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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy


Walekum Assalaam ! 😃

I'm good Alhamdulillah 😉

Awww Thank you so much for this lovely comment Mayur ! Everytime i write something, i'm eager to read YOUR comment on it because it's thorough and honest ! 😊

Easy task nahi hoga but just the fact taht he's trying to win over the trust whereas he doesn't realize where he went wrong, that's going to be the hardest because Zoya as u said voh bohot innocent hai lekin koi doormat nahi ke jo Asad karega voh chup chap sehti rahegi aur ab jab Zoya betrayed feel kar rahi hai, voh usko manane ki koshish kar raha hai and ok he's being sweet and lovely but after everything he hid from her and lied about... Zoya toh kya, koi bhi ladki easily trust nahi kar payegi kyun ki agar ek baar jhooth bola hai toh kayin baar jhooth bol sakta hai, agar ek bar baat chupati toh baar baar chupa sakta and it's exactly what i wanted to show with Zoya's reaction when he was about to go to Salman's...

Honestly maine plan nahi kiya tha ke Waqar ko main aisa character banaungi but Asad needed to understand that if he hurts, he's not the ONLY person on earth for her but she has a whole family a phone call away who could arrange for her to come back 😉 well as u saw towards the end of the update Waqar had softened up to Asad because SAW that he cared for her 😳

Honestly maine socha hi nahi ! 🤣 main bhool gayi thi ke Asad (show waala) jo allergy hai 🤣 lekin mujhe koi naam nahi sooj raha tha 😆 yep ! After being a jerk, he knows how to be sweet and taht's exactly what i want to show, the fact that Asad is not a villain, he's not perfect either, he has his flaws but is not a bad human being... Some readers like Jas were asking me about Asad's character, i said it as it is, u might find his character annoying but won't be able to hate him and taht's the whole point, reader ko samajh nahi aayegi kaunsi side lena 😉

I myself love the last scene, right now, go back and read the last 2 paragraphs, they r kind of telling their position and their feelings, i myself was feeling pain while writing both paragraphs because dono ka dard mehsoos hota hai, both r hurting lekin situation thik nahi ho rahi

Thank you so much Mayur for ur lovely comment, i think i might have talked a bit too much while replying ! 😆 😳 ❤️

See...Reply toh bade hee tabiyat se jamake diya hai aapne Mohtharma...😆 I completely agree on whatever U said in the first paragh about Zoya...but mera yeh kehna nhi tha ki innocent hona yaa paaon ki jooti jaise rehna...yaah ZGH mein suna tha FARMA BARDAR BIWI hona...{ I don't know iska matlab , batana zaroor maloom hai toh } but , she was not aware of all these things...and yes it will be very tough for anyone to gain back trust from these kind of peoples...
Waqar aur Asad mein abhi kuch bhi soft nhi hai...they are kind of like Salman and Asad with Waqar being a more violent version to be his friend or relative...😆
And please yaar...usko JERK na kaho...see baat chupai yeh galat hai...par usne kabhi uske saath badtaamezi nhi ki hai joh I think should be counted to MyLord..😆
And noo...aap khushi se kuch bhi keh sakti hai Bano jee...hum haina sunney waale...Embarrassed😆
Take Care...😃😃😃😃😃😃
# You Know I make Good Pulav too...

Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yayyy!
An update!

Brilliant!

Loved it! Zoya's anger yet her keeping it from brother was simply amazing!

It's usually not an easy task to keep things from family!

Asad too i guess has realised and is taking steps to rectify his mistakes.

Nice to see an over-protective Waqar!

Hopefully asad will be able to win back her trust in this one week!

Update soon!

Will definitely pray for your exams!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww asad is so cute yr...
i loved his reply to waqar...he wouldn't let anyone come between him and zoya...good going...
awww asad is upset that zoya doesn't trust him..he deserves it...
he bought a cat for her...she is her mummy and he is daddy.. 👏
that was the best scene he was jelous of cat getting too much attention...
in the last he waited for her to come to the bed but she didn't...then he took her to bed and slept on floor inhaling zoya's scent...can you make him anymore cuteee...
all the best for your exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome back dear
It's really good to read this ff after such a long time
Awesome update yaar as always👏
So Asad is trying his best to make things work between them and zoya doesn't know how to trust him again
Loved asad-waqar's convo or better say warning scene 😆
Loved the whole update
Enjoyed reading each and every part of it
Waiting for next update
Hope to have it ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy


Hahah Thank you so much ! I'm glad you liked it so much !! 🤗
Oh ? Results ! Chalo In'Sha'Allah u'll pass with very good grades !! ❤️
Hahah yeh sawal Mayur se pucho 😆

Hhaha good night and take care ! 😳

Merci beaucoup!!!!
Hope so
Kuch locha hogaya
Ya to postponed ya fir timings me change
Let's see
But thankiee
Main comment karti hu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy


I agree with Mayur !! 🤣


🤣
Dohre padte hai
Excitement nahi hai par kuch to hai!!😆
Dohro ko medical terms kya bolte hai ye nahi bolungi varna fir pagalkhane wale peeche padjaenge
🤣
N then media and publicity I can't handle
Vese bhi peeche padi rehti hai...shhh batana mat main yaha hu...varna autograph photograph interviews uff🤣
Dada I liked it jab aapne bacche bola
😳
N Maine suna ki personality aapki business man jesi hai...Surbhi Di ne bola...yaar permission dedo meko dekhoni hai pic aapki...u remind me of my fav cousin actually n business n gentleman sunke mujhe asad k yaad aati hai baki sabne dekhliya fb p mene kisiko nahi dekha surbhi Di n kuch logo k alawa😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update
Asad makin efforts for pleasing zoya
Zoya is melting too
Waqars presence is working wonders now for asya
Cntinue soonish
All d bstt for ur xams do well
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Posted: 9 years ago
amezing update..


al d bst 4 ua exam
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ossom-Dossom. The couple's going through a tough phase, but you can still see their love. Asad's doing everything to right things between him and zoya, but zoya's trying hard to not let him get to her. Totally understandable. Aaawww we've to wait so long now. But it'll be worth it. All the very best for your exams. Study hard and do amazing.
Will wait for the update.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

V.V.S RES for Aapi , Choco , Nims , Ankie , Tehs , Jas , Ashii , Aroo , Riddhi , Annie , Persiko(Afra) , Sue , Prinky(Deepti D) , Binnu...😃


thank you so much for the res mayur 😛

res for now

unres

amazing update

loved it

loved asya romance in kitchen

i know that wasn't romance still 😆

waqar and asad talk was quite serious

i like the way asad let out his authorized form

bedroom scene was sooo good

zoya's pain was explained well but i love asad more

the way he made her sleep on bed and then forehead kiss was so damn good 👏

overall great job

all the best for your exams and plzzz come back soon with longgg updates

love u ❤️
Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago

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