ASYA STORY: MUKADAR NE BADALDI ZINDAGI KE LAKHIRE part 5 on page 73..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Hey do PM when u update next

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Ashii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

res

binnshiii sab se pehly hugs for starting writing 🤗

i'm happy for u

coming to the concept it's good

loved it

asya have a daughter named zuni

par asad ko nahi pata 😲

separation is my fav track

i like the baby in the pic

now update soon plz

Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago

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shweta_yadav

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Very interesting and will Love to read more... pls give next update soon

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Binnu baby aap bhi writer ban gaye ho 😛

are wah ji wah

pehle toh Congratulations & celebrations 🥳

ab kyunki inte new writers saamne aa rahe hain I can happily tale early retirement😆😆

coming 2 story

Asya ki beti Zuni wow 😊

but Asya ko juda kar diya who kyun 😕

yeh Mukaadar word mujhe hargiz pasand nahi jabse Gul mata used it

Hope Tu hamen utna nahi tadpayegii 😆

chal continue soon dear

& 4 mentioning me in start🤗

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Wow

Loving this already

Looking forward to reading

Love Asya unlucky love where kids separation r involve

So his own daughter he has no clue

But the connection the feeling is there

So zoya missed seeing him her love

Continue and pm plz

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Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

WOW !!!
Its So Cute ...!!!
Awesome Start ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!
Will love to read further ...!!!

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LilChooza

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Nice start binnu ... keep it up girl but kyun alag AsYa yeh sabko kya shouk AsYa ke bachon ko bina asad ke bada karna?! ... waise ignore me I am pagal bcoz of exams ...

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Persiko
sorry :)

tum bilkul pagal ho...sorry ki kya bath h...

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A.S.K

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

hai shayad kyunki mai tang aagayi hun with AsYa ki separation and sad stories ...isiliye ya toh mai khud aisi kuch likhdungi ...ya stories chodke bhaag jaungi ;)

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

haha...but I'm a saddist Afi...that is the main problem...but I promise u happy ending... seriously I don't know what I wrote...so sorry ..
exams kaise...