi par achi thi
hahha konsi poem be? wo song hai ek dekh niche link bhi di hai mene song ki😆

overall good attempt
thanku so much pkd 😃😃

keep writing more
i will😉

love u 🤗

love u tooo 🤗

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Thank U.

no thank you

hope links worked

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
yeh old ad hai
www.youtube.com/watch?v=bPrv-JJdZvw

or yeh new

www.youtube.com/watch?v=5o-BNxk7T5g

mujhy to Fawad Mahira dono ads mai pasand hain ❤️

mayur... pehly links were not working

hope now its working...

sorry i'm bad in providing links and all...

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

love u tooo 🤗

haan ia agree VM se feel aaying 😆

song poem jo bhi hai meko nahi pata

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

res

unres

aww lolly reading n commenting on ur work after long time feeling soo nicee😃😳

and concept s soo different n sensitive can feel it n u wrote soo well👍🏼

keep more coming🤗

Edited by Missadorable - 9 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
special res for Bestu and Tehs

missed u gayab ppl 🤗

hugs back🤗

tit 4 tat😆

Suri hugs🤗

Beautiful Os Suri😃

boht sensitive topic tha

& likha bhi senti hoke tune😆

but it was nicely penned

great job👏

Yeh poem pale nahi padi mere waise😕

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: jas91

hugs back🤗

tit 4 tat😆

Suri hugs🤗

Beautiful Os Suri😃

boht sensitive topic tha

& likha bhi senti hoke tune😆

but it was nicely penned

great job👏

Yeh poem pale nahi padi mere waise😕

why tit for tat 😲

and bestu meko bhi poem kum song palle nahi pada 🤣

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

why tit for tat 😲

and bestu meko bhi poem kum song palle nahi pada 🤣

lol is song ke lyrics hi ese h 🤣

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: jas91

hugs back🤗

tit 4 tat😆

Suri hugs🤗

Beautiful Os Suri😃

boht sensitive topic tha

& likha bhi senti hoke tune😆

but it was nicely penned

great job👏

Yeh poem pale nahi padi mere waise😕

hugs cuckoo 🤗
tu ne padh liya😲
i thought tu idhar aatey hi i ko chillayegi ki suri ye kya likha tune😡😆 🤣
but taareef ki uske liye shukriya 🤗
poem 🤣 beizzati kar re ho yaar
song h wo😆😳