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Posted: 9 years ago
Love the update
The engagement was sweet
Aww he made her cry again
But he knows to pacify her
Really Asad u want to wait until u marry her again
Yea right
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful update
Loved reading it
Asya getting engaged again in front of the whole family was a treat to read
Then their date which was left incomplete but what followed next could definitely be compensated with it😉
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you! I think that they must get a chance to do it properly 😆 It's AsYa! They can't have a proper date! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Loved it
Liked family time when he proposed her & she accepted & kissed him
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Thank you 😃 I wanted to ad a bit of happiness in this story, finally!! 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you!! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Amazing part

Asya romance really hot
Thanks for pm
Pls pm me for next part
Continue soon

Thank you!
It's AsYa after all! They're always hooot! 😳
I'll do so, like always! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

The engagement was sweet
Aww he made her cry again
But he knows to pacify her
Really Asad u want to wait until u marry her again
Yea right
Cont soon

Thank you! 😉
Everything about them is sweet 😆
That was very bad of him to make her cry, but he sure knows how to make her smile 😆
It's Asad after all! It seems like he has some stick stuck in the *** which stop him from living life 🤣🤪
But Zoya wins every time!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

Awsm update.
Superb one

Thank you! Thank you!!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Amazing one

Continue soon

Thank you! I'll continue soon! Just give me time to finish the chapter! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

~13~

Zoya was fuming with anger in her room..Her old room.

"Api! That's unfair! We're already married for God's sake!" She cried out.

"Bas Zoya! The tradition wants that the bride-to-be can't meet the groom before the wedding!" Zeenat exclaimed and Zoya sat on the bed mumbling things.

"I want ice cream." She said out of nowhere. "My babies and I want ice cream!" She shouted now with anger. Ha mood swings! "Please bring me ice cream!!" She sobbed and Najma giggled before going to ask her bhaijaan Zoya's favourite ice cream during this period of the day.

"Zoya will only have strawberry ice cream!" He announced and Najma thanked him before going to accomplish her bhabhi's wish.

She came back with the strawberry ice cream and Zoya looked at it and began crying like a baby.

"Isn't it what you love?" Najma asked.

"But Asad uses to say 'here's an ice cream for the best mom of the world' with his smirk!" She sobbed and all women in the room giggled. True her cravings and mood swings weren't really appreciated but Zoya was so cute!

"Mrs Khan, please, be nice! I'm just next to you okay." They heard Asad's voice and Zoya got up from the bed and walked near the door.

"But I miss you Mr Khan.." She said.

"I miss you too Zoya, but tomorrow In Shaa Allah, we'll be together forever." He replied and Zoya smiled.

"Arrey Bhai! You're being flirty!" Najma, Dilshad, Zoya and Zeenat heard from outside. It was Ayaan. Dilshad, Zeenat and Najma left the room and was greeted with Asad's siblings along with Rashid, Sheereen and Humeira.

"Assalamu'alaikum Dilshad." Sheereen said.

"Wa'alaikum salam." Dilshad replied. Asad was near his mother, trying to control himself. He had agreed with himself that he had to stop being rude or else he could lose his Zoya and it was an unbearable thought.

"Mubarak ho Dilshad, Mubarak ho Asad!" Sheereen said and kissed Asad's cheek. "Thank you for letting us being there during your wedding."

"Shukriya Sheereen." Dilshad said and led Sheereen to Zoya's room. It was a real mess. She was eating pizza and drinking soda while she was looking baby girl outfits on the net.

"Zoya!" Dilshad exclaimed and Sheereen giggled at the scene when Zoya looked up with a slice of pizza waiting before her mouth.

"What's this mess!" Zeenat exclaimed.

"Please, don't shout at the bride-to-be!" Sheereen said and smiled at Zoya. "Thank you for convincing Asad to let his father come to your wedding. I know that they have been separated because of our marriage..But thank you for trying to fix their relationship." Sheereen said and Zoya smiled before running to the bathroom to throw up. Zeenat went behind her to held her hair out of the way. After emptying her stomach, Zoya washed her mouth and closed her eyes in annoyance.

"If I had known that I would throw up every slice of pizza, I would've had chosen another man than Mr Khan to marry. That's because of his hatred for pizzas that the babies don't want to eat it either!" She said pulling her hair to the side.

"Do you want to know something Zoya? When Zainab was pregnant with you, she had never eaten at least one slice of pizza but she had only eaten veggies so don't say such insanities." Zeenat replied and Zoya pouted.

She got out of the room and asked the people to leave as she was exhausted. When they left her, she sat on her bed with the ultrasounds of her babies.

"Tomorrow, we'll be a family." She drifted to sleep, too exhausted.


On the other hand, Asad was catching up with his siblings while Rashid, Dilshad and Sheereen were discussing with Zeenat. Dilshad was still broken on seeing his husband with someone else but she knew that it was time to go on..

Zoya woke up on the middle of the night and got outside to look at the moon.

"Ya Allah! How is it possible to be so happy?!" She asked. "Tomorrow I'll be Asad's wife in front of everyone! I'm so excited Allah miyaan! I'll finally be able to have the wedding of my dreams with my Api and Jiju by my side. Ammi, don't be sad, you'll always be here with me. I miss you so much ammi" Asad who couldn't sleep neither walked next to Zoya. They were separated by a wall.

He gripped her hand tightly as he heard her sobs. She felt relaxed by his touch.


"Don't cry, please." He whispered. She leaned against the wall, still holding his hand and inhaling softly.

They were both relaxed just taking the time to love each other silently. Zoya rubbed her belly and smiled. In few months she would be a mother..The mother of his babies.. Who would have known that six months after barging into his house, she would be carrying his children?

"I love you Mr Khan.." She said.

"I love you Mrs Khan." He said and she smiled. They stayed like this for 10 long minutes before going back inside.

Zoya lied on the mattress and smiled. Tomorrow she would be forever with her Akdu Ahmed Khan.


The morning after, Zoya woke up early and prepared for her long day. She pulled off her shirt and looked at herself in the mirror. Her belly was still thin. She pouted cutely.

"When will you show up?" She asked before putting her shirt back on and leaving her room to eat. She was going to entered the kitchen when she was stopped by Najma and Zenat.

"No way!" The said at the same time.

"Please Tamatar, Api!? I want pizza!"

"Zoya! Asad is in here." Zeenat said.

"Asad?! Please I want pizza!!" Zoya exclaimed, faking a sob. Asad who heard his wife got up and took pizza and a glass of orange juice for his wife. Then he gave it to Najma so that Zoya wouldn't see him.

"Let her have it Api." He said calmly and Zoya smiled.

"Thank you baby!" She exclaimed proudly before going back to her room.

Zoya was putting her bridal attire when she got a call.



"Not stressed?" It was her dear husband who was already dressed in his white sherwani suit.

"No." She said.

"Then why are you crying?" He asked and she wiped her tears away.

"How do you know?"

"Why are you crying Zoe?" He asked.

"Because I'm happy!" She said and he chuckled.

"Stop romancing and come with me." Zoya heard Rashid's voice.

"Be nice." She whispered to Asad.

"I promise." He said.

He turned to his father and faked a smile.

"I'm not keeping a relationship for you. It's for Zoya. She is the one who want you to be here. But I'm happy that you kept your promise, twenty years ago when you promise to ammi that you'll receive your bahu together."He said and left to the wedding ceremony. He sat on his seat and waited Zoya to come along with his mother, sister and her sister. Her jiju had even made the impossible to be able to attend the ceremony too.

"Kya aapko yeh nikah qubool hai?" The Qazi asked.

"Qubool hai." He said smiling at her.

"Kya aapko yeh nikah qubool hai?" He asked.

"Qubool hai." Zoya replied blushing furiously.


They were celebrating the now official wedding when the lights switched off and only one spot was still lighted. Najma appeared and began her speech.

"In a life, there is only one true love. Bhaijaan and bhabhi had the chance to find each other. I hope you'll be forever together. One, two, three..Music!"

Nikhat and Nuzrat joined Najma on stage and they began dancing on 'Manwa Laage'. Asad's eyes watered on seeing his sisters dancing together.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hIjutjGHTng


Then Ayaan joined them and they danced together.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i13IpBhEM0M

"Thank you for taming the lion Mona bhabhi!" Ayaan said and Asad chuckled. At the end of the party, Zoya entered Asad's room first like a newly wedded girl along with Dilshad, Zeenat and Najma and she sat on the bed.

"Now that one of my grandchildren is on the way, I want more of them Zoya!" Dilshad teased and Zoya blushed while Zeenat smiled and Najma blushed too.

"Ji Phuphi." Zoya answered shyly.

"Phuphi??!" The three of them shouted simultaneously and Zoya held her chest in fear.

"Zoya, now Dilshad is your ammi! If you call her phuphi once again, I'll have to be angry at you." Zeenat said pouting.

"I'm sorry ammi." Zoya rectified and Dilshad smiled before engulfing her into a big hug then she got up to leave along with Najma and Zeenat.


Asad entered the room minutes after and smiled on seeing his Zoya. He sat on the bed next to her and held her hand.

"No I'm free to love you completely Zoya." He said before pulling off the veil. He planted a chaste kiss on her lips and she smiled during the kiss. This kiss led to another one and it went on and on until they consummated their love once again.

~14~

Edited by Perriewinkle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute update dear!!

Loved it!!

Thanks for the pm!! 😃

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