ASYA FF:REVENGE MARRIAGE - Page 8

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Glad to see u back dear
Read the story all over again
Waiting for next part soon
Do PM me when u update
Thanks

hey m so glad to hear from my old readers...trust me it feels good...I've missed u guys a lot ...surely V ll pm u

Originally posted by: cutie15

Its feels so good to see you hear
And more good to know that you'll be completing you stories..:)
I really loved this story..
Thanks for posting it again and deciding to complete it
The last line of the last part where zoya almost gave a hint to asad that she does loves him sounds so interesting
I'm so excited to read it further
Pls do pm me if possible
Thank you..:)

hey cutie 15...last time I'd seen u were a senior member...Congo for becoming a goldie 😳
thanku. ..zoya n her love for pizza 😆
sure to pm 😳

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

spam mera karm he lol
and stalk mera dharm...wese stalk hi to kiya he tujhe
pm karna tha na...anyway
ek aur cheez ye batani thi ki long back i read ek os naam to mai bhul gai sorry
but end me asad goes to pharmacy for buying a condom
and the pharmacist turns out to be zoya's dad 🤣
that was something really
great thought lol
i loved it
achaa iske pehle tu mujhe laat maarke yaha se nikaale me khud bhaagti hu
love you 🤗

sue ki bacchi itne zyaada filmy dialogues 😆
omg sue u remember abt that os..I myself had forgotten abt that os 😆
I forgot the name sue 😆 it was a joke I had read n had turned it into an os 😛

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

SARA!!! 🤗
i just...love you so much 🤗
mwuaah to u too ❤️
u have no idea how i screamed in delight kal raat when i was bored
i
had no books to study mai bahaar hu and neend aayi nahi so i was
wandering over the forum to catch a good story...but when i saw the
thread i literaaly have screamed...my cheeks are already hurting as i
type this away 😆 i am smiling so much




to pehle to a big thanku for reposting 🤗
i am actually very happy to finally have a say somewhere lol
i have always found people telling me to read the gangster girl and this story
so finally i read and how i love it...though a moment of truth i love marked by him the most hehe wese compare nahi kiya jaa sakta he in dono stories ko
dono alag he and apni jagah best hai...
so kal raat from 12 to 4 am i read all 14 parts...excuse the time 😆
i took breaks to drink water...to hide my cell whenever someone walked in to check on me...lol or to just cry and wipe my tears ...
the most hurtful ever was when asad said

i have feelings too" ah...my heart was already with him all the time...and when he for the first time said his frustration in words before zoya's confused unfinished thoughts and feelings...my heart just broke for him...i know kuch zyada hi character me ghus kar review kar ri hu...but thats me...i read playing asad and i read playing everyone with expressions...lol u shud be seeing me read ur updates though...poora character me ghus ke padhti hu...just so u write so effectively
and seriously m saying from all my heart
ur the best writer on this forum
with best knowledge of launguage and i just love ur writing with so much adjectives to present it better
and the expression u use...the aure with which you write...
i think i've already told you u remind me of stephen but is story me itna ni laga uske jesa jitna marked by him me laga
but the launguage goes perfect i know this and i learn many things frm you...❤️
you know there's this problem with me of imagining what ever i read...and i kinda suffer frm hysteria as i once start laughing i just can't stop so when i read
that octopus wala though hahhaaa 🤣 i swear i would have woken my parents i had to muffle my hysterical laughs under the blanket...🤣
and i thought u would have written zoya had 8 arms to wipe the sauce as i read that midway just imagining her with 8 arms i was laughing and somehow controling i read further to read she wished she had 8 arms to smack asad 🤣
that broke my self control seriously🤣 i had to run to the washroom oh god...that was one bad timing haha i laways get these laughter attacks ...y do i imagine 😆 silly me
so thats a big review already 😆
and i haven't still started on reviewing part by part haha
don't worry zada nahi bolungi yaar
bichari u my useless blabber u wud have to read
ok so in short i really love ur writing always and i loved this story too
though i felt at sometimes ki yaar zoya bas kar aur na tadpa haha
the way u started i was like no way sara can make asad that rcklessly to force can she...glad he didn't proceed
and the guilt thruout the 14 parts...imraan i don't get still u have 3 more parts right...lets see
and nzma's love after all that
asad and nzma talking i always loved to read
zoya fighting the feelings and asad not giving up...ah i love asad
and elena is strong and made zoya see the right
here i go again...i think i could go on and on what i felt reading...
but i can do that when the story finishes right 🤣
don't wry nahi bolungi zyada haha
making up for the lost time i guess 😆 did i?
ohk nd yes nzma did lie to her about the riot ...well i love smirking asad all thruout the parts when he didn't gave up on zoya...
zoya's audacity and witty side me likey...
i think i need to shut up now... 🤣
a hug 🤗

o my god sue..itna cutie comment...firstly I like the graphic of salman n govinda...I mean look at salman expressions...its hilarious 😆 itne khushi ye comment padhkar mujhe aaj tak nahi huvi 😆
really ppl tell u to read my boring fics 😲 😆 ..
u know sue my first fav fix is undoubtedly marked by him-I love the diff shades of asads character plus their love story is super cute
second fav is "My forgotten husband"-It's a difficult love story...I love how their love was never easy..third gangster girl..Asad is too intense for my liking,but nevertheless I love the theme of the story
fourth fav is Mr dominating n miss ziddi cos it was my first story on this forum plus I loved the arrogant n stubborn combo
then I like pretend marriage cos asad is super cute in that..I mean somewhat original to the character of the showshow
fifth fav is revenge marriage ...cos I don't like asad neither zoya cos too much negativity revolving around them
that sixth is -moving on os
then next is an os I wrote on another couple-sidma
then last is second love cos-scrunching nose...I don't particularly like fallig in luv for second time concepts
n then there is married to devil also ...OKAY -m gonna shut up now...I have given quiet a big list 😆

sue ur too sweet with ur words..but like I said I consider myself average 😳 n Stephenie Meyer I luv...It took me a solid 2 years to get over his obsession...n did u notice I had used that villian twirling a moustache dialogue in marked by him 😛

oh my god. .ur not gonna believe this I too have that terrible habit of laughing specially ar wrong tomings ..u know when everyone are havin a serious conversation...I M in my old world I recall my past things n start guffawing loudly ..n my brother looks at me from the corner of his eye,muttering 'm crazy' 😆

that octopus line totally cracked me up...zoya cleaning sauce with 8 hands 😆

what I love in this story is sibling love...Asad n najma ⭐️


thankuuu sye for such a beautiful review...will cherish it for years to come 😳

Originally posted by: BelleAme

sue ki bacchi itne zyaada filmy dialogues 😆
omg sue u remember abt that os..I myself had forgotten abt that os 😆
I forgot the name sue 😆 it was a joke I had read n had turned it into an os 😛

hehe ...woh ..actually 🤣
tere avtaar me ksg ko dekh ke filmyness aagai😆
lol khud ka likha hua os bhool gai tu 😆 gud going 😆
haan mene bohat pehle padha tha...kya kool hai hum ka poster dekha to yaad aya 🤣
joke se poora os bana dala lol badiya 😆

Originally posted by: BelleAme

o my god sue..itna cutie comment...firstly I like the graphic of salman n govinda...I mean look at salman expressions...its hilarious 😆 itne khushi ye comment padhkar mujhe aaj tak nahi huvi 😆
really ppl tell u to read my boring fics 😲 😆 ..
u know sue my first fav fix is undoubtedly marked by him-I love the diff shades of asads character plus their love story is super cute
second fav is "My forgotten husband"-It's a difficult love story...I love how their love was never easy..third gangster girl..Asad is too intense for my liking,but nevertheless I love the theme of the story
fourth fav is Mr dominating n miss ziddi cos it was my first story on this forum plus I loved the arrogant n stubborn combo
then I like pretend marriage cos asad is super cute in that..I mean somewhat original to the character of the showshow
fifth fav is revenge marriage ...cos I don't like asad neither zoya cos too much negativity revolving around them
that sixth is -moving on os
then next is an os I wrote on another couple-sidma
then last is second love cos-scrunching nose...I don't particularly like fallig in luv for second time concepts
n then there is married to devil also ...OKAY -m gonna shut up now...I have given quiet a big list 😆

sue ur too sweet with ur words..but like I said I consider myself average 😳 n Stephenie Meyer I luv...It took me a solid 2 years to get over his obsession...n did u notice I had used that villian twirling a moustache dialogue in marked by him 😛

oh my god. .ur not gonna believe this I too have that terrible habit of laughing specially ar wrong tomings ..u know when everyone are havin a serious conversation...I M in my old world I recall my past things n start guffawing loudly ..n my brother looks at me from the corner of his eye,muttering 'm crazy' 😆

that octopus line totally cracked me up...zoya cleaning sauce with 8 hands 😆

what I love in this story is sibling love...Asad n najma ⭐️


thankuuu sye for such a beautiful review...will cherish it for years to come 😳

pehli baat to tune itna sab likha mere comment reply me aww ❤️
hahaah exctly i loved salmaan thruout the movie...apna asad kya kam expressions deta tha lol 😆
yes people tell me to read ur so interesting stories...dare call them boring😡 itna achaa likhti he thoda boast kar liya kar koi burai ni he usme😆😆 mai agar teri jesi itni achi writer hoti to i would have been like

🤣
baap re itni lambi list...ye sb kab likh liya??😳
abhi bhi posted hai ye saari stories to links pm kardena yar😆😆
haan naam ye he pretend marriage meko kisine suggest ki thi...shayad revenge marriage nahi pretend marriage padhne ka bola tha😆😆
don't get me started on marked by him...puhleeezzz...mai yaha bolti chali jaaungi...jo ki mai bolungi hi sahi but marked by him waale thread pe jab aap wo ghode waale kiss se aage badhaengi story😆😆 i love asad in that,...and so love kitten
baki mene kuch padha nahi he...😆 aap links dene ki kripa karen😉😃😳
but meko teri pehli story padhni he...kuch seekhna milega coz there i'll watch u grow as a writer update by update...mr. dominating 😃😃
hehe haan revenge marriage me laga na meko like i said man kar ra tha bolne ka ki bas bohat hua...😆😆 but fir bhi i love the story so much😳😳 maza aya padhne me...jab zoya throwbacks at asad ki sab natak tha...par asad ka state dekh ke dukh bhi hua

sidma?? did u ever write on AR too??
oh i need all the links IN MY INBOX!!!!😳⭐️
hahhaa wo villian wala punch hi to mujhe stephen ki yaad dilaya tha...lol i think u mentioned ur 2 year obsession on that thread ...but seriously IF ki stephenie tu hai😃😃😃
yaha uske level tak koi ni pta he meko but...ur close⭐️ baki to close bhi ni he ye soch ke khush hoja😉😉
okay i need to copy paste something 🤣

oh my god. .ur not gonna believe this I too have that terrible habit of laughing specially ar wrong tomings ..u know when everyone are havin a serious conversation...I M in my old world I recall my past things n start guffawing loudly ..n my brother looks at me from the corner of his eye,muttering 'm crazy' 😆

this is exactly what happens u knw...at first when i used to start my maniacy my mom and brother used to look at me asking what is wrong with me...but as the time passed i still am not able to get over from my laughing attacks and now when i start doing that my maa and bhaiyaa shake their heads saying 'ye to iska roz ka he' 🤣

no no not zoya cleaning sauce with 8 hands...u wrote zoya wished she had 8 hands to just smack asad 🤣 🤣 🤣
yes asma are really very special here...awww years to come lol
wait up wait up untill u give me more links to ur works i'll drop more cherishable comments😉😉

🤗

☺️

keep posting...❤️

Originally posted by: BelleAme

hey 😳

thanku...shall post gangster girl too

Really... 😊
Thku sooo much..
Will b waitng... 😳

I dont understand this. I am damn pissed off and angry that, you, Bells d, havent sent me a single message abut your updates. what, why, how. *cries* Anyhow, they were insane. Keep posting. i there is another story of yours, Gngsterl girl. bpost that also. Love!

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hehe ...woh ..actually 🤣
tere avtaar me ksg ko dekh ke filmyness aagai😆
lol khud ka likha hua os bhool gai tu 😆 gud going 😆
haan mene bohat pehle padha tha...kya kool hai hum ka poster dekha to yaad aya 🤣
joke se poora os bana dala lol badiya 😆

😆 mera poster change karti hun mein.Rasmalai ne banaya tha 😳..I want something diff... kya kool haj hum*scrunching nose* 😆
mujhe tumhara dp mast lagging...dimple+raanjaana..haaye