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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice poetry...👍🏼

Chapter 10 A --- Released !!

OMG!

Beautiful chapter

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written...

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update bro

Thank you so much smiley Sista!

Loved reading it to the core

Glad you loved it :)

You are definitely amazing with intense and funny scenes bro.

Hehe really? Thank you so much.

The cheek kiss scene was very cute.

Yup it was indeed... Looked like Asya are lil kiddos.. Hehe.

Beautifully describing the comfort level they have reached

Yup exactly.. I wanted to show that.. After all few months have gone after they got married so this was expected.

I found the phone booth scene funny even more than romantic.

Lol Yup it was in some sense.. I added it foolishly only to bring lots of closeness in romance in between Asya because of the end scene where Zoya remembers them and then suddenly she feels jealous and angry about finding Rania close with her hubby...

Asad daydreaming about zoya and there little romantic moments together were very sweet and a treat to read

Hehe Yup.. The character of Asad is very romantic and he always keep imagining ways to romance with his wife. That's why that scene was shown.. Actually its a constructive part for the next update where Zoya suddenly start restricting him to romance with her and he feels something had happened. *spoiler*

Zoya's conversation with her sister was very interesting

Yup it was... Hmm it's also a long constructive story.. Alisha will be her support in fighting battle with Rania so that the reason Alisha and Zoya's relationship is so much constructed with so much confidence level. Again *spoiler.

So finally najma has been engaged. But I am still not sure about the sultan guy bro😕

Hmm yup najma is engaged.. And yes sultan has changed. Actually we will see how really he has changed in upcoming chapters which will turn Zoya's head with shock that is he really that old sultan. But yes he has changed. The purpose of his character sketch was that some people no matter being really flirty and bad and may commit mistakes but they do really change after relationship commitment..

Then the whole Instagram fiasco

Hmm yup the fire!

Zoya officially seeing rania for the first time and that too posing with HER MAN

It was heartbreakingly difficult for her to accept but her trust made her firm that it was all Rania's evil tricks to get her Man fixed in her dirty plans according to her.

Liked the way you described her possessiveness

Thank you... Yes Zoya was possessive and noting all the bad qualities of Rania.

Looking forward to know what happens ahead in the story

Hmm it's a time for differences in Asya relationship but in a cute way.. Asya will fight with eachother in a satirical way.. Lol but sometimes the things get a bit serious making Zoya to cry silent tears.. Of course in future updates. The much needed spice for the FF is here and it's going to stay for some time.

And a long update was a treat to read bro

Yup a compensation for the delay as well. Lol.. Thank you.

Loved it

Hehe once again glad you loved it.

Please continue soon bro

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

Hmm don't worry next update in few days. Trying for March 13th..

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I loved the update
It was awesome
Their cute little moments
Their hug
Their kisses
Care for each other
Nd love for each other
It was written so well
Waiting for the next part now
Excited

Awesome update
Loved it
Liked Asya interactions
Breaking the rules which they decided to follow & both were happy
Queen has to save her king at any cost.
Waiting for next update soon to see how Zoya will manage
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: cutie15

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