AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71 - Page 36

I'm glad that finally they shared their deepest fears about their relationship. .!
Awesome update. .
I really loved their talking and sharing secrets..
that was very cute..!
Asad is so sweet sometimes.. he helped zoya with her chores..!
loving it .:)

Originally posted by: raspi

it was amazing i m busy these days so i can't comment on all updates bt all r lovely tnxx fr pm

Thanks For reading 😊

Originally posted by: ayat20

Nice part

Asya r progressing in their relationship

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Avie

Awesome update..

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Amina...

Lovely Update ...

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: -ABI-

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Thanks 😛

Originally posted by: anopama

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Asad has found his endearment for zoya ...baby

So he almost drop the L word

Haha if he is feeling he has to make sure she is too

The fear r still in both of them and I am glad tht in the end they could have talked to each other

He said right they need to discus together not with others

So she want the physical intimacy but she is afraid she will lose the emotional one

But Asad has enjoyed those times with her he has learnt so much and he has love and respected her more and same with zoya

Love her name for him Ashu

So Tara was warned and Mita was thankful

Priya love her she is like the love doctor

Her advice to both of them were good

Zoya should hold back she should live in the moment

And do what make her happy and not worry and fear Asad reaction or feelings

If she don't put out and let him see how is he going to get over his fear

Bcuz his is of her leaving

So he have to see the care and the love and the attraction and the want

And then he can be secure to put his heart on the line and trust in love and relationship

Waiting for more

We r coming to an end soon

Do u have anything prepared for us

Or are u taking a break for the holidays

Hey Anopama, you are the sweetest 😳
Always writes such an awesome comment 😃
Me too, I loved the name Ashu too...I can see Asad rolling his eyes 😆
I am glad they spent their time understanding each other
This story is about to end...only three more chapters to go :)


No, I won't be taking any break.
I am eager to start a new story as well. Only I'll probably update every other day instead of everyday.
I have this one story in mind which I feel is really good but will add my own touches to suit AsYa perfectly
😛

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Wow!i read d last 20 parts 2gethr within 1hr 15min.
Nw i m in loss of words.
Absolutely fantastic writing.
Pl dnt b upset tht i cudnt mk individual cmnt.
Cnt soon.thnks 4 pm.

It's okay dear...I am not upset
Actually it's good you didn't post 20 comments 😆
I am glad you are enjoying the story
Tell me you didn't read all 20 chapters in one go 😲
Now you breaking even my record in reading 😆

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Originally posted by: blueberry02

Hey

1st of all m sorry 4 not comenting on previous part
nd may not b able 2 comment regularly 4m now on... :-(
reason:busy life

but wenever i get tym i vil definately read nd cmnt here

nd coming 2 da story

lovely update

i really loved der night talks nd der relationship is progressing smoothly...happy 4 dat

zoya is working so hard nd m happy dat asad is also helping her in work

priya is a sweetheart she made dem realize how relationship works

both hav insecurities yet nd i hope dey come over it soon

overall njoyed it...
Thanq
c u soon...

Thank you for this lovely comment
You can read and comment when u get time dear
I know how life can get so busy
I go through it too 😊