Asya/KaBhi OS: What She Wants

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Omg that was out of this world..! I was literally transfered to another world.. awesome writing sweety..! It was a great experience to read this..
I loved it soo much.. didnt want it to stop..
asad was a true gentleman and so charming..
ahmed was a jerk and didn't deserve zoya or rather zoya didnt deserve him.. she deserved something better.. asad is just perfect for her..
I loved how zoya asked asad to kick ahmeds ass and win the contract.. nd he did..
such cuties these two are..!
Superb job..:)

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Aww that was beautiful!❤️

Need more stories like this.. Full of the good stuff..

Thanks for the pm and do write more!

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

It was beautifully written OS
Liked the way asad fulfilled her wishes
He was the only person who asked her what she wanted. Nice & different way of proposal & she accepted. Thanks for pm

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

This OS is itself complete... yet my heart wants more for this os!

Res for now

Unres

This is so good... No one can ignore it! It was a treat reading it...

The way they clicked off by a sad helping her was so sweet...

Honestly even her so called fiance Ahmed would not have considered her fears

Aaawwwnn... stuck together for 24 hours...?

Ek din ki keemat tum kya jaano _________ babu?

The way he just accepted her wish to roam about Rome was so adorable...

I mean who the hell does that in today's world? That too for a stranger??

I felt so glad when she walked away from that pathetic excuse of a man...

please give us another update!

😳

Edited by asyafreva - 9 years ago

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This was absolutely amazing

You need to continue this please..

Would love to follow their journey to Iidia and be apart of the love process...

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Unresed above!

Want to read more!! :D

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

wonderful os...
loved it shooo much...
asad and zoya became friends in a day..
and asad celebrated a day with zoya...great...
yeh ashamed😡
he was using zoya for his benefits... very cheap...
glad that asad is on time there...
wow...asad invited to explore India and his life...
superb os yaar...