AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71 - Page 38

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

lovely update

good asya's relation is progressing
enjoyed reading it
thanks for the pm



Thanks dear 😊
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kobeb

Beautiful update asad is totally in lovee!! Continue soon pls :)



Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Hey Anopama, you are the sweetest 😳
Always writes such an awesome comment 😃
Me too, I loved the name Ashu too...I can see Asad rolling his eyes 😆
I am glad they spent their time understanding each other
This story is about to end...only three more chapters to go :)


No, I won't be taking any break.
I am eager to start a new story as well. Only I'll probably update every other day instead of everyday.
I have this one story in mind which I feel is really good but will add my own touches to suit AsYa perfectly
😛


Ashu baby I am waiting
So a new story hopefully to start next week or maybe this week
As I see u r doubling up
So u will be putting ur touch to make more Asya realistic
But to me I could have pictured Asya in all
But the even other day update
We will be sadden as u have spoilt us with daily update
But what to do we will take what we get
Lots of love 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pia 😭
I guessed this story is about to end...
I was enjoying this one so so much...
But ext one u will not update daily...😭
Why?

U know u have given us a bad habit of daily updates...
But it's ok we will try to manage it😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

hugs Pia

& I love u girl🤗

I remember I asked u yesterday 2 give double updts & u did awe that was really sweet of u...I m so touched & happy😛

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but I think story is reaching its climax now

I remember u mention 30 parts so we r nearly there

now even if this ends this surely was a fantastic story

but I have 2 admit I think d 1st half was outstanding 2nd half looks little thanda mayb bcuz I loved 2 read there hilarious nok jhoks in d start. overall it looks great but 1st half is show stealer😉😳


<em>coming 2 d updt now

it was really entertaining

I loved their night chats 😃

definitely romance is a big thing 4 healthy relationship

while they still have there fears

I m happy Zoe had a lovely frnd as Priya but Asad is also right they need 2 discuss this amongst themselves

looking forward 2 next part

& tyt huggies once again🤗



A big hug to you too Jas 🤗
Not 30 chapters but 28...so yeah three more to go
The last couple of chapters might have felt 'thanda' because there were no twists
I personally like it because I like to read how they are trying to work on their relationship.
I usually miss reading this part in most of the novels.
Normally as soon the hero/heroine clears their misunderstanding the story ends
But that's not the case here.
Anyways last three chapters will be a roller coaster ride :)
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks Arpita 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Wow bonanza thanks for the double chapters update...awesome



Thanks dear
Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

I'm glad that finally they shared their deepest fears about their relationship. .!
Awesome update. .
I really loved their talking and sharing secrets..
that was very cute..!
Asad is so sweet sometimes.. he helped zoya with her chores..!
loving it .:)



Awww thanks dear for this lovely comment
Glad u liked it 😃
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Thanks 😊

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