ASYA (KaBhi) Four Shot: Rising (FINAL PART/13)

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Definitely continue
Amazing concept I'm loving it
Poor Zoya...what an ordeal she has been through
Does Ayaan have anything to do with what happened to Zoya in NY?

Looking forward to the next 2 updates

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

That's an amazing start do continue asap

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Amazing this was !!!!

so eager to know what role Ayaan is going to play in all this...

Continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

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Pooja

@pooja_shineStar

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Omg..poor zoya..soo much has happened to her hope asad, dilshad n najma will be abke to heal her slowly..

I dont know but ayaan going to New York? Is that maybe a hint that he is connected to zoyas past?

Please continue soon!

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Interesting

Do continue and pm me

Really want to read it further

Waiting

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Interesting concept
Plz continue soon
Feeling sad for Zoya
Both asad & dilshad was worried for her & prayed for her wellbeing.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

A great start.

What happened to Zoya?

Good that Asad rescued her and brought her home.

Well written. Waiting for the next part.

Please continue soon.

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Yes yes pls do continue. .:)
Awesome concept and you are a beautiful writer..!
Zoya has suffered so much in life..
hope she gets some comfort from asad and dilshaad..
loved it..:)
Plz do pm me when u update next..:)

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anopama

@anopama

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Wow very touching

Zoya has had some terrible experience

So she from NY seems she was sexually assaulted there

Her parents seem to have disown her

She has come to India this old man rescue her and she has been living with him for 2 yrs

Omg so she has changed trying to be a boy

Omg chacha jeep was killed she was almost assaulted again

Thank god for Asad and her reaching in front of his car

So ayaan seem to be Asad bro and he seems like trouble

Wonder if he has anything to do with Zoya NY incident

Seems Asad has his hands full with his family

Hope Najma is really studying and not doing something else behind her brothers back

Omg Zoya woke up thinking Asad her chacha she hugged him from behind

Poor thing

Continue

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fifi1297

@fifi1297

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Really nice
Loved it
Vry touching
Zoya has gone through alot
poor girl...her only hope was her chachu...
Is ayaan the guy in new York ???
asad was at right time
zoya is afraid of dilshaad and asad
at last she hugged asad thinking of him as her chachaa jee
Continue soon
Thnx for pm
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