NEW ASYA/KaBhi SS: Need help picking

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Posted: 9 years ago
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ASYA/KaBhi SS

So okay, this is going to be slightly different from what I write or I am hoping it is. I'll try not to make it depressing. This is two stories in one because they are so similar that peeps will kill me if I write two stories that sound exactly the same. Still debating on whether it should be two stories or one. It is based on a storyline that I had come up with and also a book that I read, a cleaner version of the book I read. Not even going to name the book as I am ashamed to even tell you. I obviously did not expect it to be the way it was. Ahem! Anyhoo, will be posting first chapter after I finish Red this week. Leaving you guys with a little trailer, prologue? Whatever. Let me know what you think. Actually, I have a better idea. How about I leave you guys two snippets, you let me know whether they should be two stories in one or two separate stories?

Passion

I am a final year Accounts student, who is a virgin. Of course. I have this bad luck when it comes to picking the right guy for myself. Player? Check. Momma's boy? Check. Gay? CHECK. Eurgh!

Working in a coffee shop, it's obvious that I come across a lot of drool worthy male species whose asses I may or may not ogle at. But there is this one customer that I cannot stop fantasizing about. Yeah, no biggie. It's not like I will ever come across him outside of the coffee shop. For me, it's just a harmless crush. It's not like I'm going to bump into him while trying to get birth control pills to lose my virginity at the student hospital. While being full naked in a paper gown. While I talk about losing my virginity. Because he is the freaking doctor. Where's that hole at? I'm coming.

Kuch Toh Log Kahenge.

Zoya Farooqui was the last to turn eighteen out of her friends. She was no party animal but when her friends suggested that they needed to celebrate her legal age, she wasn't exactly going to refuse was she? Nope. While her friends got wasted, Zoya found herself get carried away in a passionate dance with a stranger she only met. The spark between them was undeniable. But it was only one harmless night. She was never going to see this sexy stranger again.

What happens when Zoya starts her first day at university to find out that her chemistry teacher was the same man she couldn't stop thinking about throughout her summer holiday? That too 12 years older than her. Can anything happen between them?

Your thoughts please!

Much Loves

Mojo <3

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KeyaHira2 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is a hard choice
They both sound soo good

Separate
Don't make them depressing
Please
😃😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start...
its up to u..writing one or two..
but one is doctor and one is teacher ..difficult to choose..both r acceptable...
any case looking forward to read...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As u feel bae, but then GAY how ON EARTH
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i love both of them actually but I don't know how you will manage to mix them. I am sure you have an idea, because, it will be consumming time and energy. I've try to write in this way, mixing past and present ( crossing times) and it was really difficult .
Anyway, I love both of it and hope to read more soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Definitely difficult to choose between the two
So would just leave upon u and the other readera to do this work😉
Looking forward to both if u r writing two stories or even if u r writing them as a single story
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anything that suits you fine...

For now both seem promising with a different outlook...

Atleast that is how I can see it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I do love both of it
it's up to u whether u decide to write it as one or separate
I think separate would be a better op
lovvved both 'of it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Sunshine,

I like both the ideas but i m not getting how u will mix them together. If its easier for you to combine n write the two, then go ahead but if its gonna b more complicated to put two plots together, then write them separately. Watever suits u n is easy for you to manage.

Wat did u mean by depressing. Plz tell me u rnt planning to giving a sad end? Dnt do that. U kno me will cry if u do dat :,(


Loveee..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aaahhh!!!!! I love it!!!
Do it the original way!!!
Please
I am so sure it eill be amazing!!!

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