Asya/KaBhi OS: What She Wants - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Aww, this was such a sweet read and dare I say realistic.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
OMG Mojo u r back wid a bang⭐️👏⭐️
What a Spectacular OS it was
I m still in d after effects of it😳
I 1st thought Ahmed u r using 4 Asad only😆
& than when he came 2 take seat beside her in plane till than I was confused
only when she told at lunch about her engagement I got 2 know
Mojo u really kept me in suspense but I m happy😉
So our dear Asad Miyan fell 4 d beautiful Zoe when he saw her innocently praying due 2 fear😳
Loved how he took care of her that was such a endearing part😛
& than 1 full day at home where Asad b her guide in day she took it upon herself 2 make d night beautiful😃
Ahmed no words 4 him he was totally disgusting 😡🤢
& in d end Asad proposed Zoe while they were celebrating his success
Zoya's wishes finally come true😃
THis was such a feel good OS Mojo just like ur many other wonderful stuff😃
Love u girl & yeah I still have 2 catch on d new SS Bittersweet which I guess i'll do 2morow
So hugs until we meet again🤗
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
hey mojo :)
i dropped here at just right place
this is awesome i mean seriously so long and awesome
i loved reading this
and girl u are a pro at writing
kudos to u
back in month jas and i were talking abt how beautiful writers we have on our forum who keep asya alive and their magic live up
and she told me there's an awesome writer mojo
she didn't tel me ur name and since then i was on a mojo hunt lol
and finally a tripped over ur long comment on choco's ya nims ke thread pe
and then i hit the right girl i was searching here u are mojo :)
and now i believe you are just not awesome but much more beautiful of a writer
nd m glad jas told me and my hunt became successful lol
thanks for writing this well and keeping our asya jingle well haha
thumbs up yaar
pls pm me next time u write anything
tata
oh well m sue
and i hope to cya soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Re read it..:)
It is so beautiful. . ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hey mojo :)
i dropped here at just right place
this is awesome i mean seriously so long and awesome
i loved reading this
and girl u are a pro at writing
kudos to u
back in month jas and i were talking abt how beautiful writers we have on our forum who keep asya alive and their magic live up
and she told me there's an awesome writer mojo
she didn't tel me ur name and since then i was on a mojo hunt lol
and finally a tripped over ur long comment on choco's ya nims ke thread pe
and then i hit the right girl i was searching here u are mojo :)
and now i believe you are just not awesome but much more beautiful of a writer
nd m glad jas told me and my hunt became successful lol
thanks for writing this well and keeping our asya jingle well haha
thumbs up yaar
pls pm me next time u write anything
tata
oh well m sue
and i hope to cya soon

huggies Sue🤗
finally u got 2 read my awesome writer 😉😃
what 2 do kinne time tu mili hi nahi meko yaar
kaise deti link chaloo cool u finally found her that matters
love u ab ho ja shuru 2 read all of Mojo's excellent stories😃
that reminds me I still have 2 read her latest 1 😳
gosh I m so slow
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Hugs bck jas 🤗
ab kya karu tune mujhe sirf mojo naam btaya tha username btaya hi ni
isiliye tym laga dhundne me
yes m sure gonna read her all stories
pm me the index link mojo
and i gotta go
interval over hone wala he
m watching hs3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
loveeddd love lovedd it!! Now i want to go to Italy and hopefully find my dream Asad too!! Lol. But honestly, the plane part where Zoya gets nervous and Asad helps her out is adorable! Also, Zoyas outfits sounded super Chic!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
It was so so so so so so so so goooddd...
I loved it so much...

As if some movie playing in front of my eyes...
Just 24 hours and everything changed...

U wrote it sooo beautifully...

Please please if u can u have to give a second part...
Pretty please..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
I'm still having after effects...
Loved the way Zoya was connected to Asad and ahmed ...

I want to see them in India..please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments guys! I really appreciate it! I haven't had the chance to reply to everyone individually but I really have read them again and again! Thank you beautifuls! Never thought I'd get a response like that for something I've written under 24 hours! LOOL!

Anyhoo, most of you want a part two in India, I honestly had no idea what I was writing when I was writing this part so I have no idea in my head as to how I would execute their trip to India but you guys actually have me thinking. Not going to promise anything, but when I get around to it, I will attempt to write another part to this! It means so much to me guys!


Once again, thanks lovelies.

Much love

Mojo

MWAH

XOXOXOXO

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