Aahil FF- Without You! Important Note 1 and 2 page 15! - Page 8

amazing... keep it up 👍🏼

beautifull...amezing wesome fab update carrot...loved it...cnt soon...thnx for pm

Wonderful update, but I'm a little 😕😆

Aahil with his thoughts and going back to that hurtful phase of his life. He has to be very strong to endure this everyday of his life 😭

I got a mother who loved me so badly, who was ready to give her life for me, who was as pure as God. She betrayed, the same eyes that looked at me lovingly always showed unfathomable hatred for me, the hands that caressed my cheeks pointed gun towards me, for what Bloody Richness! How I shall explain her, that she already had all the richness in my view, she had the most pure heart for me. Rich emotionally, rich morally, rich intellectually!

Very well written. It must have been so unbearable for him to know that she had betrayed his trust and was so greedy...

And I got a beautiful woman, who loved me crazily, who loved every inch of me, who lived for me, who smiled for me, who cried for me, who soothed my life, who became the happiness of my soul, Sanam! For whose every smile I died for, for who loved me really and saw the Real Me behind the Surface of a guilty unpunished free murderer, for whom I meant everything and who meant everything for me! My World! And the nature wrath, stole even that from me! Because the nature knew this man of Bloody Riches didn't deserve a beautiful-hearted woman!

HIS Sanam, I miss HER so much!!! 😭


Wait... WHAT!!! Rehan and Bulbul are lost????? How, Where and When?!!!! Had they been murdered? Arghhh!!!...

And how did Aahil landed in the forest?! Did Aahil travel alone? And where in the world is he atm! I'm so 😕 here!!!


I screamt so loudly! There was no one to hear me, no one! I was damn free from every bondage...and I hated it, I hated this freedom! This lonely Freedom Killed Me From my Insides!

Love the above lines, especially in red.

Robinson Crusoe!!! This was a nice 😆

Yayyy to the funny and lively Ritwik 😆

This chapter is interesting, but clear the confusing part please? 😆

TQ for the pm!

Rashmi, this chapter was amazing man! I can almost feel the pain with every word you wrote there, through him. God, such a vulnerable guy he is! 😭

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting..

Originally posted by: mahwash22

I have to say how incredible this is. Reading about Aahil and his thoughts are always very special to me. You did a great job portraying the mild anger, sorrow and his love for the only woman he remained to stay true toward.. his Sanam..

I have to admit that when you wrote about his father, Badi Ammi, his "mother" and Rehan.. I was filled with so many emotions. I was yet again reminded of how thoughtful and real a character like Aahil really was.

This really hit me hard.

How I shall explain her, that she already had all the richness in my view, she had the most pure heart for me. Rich emotionally, rich morally, rich intellectually!

Often we forget that how rich we really are. Sometimes, money is not everything. Love is truly the only emotion we can have for life, which will never change.. Kudos for this one. ❤️

Because the nature knew this man of Bloody Riches didn't deserve a beautiful-hearted woman!

Oh Aahil.. if only you knew how much you really were worth. ❤️

Beautiful chapter. Really loved it. 👏

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Love it rashmi.gr8 job...
U pennd down Ahil's pain,loneliness very beautifuly.
Ahil's painful memory With each n evry membr was jst awsm.
Ahil love sanam soo much tht it cudnt xpresd.he live 4 her,nw whn she z nt with him his life bcm dull & burden 2 her.
He hs all wealth bt d ppl who lv him,whom he lvs unconditnaly is no more with him.thts very painful.
Like rithwik's ntry.bt miss rehan.u bring him bk later na?
Amaizing updt.cnt soon.

Wish u a very happy diwali rashmi.

Originally posted by: zoyazrehan

Beautiful, Rashmi!

Keep going! Thanks!

Originally posted by: tazzz

omg the way you wrote it was beautiful! it as so sad 😭 i felt so bad when he was talking about the people he lost. you wrote it wonderfully 👏