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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AkaiBara



yeh taunt sab 7 samandar paar walon k liye hai

u know yaha kehty hain ke 7 samandar paar ka paani pi kar sab badal jaty hn so bs mai aisy hi kahing😆


Hamare yahan toh doosre ghar ki tarref kare toh hee kehdete hai ki wahan ka paani lagg gaya hai kya tumhe...? hahahaha
Old taunts and tricks and their logics...Unko samjhna Mushkil hee nhi Naamumkin hai..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Hamare yahan toh doosre ghar ki tarref kare toh hee kehdete hai ki wahan ka paani lagg gaya hai kya tumhe...? hahahaha
Old taunts and tricks and their logics...Unko samjhna Mushkil hee nhi Naamumkin hai..

haan but funny zaroor hai 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ashii :'(
yaha rukna zaruri tha kya!
Ek to pehle hi zada kuch padhne ko ni tha except first few lines and last few!
Pro uthake chipka diya tune*pout*
and 70 likes b chaiye tujhe and next update b chaiye mujhe
are yar ye exams kyu hoti he
ahad asad confrontation chaiye mujhe!
Meher and ahad bond too gud!
Since i didn't read the story at the time when u updated pro
i have to say ths was very beautifully written
and iske baad jo part he asya wala
whr he wants her and she didn't budge was so efficiently coordinated with the lines thodi si bewafai!
Ab tu bewafai na kar jaldi pls prepare well fr exam and try writing

p.s. Ye pehli baar he jb mene show kiya he mujhe gussa aya
sara ki absence pe b gussa hu me
bt i try to be sweet 😆
But bura mat maanna
i knw i didn't review gud bt u deserve that *glaring at u*
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Ashii :'(
yaha rukna zaruri tha kya!
Ek to pehle hi zada kuch padhne ko ni tha except first few lines and last few!
Pro uthake chipka diya tune*pout*
and 70 likes b chaiye tujhe and next update b chaiye mujhe
are yar ye exams kyu hoti he
ahad asad confrontation chaiye mujhe!
Meher and ahad bond too gud!
Since i didn't read the story at the time when u updated pro
i have to say ths was very beautifully written
and iske baad jo part he asya wala
whr he wants her and she didn't budge was so efficiently coordinated with the lines thodi si bewafai!
Ab tu bewafai na kar jaldi pls prepare well fr exam and try writing

p.s. Ye pehli baar he jb mene show kiya he mujhe gussa aya
sara ki absence pe b gussa hu me
bt i try to be sweet 😆
But bura mat maanna
i knw i didn't review gud bt u deserve that *glaring at u*


yeh gussa tha kya

bilkul bhi nahi laga 😆

yaar pro bhi add karna tha

tabhi to tumhy update di itniii jaldi

smart hoon na 🤣

next mai asad ahad hi hain

sabar rakh yaar

yeh wo story ka original track hai

mai bewafai nahi karti oye

bs tym kum hai pout

sara t gayab hai hi mai bhi wesy gayab ho jaon kya 😃

after all sara is my BF 😳

love u mehmaan 🤗

i'll sachii update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

i have 2 catch up cuz i realized kuch missing hai? than went back & yes part 5 nahi pda tha
so uska comnt udhar hi milega

idhar ka i sabse loved d pendent jispe sabse pehle nazar gayi & banner bhi😛
so all moved 2 Mumbai & Zoe was shown preegy carving 4 Asad😭
woh india main hi tha zalim kahin ka phir bhi nahi aaya
Meher ne beg karke baat krayi but kuch nahi hua finali Ahad came 2 life & they moved on
& part 7 toh preface ka hi part tha uspe toh maine pehle bhi comnt kiya tha start main
I m excited 4 AAk & junior ki face off 😛
Naj was right in her place😊
Junior ki pic milti toh acha tha individual i mean😆
btw Khans Mumbai kya isliye aaye the ki Zoe ki pregnacy na pta chale cuz she gave him 2 Ayra hope legally nahi😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


i have 2 catch up cuz i realized kuch missing hai? than went back & yes part 5 nahi pda tha
so uska comnt udhar hi milega

idhar ka i sabse loved d pendent jispe sabse pehle nazar gayi & banner bhi😛
so all moved 2 Mumbai & Zoe was shown preegy carving 4 Asad😭
woh india main hi tha zalim kahin ka phir bhi nahi aaya
Meher ne beg karke baat krayi but kuch nahi hua finali Ahad came 2 life & they moved on
& part 7 toh preface ka hi part tha uspe toh maine pehle bhi comnt kiya tha start main
I m excited 4 AAk & junior ki face off😛
Naj was right in her place😊
Junior ki pic milti toh acha tha individual i mean😆
btw Khans Mumbai kya isliye aaye the ki Zoe ki pregnacy na pta chale cuz she gave him 2 Ayra hope legally nahi😕



Thank you so much Jas 😊

You READ and it means a lot to me

Yes that bewafai gift and banner was a surprise

Khans moved to Mumbai bcox Bhopal snatched their every thing so they moved out

And ahad is not adopted by AyRa

He address them as his parents in from of society

Yes asad n ahad will come face to face in next update

Stay tuned

Thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AkaiBara



yeh gussa tha kya

bilkul bhi nahi laga😆

yaar pro bhi add karna tha

tabhi to tumhy update di itniii jaldi

smart hoon na🤣

next mai asad ahad hi hain

sabar rakh yaar

yeh wo story ka original track hai

mai bewafai nahi karti oye

bs tym kum hai pout

sara t gayab hai hi mai bhi wesy gayab ho jaon kya😃

after all sara is my BF😳

love u mehmaan🤗

i'll sachii update soon

mujhe ni ata na gussha hona *pout*
tabhi mai sochu tune update likh kese li
likhna kya tha 😆
Shaani he tu bohat :-P
sochna b mat gf ka gayab hone me sath dene ki *aank dikhaying u*
and pakka update jaldi karegi?
Ok i lov u too 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

mujhe ni ata na gussha hona *pout*
tabhi mai sochu tune update likh kese li
likhna kya tha 😆
Shaani he tu bohat :-P
sochna b mat gf ka gayab hone me sath dene ki *aank dikhaying u*
and pakka update jaldi karegi?
Ok i lov u too 🤗


mjhy aata hai

seekhy gi kya 😃

haan super shaani 😆

acha baba nahi jati khush 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Thanks for Fast Update.😊
It was so Happy that you are so Happy with our Response,You mean it,Dear.😊
It was Very Interesting Part.😊
Asad(KSG) finally came to India and met his Family,it was so Nice.😊
Asad(KSG) feelings when he see Zoya was so nicely explained.😊
Zoya,Humeria and Ayaan part was so Nice.😊
Asad(KSG) finally knew that Ayaan and Humeria were married,it was so Interesting.😊
Waiting for What will happen Next?😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Thanks for Fast Update.😊
It was so Happy that you are so Happy with our Response,You mean it,Dear.😊
It was Very Interesting Part.😊
Asad(KSG) finally came to India and met his Family,it was so Nice.😊
Asad(KSG) feelings when he see Zoya was so nicely explained.😊
Zoya,Humeria and Ayaan part was so Nice.😊
Asad(KSG) finally knew that Ayaan and Humeria were married,it was so Interesting.😊
Waiting for What will happen Next?😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.


thank you sooo much dear 😊

i'm glad u like it

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