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Posted: 9 years ago
It was an awesome story dear👏😊
AsYa r blessed wid 2 twin girls Sanam n Seher😃
I hope its not d end of story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Loved it
It was beautifully written story
Asad fainted when doctor said to cut.
Poor him.
He was happy with his bundles of joy
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful update
It was really a treat to read the last part
Finally they are blessed with twin girls
Loved the update
Eagerly waiting for the epilogue
Please try to update it soon
Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you 😆 It was a blast to go through this story with all of you 😉 Sorry if I made you wait for the epilogue though 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Awww loved it

So finally the princesses has arrived
Can't believe thee sher khan fainted
Love the birthday surprise
Love it

Thank you! They're finally here 😆 I needed to make him the weaker one for the first time 🤣 I love Zoya's reaction on her birthday in Qubool Hai, that's why I wanted to write something similar
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Wonderful update!!! Loved it a lot!! 👏

Thanks for the pm!! 😳

Thank you! You welcome 😆😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

It was an awesome story dear👏😊

AsYa r blessed wid 2 twin girls Sanam n Seher😃
I hope its not d end of story...

Thank you 😆 Finally the two little girls are born! Sorry to deceive you but that's actually the end of the story 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update dear
Loved it
It was beautifully written story
Asad fainted when doctor said to cut.
Poor him.
He was happy with his bundles of joy
Thanks for pm

Thank you! Asad's reaction was cute I think 😆 I would have love seeing them becoming parents on the show, like how he would have dealt with a pregnant Zoya and things like that...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Prologue.

Two months later.

Zoya and Asad had moved out of the Khan Villa just to live next to the villa. They just wanted their own house but truth was that both of them were spending more time in the Khan Villa than in their own house.

"Mr Khan!" Zoya called as she went downstairs with nothing else but his shirt.

"What's happ.." Asad stopped talking on spotting his beautiful wife. He even stopped changing Sanam's diaper and she peed on his shirt.

He was looking at her beautiful image and was amazed. When she came near him, he grabbed her petite waist and kissed her neck.

"Mr Khan?" She whispered in a small moan.

"Kya?"

"Sanam pees on your shirt!" She revealed and giggled before going to breastfeed Seher. After feeding her daughters, they fell asleep so she went to prepare breakfast for Asad.

"Mrs Khan?" He whispered in her ear.

"Hmm?" She asked cutely.

"You're the one I want for breakfast." He said before turning her face to kiss her. Their breakfast long forgotten, they made love again and again, being careful to not wake up the babies.


Ten months later.

Zoya was a mess, crying while eating kheer. But Dilshad was smiling.

"They're so big already!" She sobbed, looking at her now one year old daughters.

"If you want to, you can give me other grandchildren!" Dilshad exclaimed and Zoya blushed furiously and looked at Asad who was feeding Seher.


A year later.

Zoya had a hand full with green colour. She rubbed her hand on her daughters cheek and smiled at them.

"Happy Holi!" She exclaimed giggling. Sanam and Seher giggled and Seher threw pink colour on Zoya while Sanam coloured her kurta in blue. Then Asad came and dropped a bucket of coloured water on their head.

"Abbu!" His little princesses said while Zoya just gasped.

"You're a dead man Mr Khan!" Zoya said and sure he was. She slept at night, almost naked and not letting him have his way with her.


Two years later.


Zoya smiled sleepily on seeing Rahman's face. He was barely three months and he was so cute already.

"How is my little prince?" Asad asked kissing his son's forehead.

"He's good." Zoya said sternly.

"What's wrong?" Asad enquired.

"Nothing." She just said

Asad walked near her and kissed behind her ear.

"Papa!" Seher and Sanam shouted running towards their father and jumping on his back.

"How are my sweet princesses?" He asked and they giggled. Asad didn't even understood why but he smiled just on seeing their happy faces.

Zoya on the other hand was pouting cutely.

"It seems like my little cutie pie is yearning for attention too.." He said as he kissed her nose.

"Yes, you're just living for our children now, forgetting completely your wife! I'm gonna tell it to ammi!" She said ready to leave but Asad held her waist and turned her towards Sanam and Seher who were playing with each other while Rahman was still sleeping peacefully in his crib.


"Do you see these babies?" He asked, kissing her neck. "We made them together.." He said.

"Yes, but.."

"But you brought them to the world on your own, love. I can't stop myself from admiring the amazing job you made by giving birth to these three little stars, I can't stop myself to admire the job you made on raising them because I come home late and I leave home early, so you're the one who provides them the education they need to be amazing grown up adults. I want them to look at me the way they look at you, as their hero. I'm not forgetting you Zoya. I'm loving you through the way I care for our children. I'm loving each things you do to keep this family intact. And I love you." He said and Zoya blushed, smiling.

"I'm sorry for my outburst, I love you too Asad." She replied while she leaned against his wall like chest.


Five years later.

Things got heated between the couple when Rahman burnt his hand while Zoya was working on her famous watch. He was injured badly and when Asad heard that Zoya wasn't even looking after him they had the biggest argument of their relationship.


"How can you be so irresponsible! WHY ON EARTH DID YOU LEAVE HIM BY HIMSELF!! If ammi hadn't decided to come home in this instant I don't know what could've happen to Rahman!"

"Stop it Asad! You're blaming it on me but you're the one who's leaving me by myself all day long for work! You're putting our family after your work! I had the intelligence to ask to my boss if I could do the watch at home! I know that I should've had looked after Rahman but I didn't just for a few minutes and I'm sorry!" She answered crying and he wanted to hug her but she raised her hand.

"No. I don"t want your hug. Don't touch me." She said and left in her room where she locked herself to cry.

When she was sure that everyone was sleeping, she went downstairs to pick the watch and she put it on her wrist. Then she set it to be able to go in Asad's dream.


In Asad's dream.

Asad was playing with his toys, he was barely ten in the dream. Najma came to him to ask if he could pick the jar of biscuits for him but he refused, saying that he was playing first. Then they had some noise and he ran to the kitchen. Zoya followed cautiously and saw Najma with blood on her forehead crying.

"I'm sorry Najma" He said sobbing and called Dilshad who came quickly.

"I'm sorry ammi! I should have looked after her! I'm so sorry!" He sobbed.

"It's not your fault Asad. Accidents happened. Let's just drive her to the hospital." Dilshad replied and Zoya looked at the scene in awe.

Back to the real world.

She left his dream and eyed her husband.

"If your mother managed to forgive you, why can't you forgive me?" She asked as she kissed his forehead before going back to sleep, leaving the watch next to him.

Asad stirred in his sleep and just saw Zoya's figure as she disappeared upstairs. He saw the watch next to him and realized that she had entered his dream. So he took it and went upstairs to go in her dreams too.


Zoya's dream.


"Please Asad, don't go! Don't take the children with you!" She sobbed as she knelt in front of another Asad.

"How can I trust you with our children's safety Zoya? First Rahman then the twins? How can you be so irresponsible! I'm done Zoya! We're over!"


Back to the real world.


Asad realized that his behaviour had truly affected his Zoya. He kissed her head and laid next to her. He watched her sleep and kissed her forehead once again. He felt her shivering under his touch and he hugged her tightly as she melt into the tight embrace.

"I will never leave you Zoya, never again."

At morning when he got up, she was gone. He showered Rahman then woke up Sanam and Seher. The 9 years old twins looked at him surprised.

"Where is ammi?" They asked simultaneously. They weren't really used to be woken up by Asad.

"Ammi is off, she'll be back soon, okay?" He said. They nodded and went to get ready for the day. Asad seemed to discover his family. This day he learnt that twice a week, as Seher was like her mother, she was allowed to eat pizza on breakfast. He learnt that Rahman was always fed by Zoya because he still loves his ammi's care. And what shocked him the most was that he didn't even knew what they loved to eat at breakfast. At this realization, he just wanted to give to himself a tight slap.

He drove his children to school then went back home to do the house chores. He now understood how rude he was towards Zoya and just expected her to be home soon.

On afternoon, he went to pick the children after going to the store to buy some items for the night's dinner.

"How was your day?" He asked and all the tree of them began talking simultaneously. Asad chuckled and after dropping the items home, he brought the children at his ammi's home for them to snack with her while he would prepare the dinner.

"Asad miyaan! It's been a long time since I saw you! Zoya said that you were so busy at work! A real workaholic!" Dilshad exclaimed and Asad smiled a little.

"Ammi, would you mind if I let the children with you for a while? I just need to prepare the dinner." Asad asked and Dilshad smiled.

"Listen, go pick clothes for them, as it's the week-end I'll take care of them tonight okay? It's been a long time since you and Zoya had spent some time together. I'll look at the kids." Dilshad exclaimed. Truth was that, even though they just live next door, their absence in her home was very tough to bare. And now that Najma was married, she felt very lonely.

"Are you sure ammi?" He asked and Dilshad nodded. So Asad said as he was told and he kissed his children goodbye before going back home.

He cooked and then set their room in a romantic ambiance, before going to shower. As he had some time left, he went to his ammi's home to kiss the kids good night before heading back home.

When Zoya entered the house later that night, she saw that it was dark. She went to the kids' rooms and found them empty. Her heart beats accelerated as she feared that her nightmare had gone true. She entered her room and she saw the well-decorated place. On the sofa was lying Asad, who felt asleep on waiting for Zoya to go back home. Zoya woke him up and when he got up, he rubbed his eyes cutely.

"Zoya? Oh sh*t! I wanted to surprise you!" He said going back to his senses. Zoya smiled sadly then hugged him tightly. She sat on his lap as he hugged her back. She cried on his shoulder and Asad kept muttering sweet nothing in her ear.

"I'm sorry." They said together.

"I'm sorry if I hurt you yesterday, I shouldn't have shouted at you the way I did. I always thought that being at home, you would be able to manage work and family easily but I was wrong. Being a mother is way more difficult than every work in the world. I'm sorry Zoya, please forgive me? When I discover that I was knowing anything about how the kids take their breakfast, when I saw they surprised look they had this morning when I woke them up, I realized how bad I am as a father. And as a hus.." She put her hand over his mouth.

"Don't. Don't say anything, please. You're not bad Asad. I'm the one who's bad. Because I didn't understand all the stress you go through but today when I went to work, I just wanted to go back home, to my own people. To you.." They hugged and then they ate. For the first time in ages, they fed each other. And then, as a good husband, Asad undressed her and pulled her to the bathroom where he washed her before she laid on the bed. She was laying on her front so he picked the rose oil. He took off the towel from her body, not even embarrassed by the stretch marks on her hips. They were slightly visible but she was still ashamed of them while Asad was astonished by the marks of her pregnancies.

He began massaging her back slowly and Zoya moaned. He showered her back with hot kisses. She turned around and they sealed their lips in a kiss.

Asad then moved to her ear and kissed her just behind her ear.

"It's been way too long that I felt you, way too long that I kissed you.. And it's been way too long that I loved you." He said while he kissed her full boobs, his favourite twins after their beloved daughters.

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He nibbled at her nipples. Zoya moaned and pushed him off of her.

"I want you naked right now Asad." She said and as he was getting naked, her fingers went to tease her wetness. She saw him looking at her and she smiled, stopping her movements.

"Please don't stop on my account.." He moaned as his pal came into life. He came near her and kneeling in front of her, he extended his fingers to her. She sucked his fingers, twirling her tongue around them and Asad groaned.

"You're so good at this Zoya!" He said and kissed her belly, sucking her skin from time to time.

She released his hand Asad smiled before positioning his head at her entrance.

"Someone seems a bit aroused!" He said and she glared.

"Stop it with the dirty talk and just make love to me!" As she wanted, he parted her lips with his thumbs and licked her, enjoying her taste. He added his finger to the game and Zoya moaned loudly.

"F**k Asad! That's so good!" Asad suckled at her nub and she lost it. She arched her back as she climaxed. Then he got up to kiss her. Zoya pushed her tongue in his mouth to taste herself on his lips. His throbbing tip was brushing her c*** and she parted her legs a bit more inviting him in.

"Please Asad!" She moaned and in one swift thrust, he entered her.

She threw her head back in agony and he sucked the flesh of her neck, while he withdrew himself from her wetness before plunging back in.

They were so lost in each other, their room was full with hot pants as they were becoming one once again. Zoya arched her back and climaxed around his shaft, milking him totally. Asad too climaxed and he nuzzled into her neck while they tried to calm their breathe.


"I love you Zoya." He said as he grabbed her tiny waist.

"I love you too Asad." She said and he kissed her forehead.

"I didn't love our argument Zoya.. I promise that from today, I'll try my best to be there for you and the children and we'll get through this life together yeah?"

"Always.." She answered kissing his neck while the drifted to sleep, only the moon was witnessing this promise of two lovers.

Edited by Asyawriting - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing end to an amazing story
Loved reading it to the core
Glad to know that asya lead a happy life with their kids
Their little argument just reminds that life is not always happily ever after, but if two people are together, they could pass any obstacle and lead a happy life just like asya
It was a treat to read this wonderful story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Loved it
They promised each other to be there for each other and childrens.
Thanks for pm

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