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Originally posted by: vidhu1

Hayeee!! Finally!!

hehe! yup finally CSLADWSista!😆
Bhaiyu at first and topmost thing...i couldnt stop laughing after reading your Note 🤣 🤣

LOL.. I expected ... hmm but kabhi kabhi bolna padta hai na becoz I have chotu chotu lil lil pyaari pyaari sisters 😆 reading my stories and some scenes were too detailed for the first time that it was needed LOL.. hmm and Rania's character description was disturbing .. so...
Sry..i mean...i know its not funny but still it was funny for me 😆 😆
Hmm no need to sorry.. its ok.. yup not funny😉
Starting of the update was fabulous bhaiyu!! 👏

wow really thank you so much sistu!!

loved that part of rania and zoya!!

glad you loved it.. hmm I wanted people to love rania at first look..hehehe

I felt her to be nice but aage ka part padh ke i realised how wrong i was!! 🤣

hmmm you will change your decision in the end when you will get to read the both side of the story in Chapter 13 I guess!
Then omg...asad kissing zoya...wo bhi 2 times!! 😳 😳 hehe yup but on cheek .. its ok right..! after all husband and wife can romance that much infront of kids 😆 LOLLL and then zoya too...hayeee kitna pyaar hai!! ❤️ 😆 yup it was sweet... it showed that zoya was ok to break her own rules... hmm as a writer it was a big constructive chunk .. you will understand later..

ZOya's opening haan!! 😆

hmm opening? hmm... she is trying a bit of romance .. 😳
Then the booth part...ummm no cmnts 😉 😉

hmm it was a bit funny but only a constructive scene to show it in remembrance in the last..and also to show that asad takes zoya for shopping and all..
asad miyaa bade hi samjhdaar hai...what a shield!! 😆 😆

LOL.. samajhdaar!! haan but he was afraid and scared about the gang looting them or even hurting them.. so.. A romantic shield! 😆
Room mein jaa kar huggies... 😆

hmm room nahi phone booth cabin tha woh..but it was funny..
Zoya ka oppresion hogaya and sab kuch thik raha!! Thank god!! Warna aapke dimag ka koi bharosa nahin hai na jaane kya ho jata!!

hehe yup finally the disease and surgery track ended on a good note.. Thank god she lived .. but it was a minor operation type .. you know the advancement in medical science!! 😛 Then how could I have done to the main lead something..😉
Hayeee...their little princess!!

yup cute cute wali! 😳
hayeee...garden scene... romantic shomantic wala zoya ka dimag...dirty!!!! awww sooo cute!! 😆 yup cute one .. ice cream bhi khane mili na.. mai padh padh ke kitna smile smile or blush? LOL.. kar rahi hoon zoya kitna blush heheh... yup it was wonderful showing that AsYa have begun falling deeper in love but still not confessing yet testing to romance..

kar rahi hogi!! 😆 😆 🤣

LOL.. I know..
Waise bhaiyu frankly speaking your wife's gonna love you for being soo romantic typo!! 😆 😉

LOL.. nothing like that.. I'm opposite.. 😕

Den den the most roamntic scene...the bedroom scene!! hmm.. this time **no comments** 😆
Hayee...bhaiyu love u!! Itna pyaar...!! hehe love you too sistu! 🤗 haan zaroorat thi na AsYa ke beech kitna pyaar hai show karne ki so... (all this constructing scenes for rania's entry and jhatka to zoya's love life!)
Asad's day dreaming habbit is indeed very much benefecial for us!!

🤣 ❤️

LOL.. beneficial? hmm.. sadly ab all this romance will be gone.. zoya will be angry at him and *top-secret*
Bhaiyu i really really loved the sweet alisha-zoya scene...haan that was indeed ... hmm there will be something in that relation too.. it was sooo very cute...yup agree it was cute the way alisha said her aapi is in love.. and all.. superb na! it made me remeber smthn really very sweet!! hmm kya?? share if you want😳

❤️ ❤️
Then the real rania malik!! hmm yup real in picture.. but .. you know what? she is a kind of person who has so many good point too.. she dont fake her reality ... you will learn slowly and slowly about her all in bad view until the secrets leak when she will suicide.
Huh!! I hate such type of girls!! 😡 hmm the personality she boasts is bad / cheap.. even I hate that type... I dont want to leak her whole character to kill the beautiful storyline but .. as I have already finished her character's timeline.. one thing I want to repeat is that her character is very strong, a reflex cupid for AsYa and will make you cry for sure learning the hardships of her life and her tales of failed love, failed trust and failed life, betrayal she lived, the cheating she overcame. Hmm.. if Zoya is Queen to save her King... then Rania is an Empress .. a lone fighter all her life.

Bhaiyuuu...your poetry was damn damn damn fabulous...Thank you so much sistu.. stay tuned for two more beautiful poetries in next part and both from from Asad for zoya.. i really loved both of them specially fangurl poetry!! FAntabulous hmm the signature poetry of the FF.. LOL.. so glad you loved it and big thank you..

Love you bhaiyu!! You are star!! ⭐️ ⭐️
love you too sistu! 🤗hmm you are my angel because you made me sooo happy all of a sudden.. actually mood was really bad and your comment made me so happy.. I feel worth writing my stories for loving readers like you. 😳
Sry for not giving any dhamkis!! 😆 😆 😆
hmm no sorry again.. please give dhamkies!! LOL.. dont worry Fangurl FF Chapter 10 B update in couple of days.. I have given more priority for this FF now because I love this story more.
yours
Crazily sweet little addorable dhamkane wali sista!! 😃 😳 😳

Originally posted by: cutie15

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I loved the update

So Glad you loved it sistu!!
It was awesome

Thank you so much
Their cute little moments

hehe yup cute cute !!
Their hug
Their kisses

hehe! romantic shomantic! 😆
Care for each other

yupp super extra!
Nd love for each other

super zaida! 😉
It was written so well

Thank you once again
Waiting for the next part now

Hmm next part is soonish! 😉
Excited

hehe.. thanks for your comments and time and for being excited! means so much!

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Wohoo!

hehe...

Thankyou for the super long wala reply on my comment bro

your welcome smiley sista.. your comment deserved it..

And the spoilers😳

hmm specially for you as always. 😆

God bro! Excitement level has already reached the peak!

hmm your excitement and wait is worth it.. just completed 1 out of 5 scenes and its already 1K long and full of awesomeness... I bet you will love it

Eagerly waiting... 😊

hmm releasing Part B probably on sunday evening.. 😉 I love this FF more than anything just becoz Its so realistic because its mostly being adopted from reality and the characters are all so entertaining... 😛 Just cant wait to finish Chappy 10B and one big spoiler Maaz is getting married in Chappy 11!!! 🥳

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Originally posted by: anopama

Very nice

hmmm... I was waiting for your so detailed comment .. 😆 Thank you sooo much sis!!😳

Love the grow of asya

hmm glad you loved it, yes because 2 months have past to their marriage and why have become free and comfortable..

A little conditions r removed a little romance is allowed

yup..LOL.. little conditions are ok to be broken and little romance is allowed and required..

Asad CEO wow

yup and all thanks to Rania! 😉

but who really is rania he works for her or with her ?

Hmm.. Rania is the wife of Asad's Boss, she is the newly appointed Co-chairman of the company which is owned by his 60 year old hunband and she is a 30 year financially independent woman ...

She looks like a real character hmm yup... so zoya u better hold on to ur man and hold on tight

tight with love and protect as a Queen! 😆 Rania's character is very strong and hideous.. she will leak everything open in the end and then you people decide what was she...

Asad seems to be totally smitten by his wife his daydreams r 😳

hmm yup indeed.. he is a faithful Mr. Hubby darling whose world only has one woman who is his Fangurl!

Her operation time he was so scared yup dead scared because he had come from a loss in the past and the dream of thief the? little princess tht he left her with hmm planted in zoya's mind to help her fight and change her mood

Something for her to fight for yup exactly.

I can understand zoya reserve abt not being physical with asad until her goals

hmm yup right and she is still in the process of testing him..

But Asad seems like a wonderful husband and partner

hmm he is but Zoya will soon get doubts playing in her mind

I don't see him stopping her from achieving what she wants I don't see him holding her back

hmmm it is indeed ...but things can change in a fraction of moment and that scares zoya

He can be her rock and their r steps tht can be made to not have certain things happen

like a family

yup I agree but zoya is very afraid about all that, she is at one point testing her husband then wanted to stand financially independent third she want to feel essence of romance in the relationship, her head is full of confusion and fear of losing him..

But having tht type of relation can strengthen their bond and their trust

yup it will but there is no guarantee about it in zoya's mind, because of her past

And zoya mind can play with her when she will see Asad with this witch

hmm things will be getting hard on her in next update when she will find Rania's closeness with Asad.. there will be a cold war between AsYa...

And those pic even I am not happy with it to imagine if it was my man 😆

lol.. exactly.. Zoya is feeling insecure, bad, angry, possessive, she want to cry, want to hit Asad, doubt him, her world is presently shaken!

Insecurity is not a good thing

Indeed true! lets see what happens next..

Continue soon

yup.. next update probably this sunday!😉