AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Yay a make up update
Love it
Does that means that the story is ending? ????

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Priya is such a sweetheart😳 I really adore her for what she do...

And Asad...well I was so happy reading that part of asad and priya and loved priya more for knocking some sense in her...and finally he realized and ran to the Inn... after AsYa solve it totally I want him to teach a good lesson to tht Tara and akram...n I actually hope he do

Waiting for nxt part but as u said u have exams so u should concentrate on it plus if u actually take a small break in updating nxt jst leave a small note so tht I dnt check my mobile the frst thing after waking up😳😆

U knw i red d update twice by now and damn!!! I feel like reading it once again

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

A happy update..

These two need to resolve their differences cause they are made for each other..

Loved how Priya mocked Asad and made him realise the importance of Zoya in his life..

Loving the story..

Write soon and thanks for the pm..

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Well pia I have told u this plenty of times...

Ur updates are my morning breakfast companions..

So even if one day is missing I feel incomplete...

But exams🤢

U have to study...

Give a note on the absent update...😆

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Hmmm now coming to the update...

Priya was the star of today...

Right from mocking him to ordering him to calling him idiot...😆

Putting some sense in him...

Making him wait to know about Zoya's whereabouts...everything...

Loved Samar tooo...TONE😆😆

I understand the story is coming to its end...

But do give a proper closure to rehaan n khushi too...

Now coming to Asya...

They were adorable

Zoya was fierce but I dint want her to give in so easily...

Asad he wanted to make her feel miserable n come back running to him...

But I'm glad they decide to work it out..

Asad's words were superb...

Please don't be absent tomorrow..😉

After a very long time I wrote a long comment here on this story..

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: anopama
😊
Aww a sad one😭
Zoya is right where she started
She left Asad and his RV
And he don't give a damn he moved on like nothing matter
When he sees her is like she is invisible and he always has a woman on his arms
Poor zoya back to swatting and bearing the brutality of people
So she seeks work same until Tara and her daughter
Even though they intend to torture her
Aww she hides from her friends
So vineet was nice and funny until zoya reveal abt khushi and Asad
Oh boy
So zoya tried to fix it
So finally priya finds her and brought her food and a shoulder and ear
So khushi didn't take it hard she is off to a date with arman but didn't he get warn to stay away from the sisters
Really Asad is miserable he don't seems to be
Well let's see what happens next
Who will go to who first
Will Asad realizes his love for her

Ok Pia u can continue now
I am back have recovered a little
And have caught up
So waiting for more

So good to see you back dear.
I really missed reading your feedbacks
Sorry, I know this chapter was a sad one...gladly next one is a happy one :)
I know you're going through a tough...I hope and pray you feel better soon.

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786
I'm feeling bad for zoya how sad poor girl 😭 no asads point of view did he move on priya said he's miserable y don't asad realize he's hurting her so much
That tara n her daughter 😡
Poor zoya
Next update about asad hope continue soon

Asad POV is in the next chapter and it's a happy one
Thanks for your lovely comment :)

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: cutie15
Res
unres

Oh god poor zoya..
I feel so bad for her.. 😭
Asad is miserable too.. 😲
my poor asya..

Thank you for reading and commenting...
Next chapter is a happy one :)

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
Thank God
Priya found her
Asad deserves to be miserable
😡
Im so happy Zoya got a job
But sad that she's so miserable
😭
Im already crying for your stories
But I love it
So yeah
😃👍🏼🤗
Loves
❤️

I know you've read the next chapter already
And your anger on Asad must have reduced now 😆
Thank for the lovely feedback :)

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: blueberry02
Gud part
feeling sorry 4 zoya
dont no wats going on with asad but zoya truly doesnt deserve dis
she still thinks abuot him nd miss him
glad 2 no zoya atleast has a job now unlike bfore...
Atlast priya found her nd thank god khushi is not upset wid zoya
i hope after knowing everything priya wud support zoya
waiting 4 nxt part
cont soon
thanq

Most of your questions must have got answered after reading ch 21.
Thank you dear for reading and commenting :)