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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Yay u started

Looking forward to read
Want to see how hard Asad will have to work for his ms.farooqui loves
So he is on his way to her
Looking forward for more pm plz

Yes! Asad hurt Zoya and is going to get her, but will Zayn give her up once he finds her? Update should be up soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello all! I was very pleased with the reactions that I got so I've decided to continue this FF. I do have some bad news though. Due to some complications on my computer, I will not be able to send PMs. I will try to send some later, but I'm not sure if they all will work. Once I get my computer fixed, PMs will be sent. Anyways, I hope you enjoy chapter 1!😊



Cherishing You
Cherish what can't be replaced

Chapter 1

Her tears cascaded down her face, practically soaking the pillow. Her usual cheerful personality is no longer visible, and replaced with the strong emotion of sorrow.

Does he really hate me so much, that he would believe all that?

Was their trust so weak that he would just believe anything that anyone would say about her? None of it even made sense. Why would she ever want to do that to anyone?

And then there was him.

Why would he say all those things? Didn't he understand how much it would hurt her?


Flashback-

" How could you Ms. Farooqui? How dare you! I can't believe I've been living with someone so inhuman!", Asad roared.

Dilshaad spoke up.

"Asad calm down, she-"

"No Ammi, how could I calm down? After what that misfit did, she deserves to be thrown out of this house!", Asad screamed.

Flashback ends-


Another tear slowly made its way down her cheek.

She couldn't stay here anymore. After today, she didn't wanted anything to do with Asad Ahmed Khan.

She didn't want to get hurt again. She wanted to leave, so much.

And she would.

She would leave KV, forever and ever.



Dinner was quiet at Khan Villa today. No laughter, no usual jokes or comedy, no poetry. Nothing.

Just silence.

Zoya hadn't come to dinner.

Tanveer couldn't help but hide a small smile. Today, everything had gone according to plan. Asad was disgusted with Zoya, and she could now fall into the spotlight.

Oh Zoya, if only you weren't so clueless. Asad should've been mine in the beginning, but now that you're out of the picture, he will be for the rest of my life. And the best thing, you won't be able to do anything about it.

Tanveer was quickly brought out of her thoughts as she heard arguing come from across the table. She was so distracted with her thoughts, that she hadn't even noticed a conversation being held.

"Ammi, you know what she did? So why are you acting like she isn't to blame?", Asad asked.

"Asad I raised you better than this! You shouldn't have said all those things to Zoya", Dilshaad spoke.

" You saw the evidence, you-".

" I don't care what I saw Asad! I don't believe any of it! Zoya would never do that, and you should now that by now.".

Dilshaad knew Zoya. She was a girl born with a heart of gold. Yes she messed up some times, but she would never do anything to harm anyone.

But there was one thing she couldn't understand. She was so sure that Asad and Zoya had developed feelings for one another. She knew it. Asad had even almost confessed it to her once, so what had happened now? Where was all the feelings that she knew he had?


Zoya would definitely leave this house, but could she really live without her Phoopi, and Najma? The people that gave her a family. That gave her a mother's love that she always craved for, and a sister's bond?

No Zoya, they love you very much, but you have to be strong. Where is that girl that always had her pride. You can't stay here, and you won't.

She would leave here tonight.



Okay, I hoped you all enjoyed that!😊 I'm thinking about updating every week, but I'm not sure if it'll fit my schedule. So what do you think Zoya is going to do? Chapter 2 should be out soon. Thanks for reading- Ria.




Edited by fariaflower - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unresed
Awesome Part Ria👏😊
I think Zoya was accused of trying to stab Tanveer
Asad is such an idiot n jerk who don't seem Dilshad's son at all😡
How can he never use his brain n never trust Zoya?
Glad dat Zoya stood for her self-respect than crying for dis heartless creature
I don't blame Tanveer but only Asad
He can doubt her even widout Tanveer as he will believe anyone who will say sumthn against her
Hope Zoya does not forgive him easily n let him take her for granted
Wonder how Asad did not used his brains for 6 months before Tanveer is exposed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update
Loved reading it
Very heart touching
Although i would love to know the reason that asad shouted on her, i know that it has to do something with tanveer and her cheap tricks
Zoya's hurt and wanting to go back
Looking forward to know how tanveer's truth comes out in the open and ofcourse the much awaited love triangle in New York
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update
loved it
Dilshaad believes zoya asad not
zoya is leaving
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Unresed

Awesome Part Ria👏😊
I think Zoya was accused of trying to stab Tanveer
Asad is such an idiot n jerk who don't seem Dilshad's son at all😡
How can he never use his brain n never trust Zoya?
Glad dat Zoya stood for her self-respect than crying for dis heartless creature
I don't blame Tanveer but only Asad
He can doubt her even widout Tanveer as he will believe anyone who will say sumthn against her
Hope Zoya does not forgive him easily n let him take her for granted
Wonder how Asad did not used his brains for 6 months before Tanveer is exposed

Your prediction is very close! I left what Zoya did a mystery, but it will be revealed in the upcoming chapters. As for Asad, he is being a total jerk. But don't worry, Zoya will not forgive him, and Asad will have to fight for Zoya soon. Chapter 2 will be up soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful update

Loved reading it
Very heart touching
Although i would love to know the reason that asad shouted on her, i know that it has to do something with tanveer and her cheap tricks
Zoya's hurt and wanting to go back
Looking forward to know how tanveer's truth comes out in the open and ofcourse the much awaited love triangle in New York
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently😊

I'm so glad you liked it! Tanveer did do something to frame Zoya, but I left that a mystery for now. It will be revealed in the upcoming chapters when Zoya is shown innocent.
The love triangle is also coming soon! It will get pretty intense to see Asad fight with someone else for Zoya! Chapter 2 will be coming soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: allwaysasya

Beautiful update
loved it
Dilshaad believes zoya asad not
zoya is leaving
update soon

I'm happy to hear that! Chapter 2 will be up shortly 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update
Asad blamed Zoya again
Y tannu the billi always becomes kabab wali haddi seriously
Hoping Asad might used his brain this tym n stops zoya
Plz continue soon :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajanshul

Amazing update

Asad blamed Zoya again
Y tannu the billi always becomes kabab wali haddi seriously
Hoping Asad might used his brain this tym n stops zoya
Plz continue soon :-))

Asad will get the punishment he deserves. I'll update soon 😊

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