NEW ASYA/KaBhi SS: Need help picking

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Post them seperatly if possible..
And I found the first one interesting but yess don't make it depressingg...

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Interesting prologue

Both r good

Hard to choose

Love to read both

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Okay, guys. Thank you so much for replying to this post.

But no help at all LOOL!

Firstly, no idea how I was going to write it together but I was thinking of taking bits and bobs ofF each story line and putting it together? NO?

And erm, depressing as in my emotional updates guys. Do i ever give you a sad ending? I never kill Asya... well not till this date yet anyways.

Okay, a bit more help.

Which one do you want to read since most people have said separate?

Passion is adapted from a book, cleaner version with my own twist.

And Kuch Toh Log Kahenge is my own storyline that never got penned.

One last time guys.

Thanks ever so much.

Much love,

XOXOXO

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Both were interesting
You write it separately or combine it, it's upto u. I simply loved to read the story.

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

What about your FF :Memories a tug of war?

Is that story suspended? I commented her as that thread has neen closed!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: asyafreva
What about your FF :Memories a tug of war?

Is that story suspended? I commented her as that thread has neen closed!

HAAA! Surprised you even remember it. Was looking over it the other day, no I am not done with it yet. Just forgotten what I had planned for that story. But right now, I have Ek Nikaah and Red. I will try and go back to give it an end. Sooonish don't worry! That is, if you guys still want to read it.

Tere Pyaar Mein Fanaa is going to be on a long hold until I am free to concentrate on it. Suspended as of now but we shall see.

BTW, Which one of these do you want me to write? No one has given me a proper answer LOOL

XOXO

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Wow

2 stories

Both sounds very interesting and exciting

What will be depressing I don't see depressing

I see excitement passion lust want

Virgin coffee girl and Doctor u never know it is possible

It can happen they can meet coincidentally away from the coffee shop

U never know she could take a friend to the hospital

Or he could help her on the road or something

But I see a possibility of them together their

The other teacher and student oh boy

U know forbidden fruit

One nite of passionate dance

So he has to be single

But she is his student and I believe tht is a no no

Only if he quit his job or she switch her school

Age difference as my kids says age doesn't matter

At one time there was a story of a teacher and student

Tum hi ho but it was never completed

Then their was another an ss can't remeber the name thought but tht was completed

But it had 2 alternative endings

So let's see what u do

I see it as 2 different story

Don't know how u will blend it

But whatever u do I am an interested reader

Looking forward to see what u give us 😊

Edited by anopama - 9 years ago

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call me mina

@nilorina

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Actually I like them both
The concepts both are interesting
It's so difficult to choose between them
I like to read each one of them if that is possible
Your way of writing is fabulous I'm sure they will be awesome both of them
Good luck. 👏 ⭐️

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

If I have to chose I will say the one with the doctor, the one with the teacher it's a bit disturbing, it reminds me oedipe complex kind of. But you say that the one with the teacher it's from your imagination while the other will be rewrite differently.

So as readers and writer, I will tell you to write your own story, it gave more satisfaction 😃