A$y@/K@bhi Song Drabble - Unexpected Auto Ride* mayur's bday blast* - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Thank You once again for the RES and Thread Sue..😃


res ka thanku wapas rakho aur thread ka rakhoge ni to de hi do 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Thank You so much for the Wishes Sweets The Tehs..😃 😛

That tag or joh bhi hai CHOTA DON waala aapne hee mujhe diya tha TEHS...it is one of those nicknames which I don't like..but aap bula sakti hai,.😳..Sue bhi nhi.😆


jee nahiii
bulaungi me to chota don hi
us raat sakshi pooch ri thi na kaun h ye mayur chan
to mene usey yehi bola tha chota don hai 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Yes I am fine Sum...hope the same for U too...

Waise Sue ki ragging kis waste...Who BECHARI 😆 itni mehnat karrr ahi hai...kuch toh reham karo.😛


ye log reham karne waalo me se nahi h
AUR ME BECHAARI NAHI HU⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BelleAme

omg sue awesome blossom thread 😃
mayur mayur as usual mai Har cheezein late. hone u had a blast on ur birthday. ..n not only ur birthday hope the following days were good as well..
Chota don 😆 ...sue ki bacchi item ho tum ek . .dhamakedar item

n n n sue I read somewhere that u write poetry
I luv luv luv to read poems
mujge link chahiye of ur poetry 😳


omg sara on my thread??😲⭐️😆
thanku thanku😃😆
hu na dhamaakedaar😳😆
link to dedi mayu ne and tu aa bhi gai waha nd m so happy u came😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

wah wah!!
auto ne banadi jodi
starting with the concept...kaafi unique tha kyunki Asad Ahmed Khan ko auto me kisine nahi bithaya ...hehehe
hahaaha mene betha diya na auto me usko😆

anyways...
the way her feelings are described...beautiful
Matlab u can defo get the pain... song choice was exceptional
thanku thanku 😆

jab me started na I was like how come this song relate to an auto ride...
but as the os moved on...clearing the vision for the story... it is defo the most appropriate one...
the way both of their gestures were penned...awesome
one fighting with the inner turmoil and other trying to comprehend his feelings and neglecting the other...
thanku re ❤️

The writings were the best part, when he writes and she reads...and honestly my favorite!!!
bcoz don't mind but at that place the feelings are described at their best!!
the way he writes and then she cries... well explained turmoil
aww those were mine favrt too 😆 thanks😛😛

oye hoye...ey ki siyappa hai...
yeh tanveer ne nahi chadni ko bhi story...uff!!
koi gal nahi...imagination hi hai to no tension!!
haha siyaapaa hi siyaapa h akhir pyaar di gal h😆😆😆

okay coming to the present
uff bechari ko uss hi k saath bitha diya oye hoye
kahe babua kahe ignore karat ho
vo kabse tumka tukur tukur dekhat rahi
Kahe??
🤣 i just imagined amir khan commenting on my os 😆😆😆 bhai imaginations h lol

but ji destiny ke toh plans hai kuch aur hai!!
auto ride was fabulous with small incidences!!
ooh to janbhuj ke ignore maring ..oh same month and going to getting married jaldi se...oh
n he likes but not love...offo
kai zala Asad miya?
Tumi kai karto? and why???
Inna Sara ignore!!
but sahi in his place... after all galat illusion me hai
hahhaa and i just imagined singham commenting here 🤣

but really I appreciate and love the way he has taken things...though he is under wrong impression but still he understands and honestly confess things himself!!
beautiful
loved the way!
neek chale ( very nice in methali)
haha kuch kuch har language Ka ata hai!! ;)
awww thanku and methali konsi launguage h be??⭐️

everything is beautiful conveyed...their turmoil the emptiness she feels after he leaves the auto...his take on things...mast!!
again the near the tree part!!!!
beautiful I m speechless with that part!!!
bau Saras( too good gujju me)
hahaa thanku so much yaar mai bhi kisiko speechless bna sakti hu ye to i ko pta hi ni tha😆😆

don't mind aaj mujhe alag alag languages me baat karne Ka man karrHa hai
finally she broke down...
no no why wud i mind...i ko mere threads pe na jo mann karta h kar liya karo 😆😆😆
i love launguages
😃

the best part!!
sooo good !!
the way she took his hand and confessed...
oh to yeh matter hai...ye to memory loss Ka chakkar hai...
haha i am enjoying reading tera review😆

oh to finally he realised and confessed
yay!!!!!!
too good
chalo happy ending
his confession was pure and honest and beautiful!!!
loved the os...
superb
awesome
beautiful...
amazing
loved it...

p.s happy shappy?? inna bada comment??
huggs love u!


awww bohat happy yaara 🤗
love u too and thanku thanku so much for this long long comment
u ne mera dil khush kar dita😃😛
and so happy teko pasand aya😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Hi sue and mayu.

Vaise toh main usi din wish kr chuki hu but again a very happy belated bday mayu😊
May God olways and always bless uh
Stay blessed mayu.


And now to thread awesome thread sue. Loved it.
And the gift was Awesome.
Nyc and unique idea.
Kaha se ate hai aise ideas madam apko?
But jo bhi hai mast hai.
Keep posting bcoz i know kafi sari tune likhi hui hai😆 *bateesi*
And ya sorry both for being super late.

Love uh guys❤️


hi vaishuuu 🤗
thankuuu so much mwuaaah ❤️
ideasss dil se aate hai?😳
usi dil se jisme aap rehti h madam😆
haha haaan likhke ready h sabhi kuch😆😆
u ko sb khabar h *bateesi*
koi na finally comment aahi gaya😳😆
love uhhh😳❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Belated happy bday..

Beautiful drabble sue..
Asya confession was lovely ..
Loved it:-)


thanku yashu 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kadia717

res...

abhi t20 final match time...
and happy bday mayur .

Unres,
Awesome kidddo
🤗
lved it...
❤️
so then he got to know, zoya is her love at last..hehe what a sudden change!!
but nice...😳😳😳
Nice thread...👍🏼
But ye kya shahrukh ko liya tune, Karan hota to maza aa jata, huh...
aur likh jab bhi padhke boar jao tab...😉


noddy 🤗
ur first one to res 🥳
thanku so muchhh
awww ab iss bday boy ka favrt srk h na...and aak bhi h bt us time jadi jaldi me bhool gai aak ko lana
sure ab aur to likhna hi hai😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Happy Birthday Mayur..

Beautiful OS sue..
Loved it very much..

thanku so much Arpita😃

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