A$y@/K@bhi Song Drabble - Unexpected Auto Ride* mayur's bday blast*

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: anopama
Love the Drabble
Hope Mayur had an awesome bday

Thank You so much for the Wishes...😊

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sara..

@BelleAme

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

omg sue awesome blossom thread 😃
mayur mayur as usual mai Har cheezein late. hone u had a blast on ur birthday. ..n not only ur birthday hope the following days were good as well..
Chota don 😆 ...sue ki bacchi item ho tum ek . .dhamakedar item

n n n sue I read somewhere that u write poetry
I luv luv luv to read poems
mujge link chahiye of ur poetry 😳

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: BelleAme
omg sue awesome blossom thread 😃
mayur mayur as usual mai Har cheezein late. hone u had a blast on ur birthday. ..n not only ur birthday hope the following days were good as well..
Chota don 😆 ...sue ki bacchi item ho tum ek . .dhamakedar item

n n n sue I read somewhere that u write poetry
I luv luv luv to read poems
mujge link chahiye of ur poetry 😳

Koi Baat nhi Sara..😊

Thank You soo much for the Wishes...

Waise aapne toh dhamaal macha diya hai Afra ki story mein...bahut khoob.👏

And here is the link...to SUE's poetry corner..i mean pocket..😆

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/writers-corner-books-stories-and-poems/4451763/sues-poetry-pocket-link-to-thread-2-added-at-index-post-1

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

wah wah!!

auto ne banadi jodi

starting with the concept...kaafi unique tha kyunki Asad Ahmed Khan ko auto me kisine nahi bithaya ...hehehe

anyways...

the way her feelings are described...beautiful

Matlab u can defo get the pain... song choice was exceptional

jab me started na I was like how come this song relate to an auto ride...

but as the os moved on...clearing the vision for the story... it is defo the most appropriate one...

the way both of their gestures were penned...awesome

one fighting with the inner turmoil and other trying to comprehend his feelings and neglecting the other...

The writings were the best part, when he writes and she reads...and honestly my favorite!!!

bcoz don't mind but at that place the feelings are described at their best!!

the way he writes and then she cries... well explained turmoil

oye hoye...ey ki siyappa hai...

yeh tanveer ne nahi chadni ko bhi story...uff!!

koi gal nahi...imagination hi hai to no tension!!

okay coming to the present

uff bechari ko uss hi k saath bitha diya oye hoye

kahe babua kahe ignore karat ho

vo kabse tumka tukur tukur dekhat rahi

Kahe??

but ji destiny ke toh plans hai kuch aur hai!!

auto ride was fabulous with small incidences!!

ooh to janbhuj ke ignore maring ..oh same month and going to getting married jaldi se...oh

n he likes but not love...offo

kai zala Asad miya?

Tumi kai karto? and why???

Inna Sara ignore!!

but sahi in his place... after all galat illusion me hai

but really I appreciate and love the way he has taken things...though he is under wrong impression but still he understands and honestly confess things himself!!

beautiful

loved the way!

neek chale ( very nice in methali)

haha kuch kuch har language Ka ata hai!! ;)

everything is beautiful conveyed...their turmoil the emptiness she feels after he leaves the auto...his take on things...mast!!

again the near the tree part!!!!

beautiful I m speechless with that part!!!

bau Saras( too good gujju me)

don't mind aaj mujhe alag alag languages me baat karne Ka man karrHa hai

finally she broke down...

the best part!!

sooo good !!

the way she took his hand and confessed...

oh to yeh matter hai...ye to memory loss Ka chakkar hai...

oh to finally he realised and confessed

yay!!!!!!

too good

chalo happy ending

his confession was pure and honest and beautiful!!!

loved the os...

superb

awesome

beautiful...

amazing

loved it...

p.s happy shappy?? inna bada comment??

huggs love u!

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Di thread uthaya...

Ab khud bhi uthjao!!

Good morning

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Gud mrng my doll 🤗 Ye thread dhundke dene ke liye shukriya 🤗 uthaya to bt mene late dekha meko fir my post k pg 3 pe mila ye 😆 tera review padhne k baad esa lagra h ki bs puch mat thanku so much fr the longest cmnt i've ever got
😆
mai mast reply karungi ab kal se

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Hahahha u take care

See I m planning i will send u that drabble first u check n uske baad post karungi!!

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Haan tu araam se likh
proof read mai kr lungi
pm kar dena
and tu aur bhasha sikh mai jari khane pados ki aunty chole bhature degai usko dekh k bhuk aur badh gai 😆