Asya Drabble: Forbidden Love [Thread 1/2]

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
I wish I can fangirl with you but i have like soo many tests
I really liked the chapter
I wish Zoya would voice her thoughts more often
And try to ignore Asad's advances a bit
I totally ship them
But like I see Zoya's point

Being a studying girl I understand the meaning of tests and its tensioin😆 sadly studying has got no option and we have to study😛

Thanks a lot!

Asad is a mature guy and zoya a teen here, lets see what she can do😕

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Part.😊
Zoya's Classmates gossiping about her relationship with Asad(KSG),it was so sad.
Zoya outburst on ASad(KSG) was so Interesting.😊
What Zoya said is Correct in her point of view.😊
I hope Asad(KSG) will change his thinking.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

Asad is a business minded man and when it comes to Zoya he gets obsessive apparently due to the sexual attraction they have also now they have intimacy! Zoya's point is that she wants to keep their affair low key but his frequent visits to her college isn't helping her... yeah defo she has got a point! lets see what happens:/

I will update as soon as possible!😳

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
Quiet intense
So.zoya is becoming the gossip of her college
Asad is not bothered at all but she is totally
She tried tslking to him but his jealousy got.in the way
Hope he is not just using her for.time pass
Hope he has some genuine feelings for hef
I know tht their is a.huge age gap
But he pursue her until he got her even with her being engaged
He is so jealous of kabir and her being with kabir
Lets see what happens
Cont

Story is ofcourse intense, though I won't call it complete erotica but it has its touch!

Asad clearly doesn't look at her POV but will think about himself first... whatever it may be jealousy, business mindedness, genuine attraction or sexual attraction, lets wait and watch as story unfolds😉

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing update
Think that zoya should voice out her feelings more often
Hope that thry give a name to their relationship soon
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊

whether she voices it n number of times she has got an impact that the man in their relation is neglecting her words! About giving name to their relation there is a long way to go I don't think it will happen any time soon😛 maybe it's a fling for them right now! some sexual attraction that's it! watch the events a story moves ahead😳

Thanks a lot!

will continue ASAP<3

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Love it
But bored with same thing argue and at the end make out
Want some twist in the story which teach asad to believe zoya and they unite next time legally
Thanks for pm
Update soon

well then you will have to bear me for some more time now, as its just a drabble I cannot cover much scenes in single attempt also I have no plans to make them announce their relation openly But there are twists for sure... let me go as I have planned this story! I hope you will enjoy it!

Thanks a lot!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Love it
But bored with same thing argue and at the end make out
Want some twist in the story which teach asad to believe zoya and they unite next time legally
Thanks for pm
Update soon

Well I m in no mood to make them declare their relation! But twists are there for sure... Not legally but there r many things in store! Also Kabir has to play his part yet;)

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: jazmeen
I simply love your version of asad but poor zoya.

Ppl actually love bad guys...lol me no exception!
Thanks for reading<3

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: AMMY12
Nice part.
But to short.
Plzzz make it long if possible.
Thnx for d pm
T.c

Drabbles r meant to be short baby! I will write long updates when I write ny OS/FF/TS etc etc! Thanx.

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: don girls
awesome update
atleast zoya is thinking about the consequence of her actions
update soon

Thanks!
Zoya is defo getting a fishy sixth sense bt abhi toh kahani shuru hui hai! Lets see what happens!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#730

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176
nice update
Zoya just wanting to keep their relationship low key

stop the gossiping

but Asad took it all wrong

now both r angry but still cant stay away from each other

looking forward to seeing what they decide to do next

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

:) well the decent way Zoya tries to explain that much hanky-panky Asad goes😆 for sometime till I plan actually, there r more twists in the way!