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Posted: 9 years ago
You're welcome Bhai!

LOL mera matlab tha glad that the horrific part is finish. Azhar bohut bura tha!

Very true, achay log badla nahin lete balke upar wale pe chor dete hain and continue on with their goodness.

God bless you too, takecare!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enhance

You're welcome Bhai!

LOL mera matlab tha glad that the horrific part is finish. Azhar bohut bura tha!

Very true, achay log badla nahin lete balke upar wale pe chor dete hain and continue on with their goodness.

God bless you too, takecare!!!


WOW! So cute stickers! 😳😳😳

Hhaha... yes, happy that the worst part of the story is finished.😕 and hopefully it will not haunt zoya again.

hmm, we will have nice and cute lovey dovey moments after AsYa marriage .

Btw One sad part about Maria's death is still there but its not very sad but only touching.

Hmm.. but zoya will do something which will be like an indirect revenge. Sadly it will have no space in our storyline, but I will adding it in the extra shots after the story ends. Zoya will have hisaab barar .. haha!😉


hmm.. God bless you too sis, 🤗take care.

(p.s. I love those stickers .. so cute.. 😳😳)

Edit: I like it!!


Asad> Zoya >

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it...
Zoya had a dark past..
Hope Asad accept hrr..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
STAY TUNED

PROBABLY THIS SUNDAY!

CHAPTER # 4 : MISS FANGURL TO MRS. FANGURL




Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Loved it...

Zoya had a dark past..
Hope Asad accept hrr..
Continue soon


Thanks a lot sis! 😳

Glad you loved it! 😃

Hmm.. yup but that past will never haunt her or pull her down. 😊

Of course he will, but the way will be something to be excited about. 😳

😆😆 Already started working over it😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
LOL.

A good story has all the emotions, sad, happy, cute, etc.. so thumbs up for making the story the way it is!

I'm sure you'll capture the emotions aptly when you write about Maria.

Oh extra shots sound interesting.

Have a blessed weekend Bhai!! Enjoy it and take care.

That Asad and Zoya scenes created with the stickers was too adorable!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enhance

LOL.

A good story has all the emotions, sad, happy, cute, etc.. so thumbs up for making the story the way it is!

I'm sure you'll capture the emotions aptly when you write about Maria.

Oh extra shots sound interesting.

Have a blessed weekend Bhai!! Enjoy it and take care.

That Asad and Zoya scenes created with the stickers was too adorable!!


I love those stickers, 😃😃

Yup a story with all the spices and as well as sweetness tastes unique. 😆😆

Hmm.. I hope so, But I wish I don't make someone cry reading it. LOL! 😉

Hmm, Extra shots mein woh sab add karunga jo story ko unnecessary bore karsakta hai.. 😆 But it will be a good read.

Awesome weekend to you too sis, 😊hope to release Chapter 4 on sunday, but highly impossible. 😆

Hahha... #AsYa stickers - if you want I can add it (in a dream sequence) 😳😳😳

God bless you ...bye

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

lol.. acha i won't cry reading about Maria


Take your time bhai with chapter 4 and the rest of the chapters too...write when you feel the inspiration to write.


Yes that would be cute if you add it in a dream sequence!! But only if you can... and if it fits in somewhere...

Well you're probably sleeping right now bhai since its past midnight in India.

Good night, God bless you Bhai, take care...



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enhance


lol.. acha i won't cry reading about Maria


Take your time bhai with chapter 4 and the rest of the chapters too...write when you feel the inspiration to write.


Yes that would be cute if you add it in a dream sequence!! But only if you can... and if it fits in somewhere...

Well you're probably sleeping right now bhai since its past midnight in India.

Good night, God bless you Bhai, take care...




hello!!

haha... ok.. after all its a story.. 😆

hmm.. ok ..waise I'm too moody, only write when I'm in mood but when I start I cant wait to finsih and when I finish I cant wait to post.. 😆

hahah... Yes I know, maybe in Asad's dream? Will try for my sis! but this all after chapter 6!😉

hmm.. I'm going to go.. I cant sleep .. from last month its like this.. I'm awake tilll 4..430 am..\

ok good night sis!! 😳

(btw can you tell me in PM if you are elder than me or younger i.e above 25 or below.. and some nickname.. Its hard to call you LOL! only if you like , its fine if you dont want...)

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