AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 67

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



I am proud of you too Jas...you are reading reading and comnenting regularly 🤗
I thought this chapter was so funny too
I like the scene when Priya said 'you kissed' in the background Khushi was repeating everything like 'they kissed'. It was so typical girly scene...I could just imagine me and my friends chatting like this 😆

There is I mentioning the book why Priya is being nice to Zoya...I believe she feels Zoya has changed. Asad could be the reason too as priya really cares for him. Either way it's a good thing. Zoya need some friends in her life.

Will update the next chapter soon

Sachi even if I get late I make sure 2 come read & leave my review on time. Right now I m having a challenge type thing wid myself ki is bar i'll on time. Lets see how long I can keep up😆😆
Indeed Girls scene was hell hilarious specially these repeating of words so cinematic it was.😆
Very true Zoe needs frnds specially after d hostility she faced all these months/yrs. And keeping in mind that Asad has 2 amazing frnds than its must she also have some1 wid whom she can share her feelings & look 4 advice😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab update
Really looking forward to reading on and finding out Zoya's secrets
Also to see how Zoya keeps Asad and how he'll remain a one woman man
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Posted: 9 years ago
Asad is so confused of what he wants from zoya
He is Insecure of his past
Maybe that's why he is afraid to commit
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Posted: 9 years ago
Is he honestly going to hunt for boys? For Zoya?

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Posted: 9 years ago
woohooo!! you started another story!!! I want to apologize for not being able to comment on each part, due to my crazy hectic life, even 24 hours in a day is not enough lol but I did start reading the parts, and I am loving the story!!! Each character is so relatable without any facade and bearing a slice of life. I love that the your stories always inspire us to not give up! trust me, its refreshing to read your stories after a looong day 👏 I want Asad and Zoya to learn about each other without hiding any secrets, bare their soul to each other without any judgements and lead a content desire filled life. Kudos to you for making these characters come alive by your words. truly brilliant!!!! 👏
Aisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update yet again. It keeps getting better and better with each chapter! ❤️
The last part of the chapter left me feeling giddy... it was so beautifully written.
Bring the next installment please. It's already past the time you update normally.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

😃

Im on the verge of tears
Im so happy that Asad came to Zoya
Oh Asad
Thats so sad
When he said how he lost his virginity previous chapters ago I thought it was willingly
Thats so sad
🤢
They were telling each other their secrets
Well Asad was
I can't wait for the next chapter
I so wanna know Zoya's secrets
Like I can't wait anymore
😆
I have some guesses tho
Zoya got beaten by her father but not harassed
I really wish I could put emojis here
Zoya didn't want a guy like her father
Maybe?
😃



Hey dear thanks for reading and commenting
Your guesses are good but not correct though
Next chapter has the answer for all your question
Will update as soo as I finish replying to everyone:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soumya.g

Nice chapter
zoya thought asad will kick her outside ...
and when she is confused she took girls help...I really liked that girls conversation. Their thinking about zoya is finally changing ...
What she will do now?...

Sorry I had not commented on last three chapters ...I m quite busy nowadays ...thanks for the pms



No problem yaar...I understand
Even i'm getting busier day by day
Glad u liked this chapter:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kobeb

Amazing update! Loved asyas moment poor asad feeling sorry for him :( they deserve each other!! :)



True...I feel sorry for Asad too
He has a horrible past
AsYa deserves to be tohether

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