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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 15 bhi done dona done
Super duper fantastic fabulous awesome update...
Sweetness filled chapter bhaijaan...
I enjoyed very very very much...
Firstly asya's romantic moments ..they were very nice...
Then to make story more tasty, mix of some emotions...I mean about Rania's letter..😳
She hand over everything to Asad...Wow she always admired and respected him...
It's very difficult for him to sit in a chair which is only belonged to his eldest sister...
Finally handover that company to another person..great..
Yeah..his decision about starting an organisation for oppressed woman was amazing... starting of sobiya ruqsar philanthropy organisation shows how much he loves and respects Tania..very good decision...
Wow...Asad's surprise
I guessed from his behaviour that he is planned something...
He arranged admission for her...such a loving and caring hubby...
Ya Allah...Alisha's decision made me worried...when heard
about her story felt bad for her...Zoya made her to believe in herself...👏
Remaining chat sessions were also very nice...
Wow...Asad opened his company👏 And everyone asked Zoya to inaugurate...She is such a lucky girl to get a in laws like them..
Areh wah...Again surprise..He opened a boutique for her...
Hihi...Najma's reading session...enjoyed it...
Wowwwieee...Finally Zoya and Alisha met each other...
That was an amazing surprise...
Asad made her wish come true...
Very emotional come happy union..
Her gift was also superb...for mrs. Fangurl...
Asad helped somuch Alisha...Wow...Alisha in London...What Zoya want other than this...
Asad made her each and everywish come true...He is such an amazing hubby darling...
Zoya is very lucky to have him...
superb dialogues atlast with the name of the story...
really loved this chapter ..
This chappy made me smile somuch bhaijaan...ur mission accomplished through this story too lol..
Urs
Little cute naughty barfi sista...
Edited by binuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

Hellooo shelloo monster bhaijaan...

hello barfi behna!!
Meeting u in IF after a long time...hihi... lol after a long time .. 😆
Finally ur little cute naughty Barfi sista read part 14... hehe yippoe..
So let us go to comment..hihi... yup yup..
Okay...coming to the update it was superb as usual... wowee thankoos so much barfi sista!😳
Highly emotional...😭 aww.. plz ro mat.. sorry for tears..
Rania's past was very sad...bechari... yup it was indeed..
Like Zoya me too misunderstood her... hehe.. as planned.. usmein sad mat ho.. story hai.. real nahi..
She experienced lot in her life...since her childhood she was suffering.. what she did deserve to get a life like that hmm yes she was suffering all her life..hmm few ppl live a bad life on heart and a better in hereafter.. she is someone like that..
That man😡😡😡 He gave rania false hopes and totally destroyed her..😡😡 yes.. but in the end Rania mistakenly killed him .. probably.. *I forgot lol.. steps se gir kar that man died I guess.. or did I missed?😆* but yes that man needed a better punishment..
Thank God..Finally she escaped from there and got a job in pub... yup thank god but that was not good for her .. except the old man took her..
Eventhough he is very old,he cared rania alot and helped her come out of the world of misery...yes.. he wanted to live his life.. at that stage the old man realised that he wasted his life earning he wanted someone to spend it .. but finding and listening rania he got married with her to save her..
Oh hoo...initially rania's intension was not good...yup.. kyunke asad se kisi ko bhi pyaar ho sakta hai.. But later she realised Asad's love towards Zoya and became a wonderful sis for him...yes.. her love was not as pure as zoya's in comparison and she quit her evil plans.. loved it.. hmm glad you loved it.. Asad was also a perfect brother like my bhaijaan...hihi... aww thankoos.. speechless.😆
Loved the way he cared her...At the time When she depressed & when he realised she is not treating her disease... yes it was good.. asad proved a better bro ..
Loved the bro-sis bond... hehe glad you loved it..
Rania killed that Jeff too... because she knew zoya may get in danger after her death as Jeff was her bodyguard kind of pet.. she killed it.. I thought she is just destroying that dress bcoz she don't like it...never thought Jeff is in it... hmm she went upstairs to secretly kill jeff and pack it in her dress to burn it..
Sleeping pill secret also came out... yes.. She was suffering from major disease and finally she escaped from the world which only gave lot of pain to her... yes...
I'm glad she met Asad...bcoz of that only she experienced little happiness.. yes it was the good thing of her life..
Rania's death can't bearable for Zoya... yes true.. more than asad zoya was affected... once she experienced a similiar situation like this... her sis.. This only deepened her cut in heart...💔 yup sadly..
Finally asya came out of that tragic incident... yup slowly and as the time passed..
Wow...first Anniversary. ..patha nahi how a year passed 😆 hehe.. rania came into their life after 3 months hehe.. and she died when it was almost 10 months to their marriage ... and then it took 2 months to recover from her grief.. so an year passed.. hehe
Finally all barriers are broken.. yup.. bcoz no issues of trust..
Everything is going smoothly...yup
Poems were awesome...thankkos for that..
BhaIjaan..I hope nothing happened to Alisha in next chapter... hehe yup yup..
Gonna read next chappy...
hmm and me next comment hehe..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

Chapter 15 bhi done dona done

yippie yippie dooo!!😆
Super duper fantastic fabulous awesome update... aww really thankoos so much barfi sista!
Sweetness filled chapter bhaijaan... hmm yup .. last chapter hai afterall..
I enjoyed very very very much... so glad you enjoyed it..
Firstly asya's romantic moments ..they were very nice... hehe yep..
Then to make story more tasty, mix of some emotions...I mean about Rania's letter..😳 hehe yup.. the left over part (scene) of rania's character.. hehe..
She hand over everything to Asad...yes Wow she always admired and respected him... yes.. because she was not educated .. so she respected asad..
It's very difficult for him to sit in a chair which is only belonged to his eldest sister... yes.. he couldnt ...
Finally handover that company to another person..great.. hmm.. not handover but .. he sold rania's shares to public and with that money he established the organisation..
Yeah..his decision about starting an organisation for oppressed woman was amazing..yes it was.. starting of sobiya ruqsar philanthropy organisation shows how much he loves and respects rania.. yes.. he respected her heartly.. very good decision...yup..
Wow...Asad's surprise hehe.
I guessed from his behaviour that he is planned something... yes plan plan hehe..
He arranged admission for her...such a loving and caring hubby... hmm for him his wife's happiness is all..
Ya Allah...Alisha's decision made me worried...when heard hww hww.. just something chatpata! lol..
about her story felt bad for her.. yup it was sad.. but true in some case.. as someone who fails goes from the tricks and trials of her family or close ones.. it was unfortunate... .Zoya made her to believe in herself...👏 yes as always... hehe..
Remaining chat sessions were also very nice... thankoss
Wow...Asad opened his company👏 yup yup finally hehe... And everyone asked Zoya to inaugurate... yup becoz she is lucky for all.. She is such a lucky girl to get a in laws like them.. yup indeed..
Areh wah...Again surprise..He opened a boutique for her... hmm not boutique but only a space for her boutique.. he purchased the place , zoya set it up by herself..
Hihi...Najma's reading session...enjoyed it... reading?? teasing? well it was nice..
Wowwwieee...Finally Zoya and Alisha met each other...yup finally..
That was an amazing surprise...hehe yes after all its the end of the story..
Asad made her wish come true...yes.. becoz she was worried about alisha
Very emotional come happy union.. yup it was .. lol..
Her gift was also superb...for mrs. Fangurl... hehe yes.. alisha had bought memories back to her life...
Asad helped somuch Alisha..yup just to make his wife happy.. .Wow...Alisha in London...yup finally... What Zoya want other than this... hehe right..
Asad made her each and everywish come true... yup so good right.. He is such an amazing hubby darling... indeed true..
Zoya is very lucky to have him... hehe yes lucky gal..
superb dialogues atlast with the name of the story... hehe yes.. my style of ending the story..
really loved this chapter .. glad you loved it..
This chappy made me smile somuch bhaijaan... wow really so happyyy!! ur mission accomplished through this story too lol.. wow.. 😎 great.!!
Urs
Little cute naughty barfi sista...


urs monster bhaijaan..
Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
No...no...I didn't cry today...hihi...but that was really very emotional part..
Story h...but this is very heart touching...
Yeah...Everyone are not getting good life...Rania is just like one of them...
Haha...Yeah..That man died...uindirectly mentioned it... I noticed it...
Yeah..That old man took a good decision...But again unluckiness ruledover her...
Haha.....yup.. kyunke asad se kisi ko bhi pyaar ho sakta hai...
No doubt about it...he is such an amazing human being. .
Wow...Rania killed Jeff for Zoya...I really liked Rania in this chapter... u very beautifully portrayed her character...
Ohhh bhaiii...I know how a year passed...I said just like that lol..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MNsTrous


urs monster bhaijaan..



U r welcome bhaijaan😛
So...Rania's chapter is completely closed...
Oh...he sold it...I forget that...hihi..
About Alisha... That is indeed true... very unfortunate to experience a situation like that...
Oh...hoo...Asad bought space for her boutique...my second mistake lol...
I typed teasing...now understood why it turned to reading...
These 3 words in my keyboard naa...Those cheated me...
I meant none other than my autoprediction keyboard...u very well know about it naa...same mistakes are repeating😆
Wow...Asad did that to ease her worry...perfect...
I loved ur style of ending..
Waiting for epilogue...But health comes first...
So take care...
Urs
Barfi behena
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

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No...no...I didn't cry today... Hmm that's good. hihi...but that was really very emotional part..Yup its was emotional.
Story h...but this is very heart touching...yes I wanted the whole story to be heart touching.
Yeah...Everyone are not getting good life...Rania is just like one of them...Yup.. The many facets of a life's trials. One among them came into Rania's basket.
Haha...Yeah..That man died...uindirectly mentioned it... I noticed it...Yup ..Yup ..abbi yaad aaya.. Rania left being scared right? Lol my short memory prob.
Yeah..That old man took a good decision...But again unluckiness ruledover her...Yup sadly.
Haha.....yup.. kyunke asad se kisi ko bhi pyaar ho sakta hai...
No doubt about it...
Hehe absolutely.
he is such an amazing human being. .Yup agree. That's why Zoya is his fangurl.
Wow...Rania killed Jeff for Zoya...
Yup.. She wanted Zoya and asad to be safe because when the pet finds his master dead he will go mad and can do. Anything. So that's why Rania finished him.
I really liked Rania in this chapter... u very beautifully portrayed her character...Hmm yup.. I told everybody in the beginning of her character that ppl will hate her but then later in love her.
Ohhh bhaiii...I know how a year passed...I said just like that lol..Hehe yes.. Well I have written and calculated the complete Timeline before mentioning.. And that's why wasted two months in grief of Rania to complete 1 year. 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu



U r welcome bhaijaan😛 its my pleasure lol.
So...Rania's chapter is completely closed...Yup but her mention will be till the end. 😉
Oh...he sold it...I forget that...hihi..Hehe Yup.
About Alisha... That is indeed true... very unfortunate to experience a situation like that...yes.. Sadly.
Oh...hoo...Asad bought space for her boutique...my second mistake lol...heh yes but it's fine.. Doesn't matter.
I typed teasing...now understood why it turned to reading...
These 3 words in my keyboard naa...Those cheated me...
I meant none other than my autoprediction keyboard.
Yup I know Hehe.
..u very well know about it naa...same mistakes are repeating😆
Yup doesn't. Matter.


Wow...Asad did that to ease her worry...perfect...Yup ..:))
I loved ur style of ending..Thankoos..
Waiting for epilogue epilogue may probably get delayed by a day or two. Will release on 16 instead. I think.. Along with extra scenes which is mostly an extension of the epilogue but not related to the prime characters of the story that is focused on the lives of the other characters. .But health comes first...Yup yup m taking care.. Don't worry.
So take care...Yup yup too Behna.
Urs
Barfi behena


Urs monster bhaijaan

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Posted: 9 years ago
I will probably be delaying epilogue release.
It may instead release on 16 as I have just begun writing and finally got into the right mood.

But rejoice.. You will get extra scenes along with it..

Get ready for Epilogue and Extra scenes releasing same day.

Most probably on 16 but not later than 20.

Trying my best to end it beautifully and completely.

-MNsTrous
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Posted: 9 years ago



Ur mission accomplished..Whole story was heart touching👏
Yup...Rania left being scared...hihi...
Then she did a good thing by killing Jeff... She really cared for Asad and zoya...👏
Rania's character became exactly as u said...no doubt...
Haha...perfect time management 😆





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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MNsTrous


Urs monster bhaijaan

So Rania's chapter is not completely closed...Ofcourse Asya will remember her...Yeah...She also asked something from then naa...To name their kid sobiya...
No worry bhaijaan...Take ur time...I will wait...Now not concentrate on epilogue😡 Exam h bhai exam...So jaakar padai karoo bhaijaan😛
Areh wah..extra scenes of other characters...interesting...
Wanna know what others are doing in their life...Especially Mr.Maaz. .hihi...

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