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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...sad and emotional though. Lets see what happens next :-)
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Hi guys, I am back with two new chapters. Hope you will like them.

Chapter 15b

Zoya splashed water on her face and stared at the mirror in the washroom.

She was in no mood to attend the after-party. Even the idea of dressing up and putting up a show like nothing happened was tiring.

She never planned on joining the emotional roller-coaster ride that was Asad Ahmed Khan's life, but once she boarded the ride, it seemed like there is no stopping to it.

She sighed and wiped her face with a dry towel.

There was a gentle tapping on the door.

Zoya frowned. It was too early for Akram to show up. There was a good ten minutes left to the time they decided to meet up in the reception.

She walked to the door and checked through the peephole. It was the guy from the hotel's reception. He was holding a cordless phone in his hand.

Zoya cracked the door open a bit and looked quizzically at him.

"Yes?"

"Mam, there are some messages for Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan."

"Uhh, well, this is not his room. He's in room 302." Zoya pointed across the hallway.

"I know mam, but it seems he is not available at this moment. I knocked several times on his door but there was no reply." the guy shrugged.

"Is it?" Zoya was a little alarmed, but didn't want to show it in front of a stranger.

"Can you please take the messages for him? You guys are together, right? I mean, from the same company." the guy was probably in a hurry. He saw Zoya hesitating and took the opportunity to shove the phone in her hand and disappeared.

"Strange! if someone wanted to talk to Mr.Khan, they could've called him on his cell phone..." Zoya wondered "unless of course they don't have his number and calling the hotel after checking the directory."

Zoya didn't want another tiff with her boss and listening to someone's private message sounded like a terrible idea, but a nagging urge to check the message persisted until she gave up.

"Screw the rulebook!" Zoya sighed and pressed the button for voice mail.

Someone was speaking fast in an excited voice. Zoya had to focus hard in order to make out his words.

"Bhai jaan, kaise ho aap? (Bhai jaan, how are you?)


Aap ko pata hai kitni mushkil se aap ke hotel ka number mila internet se! (You don't know how difficult it was to get the number of your hotel from internet.)

Par aaj aap se baat karne ka bahut dil kar raha tha. Poochenge nahi kyon? (But today I was dying to talk to you. You know why?)

Kyon ki aaj maine aapne bhai jaan ko 18 mahine baad dekha...woh bhi TV pe, hazaron logon ke beech...ON THE STAGE...like the superstar you are. (Because today I saw my bhaijaan after 18 months...that too on TV, standing out in a crowd of thousands ON THE STAGE line the superstar you are)

You know bhai jaan, I was with my friends in this eatery when the news channel started broadcasting clips of you winning the award.

I wanted to scream and tell them "That's my bhai jaan." but I couldn't do it. Ammi ke kasam ne mujhe rok liya." (I swore on my mother's life and it stopped me from doing so)

There was a brief silence. Then the voice continued speaking, though there was a faint tremble in it.

"Kabhi kabhi aap se milne ka itna mann karta hai, lagta hai udd ke aap ke pass chala jaoon. Aap ko mere khayalon se koi juda nahi kar sakta, bhai jaan. (Sometimes I want to see you so much, I feel like running to you. Nobody can take your memories away from my heart).

Just remember wherever we are, whatever we do in our lives, you will always stay close to my heart.

Aap ko jab mere yaad aye toh ankhen bandh kar ke bass soch lena duniya ke kisi chote se kone mein aap ka yeh chota bhai Ayaan aap ko hamesha yaad karta hai.(Whenever you think of me, just close your eyes and think that somewhere in this world, your younger brother misses you...awaits you)

I miss you so much bhai jaan. I love you so much.

You are my superman. Forever and always."

The message ended with a loud beep. The voicemail indicator of the phone was flashing again. There were more messages in queue.

Zoya felt a lump rising in her throat. Mr. Khan had no idea how lucky he was. Even though the family was messed up, but they still had so much love for each other.

He still had a family to hold on to. Real family, with REAL people.

All Zoya had was a bunch of old photographs, a half-burnt letter and a musical globe.

With a heavy heart, Zoya pressed the button and listened to the next message.

"Asad Ahmed Khan, YOU B*****! How could you do this?

I begged you for my child's future, I begged you for my life...and you made it a big joke."

Tanveer's voice was so shrill, it was almost unrecognizable.

"Once again you had to take away my happiness. Now I'm left with nothing. Ali is drinking again. He is threatening me to abort our child. He told me to get out of his house. but I have nowhere to go.

I bet it all makes you very happy. Me begging you like that. Your revenge is complete, isn't it?

It won't have killed you to wait one more year to get that trophy, would it? but my child has to pay the price of you greed.

You listen to me very carefully. If something happens to my child, I will kill myself too. You will have innocent blood on your hands. Would that make you happier?

I still don't understand why you lied to me. Why give me false hope, only to crush them moments later? What sadistic pleasure does it give you, to play with others emotions?

Allah se darro, Asad Ahmed Khan. Allah sab kuch dekh rahen hain. One day you have to pay the price for what you did...you GODLESS devil..."

There was a firm knocking on her door again. "Miss Farooqui. Are you there?" called the muffled voice of Asad Ahmed Khan on the other side.

"Allah Miyaan! It's Mr. Khan out there. May be he is here to collect the messages. I have to delete Tanveer's message before he gets to know about it." Zoya mumbled.

She hadn't used a cordless phone in ages. She had completely forgotten how to delete a voicemail. No matter how hard she tried, it just escaped her memory.

"Miss Farooqui?" there was a harder knock on the door.

"Yes Mr. Khan. I am coming. Just a minute." Zoya was positively freaking out. She kept pressing random buttons on the phone, hoping against hope that one of them would eventually work.

"Miss Farooqui, I know you have my messages. The hotel guy just told me about it. Don't even think about messing with it." Asad's voice was gruff "If you don't open the door right now, I swear I will break it.

Zoya grimaced and cursed under her breath. She hurriedly crossed the room and unlatched the door, only to find a disheveled and angry-looking Asad on the other side.

His face was very red and glistening with a sheen of sweat. His hands shook unsteadily as Zoya handed him the phone quietly.

"Did you listen to my messages?" Asad tilted his head to one side and eyed her. The manic glint was flashing in the depth of his dark orbs. It was unnerving to look into them. Zoya averted her gaze and studied the geometric patterns on the floorboard instead

When she didn't reply after a few tensed moments, he just shrugged "You know what, I don't give a damn even if you did." He swaggered off, albeit a little unsteadily.

"Mr. Khan, I am asking you one more time. Are you coming to the party with us? Can't you just pretend for a few hours that it's our big day? For the sake of Dilshad Constructions, for the people whom you call your family." Zoya called out after him.

He stopped briefly and turned to give her a half-smile.

"Trust me, you guys are better off without me. Enjoy your party, Miss Farooqui."

NEXT PART : SEE BELOW 😊

Edited by teddy25 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 16

"Zoya, kya hua yun muh fulake kyon baithi hai? Why so serious?" Akram snapped his fingers in front her face to bring her out of the trance.

"Nothing yaar Akki. Kahan hoon main serious? See I am smiling." Zoya clicked a selfie with Akki sipping a mocktail in the background.

"Zoya, don't mind but you really seem a little off." pointed out Vibha, the chashmish lady Akram befriended during the event previously.

"See, Vibs has only known you for... like 15 minutes, and yet she could spot the difference." Akram nudged her. "Tell us na...what's wrong?"

Zoya didn't know what to tell them. She genuinely wanted to blend with the party mood.

She tried to let herself be floored by the glitz and glamour of the party.

She sipped on the cool summery drinks. She tapped her feet to the beats of the lounge music, posing and clicking selfie with her friends.

All the while, a growing sense of unease and restlessness gnawed at her heart with astonishing persistence.

Something was not right. Worse, she couldn't even tell what it was that bothered her so much.

"You are not missing your Akdoo Ahmed Khan, are you?" Akram narrowed his eyes.

"Oh shut it, Akki. Kya bakwas kar raha hai! Why should I miss him. Yeh toh achcha hua that Jille Ilahi didn't follow us to the party. Otherwise he would have bored us to death." Zoya waved her hand dismissively.

Akram took another sip of the blue lagoon and watched her without saying anything.

"Stop giving me that look, will you?" Zoya warned. "Allah Miyaan, what's wrong with you all? I just need some fresh air." She said wearily.

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Zoya sat alone beside the enormous indoor swimming pool at the back side of the hotel. She traced her fingers through the water and watched ripples forming around them.

The white of her kurti, the soft shimmer of her pearl earring reflected in the little waves, creating floating, broken images like a surreal dream.

This was not the way she was supposed to feel.

This was not the way she thought she'd have to spend the night.

She closed her eyes and let herself drown in the soothing depth of George Michael's voice, as he softly crooned:

Tonight the music seems so loud
I wish that we could lose this crowd
Maybe it's better this way
We'd hurt each other with the things we want to say
We could have been so good together
We could have lived this dance forever
But now who's gonna dance with me
Please stay...


*Did they really have to play 'careless whisper' precisely at this moment? Really?*

Zoya sighed and fished out her cell phone from the clutch. She browsed through her contacts still her fingers stopped at'Jahanpana'.

"Why do I care?" she scowled at the screen. "He is just a rude, arrogant, sadistic pr*ck on his one-way trip to hell. Why do I even care?"

To her dismay, she found herself dialing his number.

The phone rang several times before a recorded voice informed Zoya that the number she was trying to reach was currently unavailable.

Zoya frowned and redialed the number.

After trying another three times, finally someone picked up the call.

"Hello, Mr. Khan?" Zoya's voice was weak with relief, but it lasted only a few seconds before the person at the other end abruptly disconnected the call.

Zoya stared at the mobile screen, struggling to understand what was going on.

Moments before she was about to dial his number again, the phone rang.

It showed 'Jahanpana calling' on the screen.

Zoya received the call with trembling fingers and waited for the other end to respond.

"Are you a cop?" a harsh male voice, that definitely didn't belong to Asad, spoke.

"No." Zoya realized her throat had gone dry. *What was this guy doing with Mr.Khan's phone?*

"Fine. Do you want to place your bet then? Go ahead. " the voice softened a little.

"Bet? Uhh...I mean, yes I do." Zoya had no idea what this guy was talking about, but she was determined to know the whereabouts of Asad; and this guy looked like her best chance to find him.

"Tell me your rate, and your name...'code name' bhi chalega. Come to my place with hard cash, I repeat, only hard cash... and meet my guys at the Underground." the voice instructed.

"The Underground?" Zoya gulped. Even the name sounded ominous.

"How far are you from Whitefield? Look, we don't have much time. Our next fight may start in twenty minutes.

Right now it's Red Hood Vs Fighter 9 in the ring. Poor guy, this Fighter 9...the way Red Hood's punching his guts, he won't last another round.

It's a massacre! A glorious, bloody mayhem!" The guy squealed joyfully. "I feel for Fighter 9 though. It was Bro's first night out here. He didn't even have a stage name. I thought of christening him 'Punisher'...but the way Red Hood is punishing his existence, he may not live to see another day."

Zoya's head was reeling with confusion. This guy sounded like a crazy war-monger.
*What does Mr. Khan has to do with this place?*

"How did you get this phone? This is not your number!" she probed the guy again.

"Of course it's not mine. The fighters have to deposit their belongings, specially expensive ones, to me before the fight. You don't go bare-knuckle fist fighting with i-phone in your pocket, duh!" the guy laughed. "I think Fighter 9 gave it to me. It was buzzing endlessly, so I thought of saying hello...and gotcha! Another betting agent."

Zoya had a very sick feeling at the pit of her stomach. She was trying to connect the dots and the picture she was getting was extremely disturbing.

She decided to push her luck further and played along "Look, my boss wants to place a bet on the ongoing match also, but he is in Dubai and unable to decide the merits of the fighters. Can you make a short video clip of the fight and send it to me?"

"I told ya, this fight is a horror show. Trust me, you're not gonna like what you'll see...You can predict the result from a mile away. Red Hood is nailing it, man! Hold on, I am sending an MMS. See it for yourself." The guy disconnected the line.

Zoya held her breath and waited for it. Soon enough, the phone buzzed. She's received a video clip from Jahanpana.

It looked like a dimly lit basement, filled with smoke. A crowd, mostly comprising of tattooed men in grungy clothes, cheered two men circling each other in a ring. One of them was a big, bald guy in red shorts and a ridiculously embellished buckle around his waist.


Zoya let out a muffled cry when her eyes fell on the other guy.

The elaborate 'fallen angel' tattoo on his bare back was hard to miss, but his face was unrecognizable. The left side of his face was bloody, bruised. His left eye was horribly swollen to the point of looking disfigured.

He licked the blood and sweat off his split lips and readied himself for another round.

The crowd went berserk and chanted "Kill! Kill! Kill!"

"Going for another round !!!This guy's got a death wish." the clip ended with the voice of the guy Zoya had been speaking to so far.

Zoya jumped to her feet and dialed Asad's number once again. Predictably, the other guy picked up the call.

"Did you see that? Fighter 9 is going for another round." he sounded excited.

"Yes. Yes, I saw that. Look, I am coming with the money. To meet you, did you say , in Whitefield?" Zoya found herself hyperventilating.

"Just ask for Randy's garage once you come here. Everyone knows my place...and you better hurry up...there was a rumor that mamus (a slang for 'the police') may raid the garage tonight. Remember, we only accept cash. That's the Randy way!" the guy teased in a good-humored way.

"Yeah, sure. sure. Just do me a favour. Don't let Fighter 9 to leave your place. Make sure he stays put there. I am coming."

Zoya ran towards the parking lot and woke their driver Harmeet jee from his peaceful nap.

"Harmeet uncle, I need this car right now." Zoya gasped.

"Arre Zoya beta, kya baat hai aap itni pareshan kyon dikh rahi hai? Boliye na kahan jaana hai aap ko, main chhod deta hoon? Sab thik hai na beta?" Harmeet Singh looked genuinely alarmed.
(Zoya dear, why are you looking so stressed? I can drop you wherever you want to go. Is everything alright?)

"Harmeet uncle, can you tell me how far is Whitefield from here?"

"Kaafi dur hai, beta. It's about 15 kms from here."

"Uncle, aap ek kaam kijiye. Aap wapas hotel chale jaiye. Aaj raat ke liye mujhe yeh car chahiye."
(Uncle, please go back to the hotel. I need this car tonight)

Harmeet Singh still looked befuddled as he stepped out of the car and handed her the car keys. In her desperate state of urgency, Zoya almost snatched the key out of his hand and started the ignition.

"But Zoya beta, don't you want me to come with you?" He pleaded.

"Sorry uncle, but iss raaste pe mujhe akele hi chalna hai." Zoya gave him a sad smile before driving off in the distance.

"Wahe guru ji, iss bachchi ki raksha karna!" (Wahe guru ji, please look after this child) the old man looked heavenwards and chanted a prayer.

(to be continued)

Edited by teddy25 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updates
Loved reading it
Zoya hearing ayaan and tanveer's message
God know which message did she delete
And then the whole weird conversation
Hope zoya does not get herself into another problem
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
It will take some time to process the entire thing... I will be back I promise.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It is so amazing
Tanveer can't change ever
The fight thing did confuse Me a little
Plz continue soon
N do pm me :-))

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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

It will take some time to process the entire thing... I will be back I promise.

back
Now this is something entirely expectedly unexpected. 👏😆
I like it SO MUCH
Ayaan's call (autocheck is making it Susan -____-)
And tanveer's too..
The phone call DID confuse as I read till the end.
But it is supposed to be!
Well done 👏


Complete the whole short story
Then I will give a berry berry berry big comment 😡




P.s lovely it is. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update.
Loved it so much.
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Nice updates dear
Zoya heard the phone msgs
She felt something bad gonna happen & she got the answer soon. Asad was punishing himself. Hope Zoya reach there safely & stop the fight.
Update soon plz
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates .
Zoya checked asad's voice messages...
What's wrong with tanveer.. .Why is she not leaving asad. . :(
Ayaan's voice message showed how much he loves asad..
What was at last. ..:o hope zoya Will reach on correct time. ..
P lzz continue soon..

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