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ritika

@ritikaagrawal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

nice starting😳
liked the 1st chappy😉
my first story of asya actually...
but waiting for next😊

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Jalpa

@kadia717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal
nice starting😳
liked the 1st chappy😉
my first story of asya actually...
but waiting for next😊

Really!!!!

Thats amazing yaar

I have always seen you in sadda huq forum..

and thanxs..will update soon😊

Edited by kadia717 - 9 years ago

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

This an awesome concept. .
loved it..
plz do pm me when you update..
excited for some of their nok jhoks..;)
Update soon. .:)

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Jalpa

@kadia717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: cutie15
This an awesome concept. .
loved it..
plz do pm me when you update..
excited for some of their nok jhoks..;)
Update soon. .:)

Thanxs dear😊

For pm, u hv to send me buddy request.😊

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1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Hmm cookie pie sista..

Finally read the chappy and it was an amazing start.

Asad character is a bit funny and zoya seems more sensible

Funnily they both are MD of different companies but how can someone else force them to merge? It's a bit difficult to digest.

Asad's hormonal imbalance made be laugh but it was funny.

Aww.. Zoya is committed with Ayaan?

She seem to be a nice girl.

Loved the concept but please make it more tasty. Lol

Though it was very quick and short update but I liked the way you added things to bring in humor with the pen drive thingy..

All in all it was nice one.. Looking forward to the other 2 parts..

Make it heart touching.

Urs,

Hippo

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Jalpa

@kadia717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: MNsTrous
Hmm cookie pie sista..
Finally read the chappy and it was an amazing start.

Asad character is a bit funny and zoya seems more sensible

Funnily they both are MD of different companies but how can someone else force them to merge? It's a bit difficult to digest.

Asad's hormonal imbalance made be laugh but it was funny.

Aww.. Zoya is committed with Ayaan?

She seem to be a nice girl.

Loved the concept but please make it more tasty. Lol
Though it was very quick and short update but I liked the way you added things to bring in humor with the pen drive thingy..

All in all it was nice one.. Looking forward to the other 2 parts..

Make it heart touching.

Urs,

Hippo

Thanxs hippo..

yes you are right about Md of their company, so how can someone force them..well mene itna deeply nai socha😆

Dont worry about next chappy.. I just completed typing...aur mene bahot sare mirch masale, or i can say all ingredients daal diye hai to make chapter nice.. 😃

And about zoya and ayaan's relationship, you will get to know in next chapter.😉

Trust me i m trying my best level to make this story good..😆

I will update tomorrow.😊

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Jalpa

@kadia717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sasir
Interesting..
Nice

Thanxs dear😊

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Niknit

@Niknit

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Wow banner is sooo good and story is also I like that your writing skill and zoya's dress is very good so I like that story and interested soo plz update soon.

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Jalpa

@kadia717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Niknit
Wow banner is sooo good and story is also I like that your writing skill and zoya's dress is very good so I like that story and interested soo plz update soon.

Thanxs darling😊

you will see more pictures and funny scenes in next chappy..

I'll update at today evening hopefully.😊