Valentine's day Asya, Sahil, Sehaan, Raya and Ayra..

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It's like the worst OS I've written but well.. today we're celebrating love but also friendship!


You raise me up, special valentine's day OS.


She was crying on the ground as they were making fun of her. Seher wanted to hide herself in a giant hole but unfortunately she couldn't.

"Look at you! You can't even eat properly!" Saffiyah the leader of the gang said as she poured tomato sauce on her dress, the dress her badi ammi had gifted to her for her good behavior. Seher sobbed as her white dress was now red. They tugged at her hair and her sobbed increased, it was her pregnant mum who had styled her hair..

"Leave her alone!" A seven years old boy said pushing the girls off of Seher. Being only six she was seeing Rehaan as her hero. The girls left and Rehaan raise her up and led her to the washroom where he cleaned her dress with some product.

"Isn't it forbidden to bring those things at school?" Seher asked.

"I know but ammi knows that I'm eating like a pig so she gave me those things to clean myself if I stain my clothes." After he cleaned her dress, he styled her hair like it was before.

"How do you know styling hair?" She asked.

"Haaya use to ask me to do so." He blushed.

"Thank you Rehaan." Seher said and kissed his cheek.

"Seher you have to denounce them!" Rehaan said and Seher look at him hesitantly. She was frightened to the core because of them!


Sanam was chewing on her cheek stressed. Aahil came next to her and kissed her cheek.

"Kya hua Sanam?" He ask while eating some sandwich made by his mother. Sanam just stayed quiet.

"Sanam please,tell me!" He said and then she started crying.

"It's just that..I was doing an exam and there was this guy Anwar.. He started looking at my answers and I told him to stop and he didn't want to so I punched him on the face and now the headmaster want to see ammi and abbu ASAP!" She explained. Aahil knew Asad and Zoya very well as he was Sanam's best friend since they were in the kindergarten and they were very strict about their daughters' behavior so he understood her distress however she had to tell it to her parents..

"Hey, don't cry! I know you're scared but I'm sure if your parents know why you punched Anwar then they will be nicer and they will understand you for sure!" Sanam hugged him then she went to wait for her parents in front of the gate.


Haaya was doing some painting when a little boy poured water on her painting! She looked at him accusingly while he was making fun of her with his friends.

"Why did you do this?" Her best friend Rahat said from behind. He was 7 just like Haaya but that didn't stop him from defending her even though the boy and his friends were three years older than him!

"Look what we have there Rohit, her little lover Rahat! What did you say Mr. Dwarf!" A boy said.

"I'm not a dwarf!" Rahat said and hit him. The boy's friends hit Rahat and left when they heard the teacher coming. Haaya knelt in front of him and hugged him.

'He's crazy!' She thought and helped him to go to the nurse.

Zoya was tired, her belly was huge and she felt as if she was like whale! Plus she had to go to her daughters' school because one of them did a bad thing! On top of everything, she was with Asad and the headmaster, Mrs Lane was drooling over him!

"Zoe, are you okay?" Asad asked while he was parked in front of the school.

"Yes! I'm completely fine." She lied. She got out of the car and walked to the gate where she saw Sanam. Asad walked behind her.

"Tell me Sanam, what did you do this time?" Asad asked.

"It's not my fault abbu! He was looking at my answers and he didn't want to stop!" She sobbed. Zoya sighed. Her daughters were always in these types of problems! They went to the headmaster and Zoya sat in front of the desk annoyed by this.

"Mr Khan, you may know that in my school, this type of behavior isn't accepted right." She said and Zoya looked at her dramatically. She was always doing it, talking to Asad and watching him.

"You may know that cheating isn't accepted as well.." Zoya mumbled. And Asad glared at her. "What did I say Jaan! Am I wrong? This boy was cheating and she punched him because she didn't want him to see her answers and he didn't want to listen..Is that true or wrong?" Zoya said.

"You're right Mrs Khan but.." The headmaster said but Asad cut her off.

"But what? You're going to sentence a girl who did this to prevent some cheating and not a cheater?" He asked and the headmaster was ashamed.

"You may know that we don't understand your behavior Miss Lane, so we're going now and we wish that someday you will call us for a real problem." Zoya said and left with her husband. She couldn't stand this woman!


As they were leaving, Seher saw them and ran towards them with Rehaan.

"Seher! Rehaan!" Zoya said and she saw the red stain on her daughter's dress.

"Seher! Why are you like this!" Asad enquired.

"Asad uncle.." Rehaan told the story to Asad and Zoya and they looked at Seher disappointed.

"Why didn't you say anything?" Zoya asked rubbing her daughter's cheek.

"I was scared ammi!" Seher said and Zoya hugged her.

"They won't harm you anymore, okay?" Zoya said and kissed her forehead.


13th of February.

Asad and the boys were shopping for the Valentine's day. Ayaan was very worried as it was his first Valentine's day with Humeira. Aahil, Rehaan and Rahat didn't know what to offer to Sanam, Seher and Haaya.

"Asad uncle, maybe we should gift them a necklace!" Rehaan said and Ayaan and the other boys nodded.

"You will go to buy the jewelery of your choice with Ayaan, I have to find something else. You know how auntie Zoya can be, right!" Asad said and Ayaan chuckled while Asad left.


Zoya was pacing around the room, Haaya, her daughters and Humeira had already found a gift for the boys but she couldn't find anything! Najma on the other hand had bought a gift for Rehaan and Haaya. It has been 6 years that she was a widow. Rehaan came in her life unexpectedly. Actually, Imran had a double life. He was married to her and to another woman named Tanveer. Both of them died in a car crash leaving Rehaan who was a bit older than Haaya by himself. Najma couldn't hate Rehaan because he was innocent, she had accepted him as her child and had tried to not prefer Haaya over him.

Zoya look at all around the mall then she saw something that attracted her straight away.

"That's what I'm gonna buy to you Jaan.." She thought.


14th of February.

The girls were preparing some meal whil Asad was cooking the meat outside with the boys. It was their traditional Valentine's brunch. When everyone was sitting around the table, they decided to exchange their gifts.

Rehaan had given to Seher a beautiful necklace of pearls and he gave to Najma a teddy bear hugging a heart. On the other hand, Seher offered him a necklace with the half of a heart. He looked at her quizzically. And she showed him the other half which was hanging on her necklace.

"This is because will always be together!" She said and Najma smiled at their cuteness.


During this time, Haaya had offered to Rahat a painting. It was the one she was making when he had saved her from the boys days ago.

"Thank you Haaya." He said shyly with signs before giving her a gift. It was a lucky charm bracelet and Haaya hugged him. It was so beautiful!

Sanam had her eyes closed because Aahil asked her to do so. When he told her to open her eyes, her mouth curved into the cutest smile ever! He had brought her a cute teddy bear looking like the one Rehaan offered to Najma but it was written "For the best bestfriend ever!" on the heart.

"Thank you Aahil that's the best gift I've ever had! But.. I bought you the same thing.." She said giving him the teddy bear.

"It doesn't matter yaar! I love it!" He exclaimed smiling widely.


Humeira gave the gift to Ayaan, looking at him, waiting for him to discover his gift.

"Humeira! That's beautiful!" He said, taking the watch in the box. It was a silver and gold Versace watch. Humeira opened her gift and she was mesmerized by the beautiful set of jeweleries. It was their first Valentine's day together and they were already expecting the next ones!


Zoya was waiting for Asad to give her the present he bought. On the other hand, she had decided to give him a 3D heart in a box made of glass and their names were engraved in it. It was far beyond the gift Asad expected and it was beautiful! Asad took her hand and they entered the house. He covered her eyes and placed a soft kiss on her neck.

"You may know that having sex isn't a gift right?" Zoya said chuckling and Asad smirked.

"Just shut up and follow me." They went to their room and Asad took papers. Zoya read them and covered her mouth with happiness.

"You bought the house!" She said as she thought about the house were they confessed their feelings for the first time.

"This isn't your only gift Zoya.." He said and offered her a ring. It was a beautiful ring for their tenth Valentine's day together.

Then they went to join their family to enjoy just the fact of being together..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful os dear
Especially the small sahil, sehan and raya were very cute
Loved reading it
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww it was so cute
All the couples together
I loved it
Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww
this was absolutely beautiful
All the little ones too
Surprise Asad allowed his daughters to have boys as friends😆
Love Asad gift to zoya and her comment to cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful os dear

Especially the small sahil, sehan and raya were very cute
Loved reading it
Thanks for the pm 😊

Thank you! they're so cute! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie15

Aww it was so cute
All the couples together
I loved it
Awesome

Thank you! Yup, they're together for the Valentine's day ^^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Aww

this was absolutely beautiful
All the little ones too
Surprise Asad allowed his daughters to have boys as friends😆
Love Asad gift to zoya and her comment to cute

Thank you! He let them because the boys are a part of his family 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was indeed so so beautiful
Very well written
Ps. Happy Valentine's Day
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajanshul

It was indeed so so beautiful

Very well written
Ps. Happy Valentine's Day

Thank you so so much 😆 Happy Valentine's day to you too 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I can't stop smiling!!!😃
This os was SOOO CUTE!!!!!
And Seher's heart necklace for Rehan was so sweet!!
And Asad bought the house!! There couldn't have been a better ending than that!!
Awesome!😊

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