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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#251

A lovely update..

Glad to see that Asad accepts the baby and will do everything to keep them together..

Write soon..

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#252

Caught this up!

Wonderful ajju. ..u made the sad part go flawlessly... Little confusing at first it was but then further reading cleared it upto a large extent

Continue soon

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#253

Beautiful update...
thanks for the pm...

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#254

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#255

OMG...This was so damn BRILLIANT! Amazingg concept Pumpkinn...and the way you've layed it out, thumbs up!👍🏼

First part mein tou I thought Asad is the bad guy.😆 And my heart went out to my poor Zoe😭

But second part mein samajh aaya, Asad is not bad but dumb But I'm glad he atleast understands his responsibilities :) I hope the truth comes out soon and he repents enough before Zoe forgives him

Continue super soonnn pumpkinnn...Love you lotsss meri jaaannn🤗

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#256

okay... first of all..this is a new asya story whith a totally new concept but the same love...

from what i have read...its really interesting and totally worth reading...

Its suspensive and also a lot of planning and plotting going on..

I like it.. First their happy life ...then..zoya's fears...then..asad's decision ( based on misunderstandings of course)... its going great..

totally loved the scene where asad came to home and found zoya unconscious...it was painful...

and they are pregnant.. something good in all the sad things..

hope this will help them in reuniting again...

loved it...only two chapters and a lot to offer..

please..update soon...

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#257

wow dear...

part-1 is so awesome...

just loved it

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#258

hey spicie 🤗
so sorry m so late😳
maaf karde agli baar ni hoga
so finally i read both the parts
and mai pehle bhi bta chuki hu how much i loved the banner
and it kinda gripped me to read
so here i am and literally don't knw wat to say just typing away😆😆
lovely concept
part 1 tk didn't really understood what was happening
but it did make sense in the second part
how strange are the ways of life yaar
misunderstanding can crush the ;love
but beautifully written
i always love asad ka pov but u made me love zoya's pov too in the part 1
and the special thing and most adorable thing was angry bird😳😳😳awww
i loved how they met😆
baki poora sad angst ka part is covered perfectly
zoya preggy and now asad is determined to not let her go
no worries it makes sense totally
i love the way u writing
this is just amazing i love sad stories
but enough sad ok
ab next part accha likhna done???
waiting waiting