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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Ye wala mera
unres!

Riddhi 🤗
IT WAS SO SO beautiful
didn't feel like ki ur writing after a long tym
bohat bohat pasand aya
title too is nice and itna khoobsurat banner to rasmalai h bna sakti hai
i am in love with the banner and i just loved it jo b tha wo agar dream sequence tha to
i so love it ❤️
WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY and thoughtful end 😆
THE STARGAZE MOMENT is my favrt and then when they part their ways and scene cm to hm sitting in car
good imaginable launguage elements used
dream was all it took to let them be together again
it was WOW!
thanku fr writing smthng as such
dil khush hogaya padhke

Sabhi aapke the 😆

Thank u sooo muchhh 🤗

Mujhe bhi not felt writing after so long

Sab inne welcoming hoing!

Thank u thank u

Yup meri rasmalai rocks!!😳

I lovvveee youuu rasmalai, and unhi ke paas ability hai mujhe handle karne ki... 🤗Yup dream sequence

Iska end nahi mil raha tha na 😆

Owwiiiee thank u teddy

U emotional karing😆

Ab inna bhi accha nahi tha😛

Jitna makhan Mara hai

And ur. Comment is Woooaaaooow!!😳

Mera dil khush kardiya kudiye ye padhke... 🤗Thank u jhallofy for this one! 🤗Thankzooo

I love u 🤗

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Khud ki udaana b ana chaiye 😆
ISI K SATH pg ki samapti

Bilkul sahi

Humor with wisdom asl topic 😆

Yes asha krte hai yatra safal rahi 😆

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Soch ri hu kha jau ya jaane du 😆

No comments rukoge to hai nahi...jab tak socho ge page khatam🤣

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Mera dimag jb tk sochega utni der me to pg khatam hojayega 🤣

Mujhe pata tha 🤣

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
Amazing update
love it

Thank you so much!!! 🤗

I m glad!!

Really thank u so much

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
This was beautiful dear
Loved reading it
The whole flashback scene was a treat to read
It seemed like asad is remembering his meet with zoya in his earlier life
Just flawless
Would love to read more from you😊

Thank you so so so sooo much for this wonderful comment!!! 🤗

I m so glad and happy!!

He he it was nothing such but the idea is amazing...certainly can be used!

Owwiieee I m jumping

Thank u thank u

Really thank u so much

Feeling happy reading this !

Certainly coming up😳