SaHil/JanAah OS : I Confess....I Love You!

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OS: I Confess...I Love You

Everyone is running through the corridor of hospital...cries and screams are heard as a patient is taken by a stretcher into the corridor.
The Doctor shouts as he pulls the stretcher along with him- Quick! Nurse...put the oxygen musk in his mouth! Give him blood...
The patient was wearing a white shirt full of blood spread on it as a dark red blood hole spotted on his shirt from which blood was coming out.
A guy wearing sherwani was running by patient side as he screamed- Mr. Aahil Open Your Eyes! Mr. Aahil!
Beside him was a woman wearing heavy jewellery and gorgeous greenish Saree as she shed her crocodile tears- Aahilji, Ankhe Kholia! Aahilji you can't leave me like this...I am nothing without you!
The cries and screamed continued as the Nawab layed on the stretcher helplessly wounded without any sense...the whole family was crying! Nazia was weeping like anything as she saw her bhaijaan in the wounded situation. There was someone else who was running after the stretcher far behind from the gang with a numb face. A girl wearing red and golden lehenga , blood could be seen on her hands and arms...as she ran being completely numb. She had no expression on her face.
The doctor shoved everyone as the nurses started to pull the stretcher into the OT.
Doctor- Stop Please! You all are not allowed to go further.
Saying this the doctor went inside the OT.
As the girl heard this, she increased her speed as she tried to catch up with the gang to have a glance of him...but she only had a glimpse as he was taken inside the OT and the door got closed.
Jannat stood still as she stared at the closed door. She had no idea what was happening!
Suddenly everything started to crush upon her as she remembered what happened 15 minutes ago.
Aahil Razaa Ibrahim has put his life in stake for her cost.
(Flashback)

Jannat was getting ready for her re-marriage with Shaad when she realised that in reality she was not at all happy with it. She finally realised she didn't wanted it but was forcing herself into it don't know for what! Aahil was right all along she was not happy with the marriage. But who was he to know! He has made her life upside down since the day 1 of their meeting. She always felt a forbidden attraction towards him. But she decided to ignore it just like always. The day arrived finally...which would decide her fate! Jannat should have been happy all the while but only she could think about was Mr. Aahil...whether it was Her Mehendi or Sangeet, Mr. Aahil was throughout her mind. Infact she made a biggest mistake in her life as she asked the mehendi designer to write Aahil's name in her hand on the mehendi day.
She had been tried to remove the colour of the name from her hand for hours but all went in vain.
But the person for whom all these mess were happening seemed not caring about anything at all.
He seemed so distanced from her since the jungle fiasco happened. He not only talks less to her but also doesn't even care about her! It is like he started to behave completely different all of sudden . As if she doesn't exist...
It is not that Jannat was missing his attention but his not giving any attention behaviour was making her mad for sure! She had told him her decision...that she loves Shaad and wants to be with him! And Aahil seems having no problem with it for quite last fews days.
Jannat just couldn't understand why she was feeling so unwanted of herself as if she was doing some sin. The wedding day arrived and she felt not at all ready for it! Jannat...almost ready for the niqah, but she couldn't take the pressure anymore and decided to talk finally with Aahil! She wants to clear everything with him before she goes for the niqah.

Jannat went to the room of Aahil but couldn't find him so instead went downstairs...just when she spotted him laying and sitting partially near the pool , splashing the water silently with one hand. His eyes closed...as if consuming peace.
Jannat felt frustrated as she marched towards him.
Here she was dying due to confusion while this man is sitting in peace who is the reason for all her problems.
Jannat stood near Aahil who was still in same position with eyes closed and splashing water silently, the only difference is his face seemed tensed and in pain...she wondered why but it doesn't matter to her really!
His eyes shot open as he heard a well known annoyed voice- Mr. Aahil! Are you awake?
Aahil looked at his side and found a woman standing wearing a golden and red lehenga. Instantly he got to know who was this...
Aahil without looking upwards at the face of the person, he faced towards the pool and spoke sternly- Yes Jannat! Do you need something? You can ask from Latif!
Saying this he got up without even looking at her, he began to walk away just when he heard- Mr. Aahil you can't walk away like this! Not before you give my answers!
Aahil frowned...What the hell does she want now! Hasn't she gave enough pain to him unknowingly!
Aahil slowly turned around and faced her...and he
realised How Beautiful Sanam Was Looking Today In The Bridal Dress! But for someone else...Aahil felt his emotions taking control over him ! Before Jannat sees anything he controls himself and says in calm voice- What answers?
Jannat read Aahil's expression for a while, she felt she saw something! Some kind of pain in his eyes but before she could understand it was gone.
Jannat walked towards him and said- Mr. Aahil there are some questions...whose answers I still haven't found! I guess you will have those!
Aahil calmly- Say it!
Jannat took a deep breath- Mr. Aahil, I want to know...what is it which makes you call me Sanam every time? When you clearly knows I am not your Sanam! I am Shaad...
Before she could complete Aahil spoke- Shaad ki biwi Jannat I know! Not to mention please.
His voice hinted irritation and Jannat didn't like that a bit.
She said a bit annoyed- Are you teasing me?
Aahil instantly rising his both eye brows- Nope! I was just stating the fact...Not!
Jannat completely confused- Huh?
Jannat was actually getting into his head with her repeataive false claim. Aahil felt his anger rising but he controlled himself and decided to let it go. He was in no mood to give any answers to Jannat by now. He had enough! He can't bear any more insult of his love. Sanam has lost her mind completely after the accident. All she does is rant of Shaad. Sometimes Aahil feels as if Sanam never loved him enough but only was being loyal to him because he is her husband. Or maybe she moved on and is actually happy with Shaad. Then why should he just force her back to his world...absolutely wrong! But then again he never give her any choice either! Maybe he should just tell her in one go that She is not any Jannat but his Sanam. But somewhere in his heart a fear creeps...what if still after knowing she leaves him! Did she love him enough! Of course she did...but the way she behaves as if she actually moved on but that day he saw Sanam, the Sanam whom he loved caged in an imaginary character Jannat.
He came out from his thoughts when he heard- Mr.Aahil are you here?
Aahil stared at Jannat who looked confused. But now he is not gonna stop...he is gonna tell her who she is! Whatever she does...insult him or his love or shout at him just like she always does! He will show her their wedding picture as proof and after that he will leave everything upto her!
Aahil speaks- Listen very carefully Miss Jannat! Whatever I am going to say you right now, might shock you or you may not accept! But you have to know...
Jannat sternly- I am all ears but one thing...Don't try to blackmail me by telling anything bad about my Husband! I am not going to fall for it!
Aahil glared at Jannat- I am not blackmailing you! But yes there is a fact which might make you angry but that's the truth.
Jannat frowned- What are you talking about?
Aahil took a deep breath and said- The one whom you are calling your husband is not your husband! He is a fraud!
Jannat was stunned of what she heard. This man seriously have some nerves.
She shouted- Mr. AAHIL! HOW DARE YOU! I...
Aahil hushed her before she could complete the sentence as he pulled her close by bending her arms behind- Ssshhh!
Aahil put his index finger on her lips as he gritted his teeth.
Aahil- Shut Up! And listen to me...you agree or not! That's what it is! He is a lier and you are a lie! There is no existence of Jannat. There is no real you. You are just a mere figment of imagination! Shaad is not your husband. You got it? You are not Jannat...you are...
Jannat pushed him away before he could complete the sentence as she screamed- Stop it! Just Stop it! Don't say a word. Arrrgghh why the hell am I even talking to you? I should have never expected anything good from you! You only knows how to manipulate!
Aahil stared at her blankly as she continued- Mind it...I am not going to fall for your f**king manipulation!
Aahil had enough, he quickly moved towards her and held her from arms tightly as Jannat winced in pain.
Aahil angrily- Bloody Hell! You know what you just talk without thinking...you are a bloody fool! Have you ever thought why you feel so wierd around Shaad? Why you feel so close to me? Why you feel something is missing in Shaad's love?

Aahil made his hold stronger as Jannat started to fidget.
Jannat winced- Ouch...you are hurting me! Leave me!
Aahil dug his nails on her skin as he gritted through his teeth- Really? I am hurting you! Then What about you? What about the pain you are giving me? Tell me Jannat!
Jannat in pain- Aaah...Stop it! What are you doing? And What pain? You are crossing your limits!
Aahil sarcastically- Limits? Oh yea ofcourse! You know what you will never understand.
Saying this Aahil pushed Sanam away furiously.
Jannat stumbled on her feet completely shocked.
Aahil continued- talking about crossing limits...then it should be Shaad your great husband! Am I right?
Jannat furiously- Can you just stop it? What Shaad has ever done to you! There is no such truthful and honest man...
Aahil inturpted as he thundered- Shaad Is A Lier and You Are Stupid!
Jannat stared at Aahil stunned. She was not understanding why he was getting so furious.
Aahil turned around as he punched on the wall angrily closing his eyes in frustration. Maybe he was really crossing his limits!
Aahil decided to finish this conversation once and for all.
Aahil turned around to face Sanam again as he started- Jannat The Truth is You Are...
His voice got stuck there as his eyes widen in horror.
What the hell was he seeing! Is it a nightmare?
Aahil's throat dried up. He was not able to say a word.
Jannat looked at him confused as she rubbed her arms to remove the pain which was occurring due to the tight hold.
Jannat questioned- Mr. Aahil?
Aahil didn't respond...
Jannat got more confused as she stepped towards Aahil.
Jannat- Mr.Aahil You...Aaahhh!
Aahil screamed as he pulled Sanam away from the place where she was standing- Saaanaaammm! Move...
Jannat got scared as she fell in the strong arms and held the shoulders tightly...just at that moment she heard a gun shot which echoed in the hall.
Jannat closed her eyes tight. Just then again she heard another gun shot.
Jannat hugged Aahil tightly as she got scared for her life.
Suddenly Jannat felt her hand getting wet as she rubbed her hand on the back of Aahil.
Sanam broke the hug as she looked at Aahil nervously.
She became anxious as she found Aahil looking at her weakly as he felt dizzy.
Jannat started to pull her hands from the back completely scared and was hell shocked as she found her hands full of blood.
Just then Aahil fell on the floor loosing his sense completely.
Jannat lost her voice as she looked at senseless Aahil.
After few seconds Jannat screamed her heart out- Aaahilll!

(Flashback Over)

Jannat felt herself completely numb as she remembered what just happened few minutes back. She was scared as if she is loosing something important. She realised Aahil actually saved her from being shot and he himself was now fighting for his life. Jannat came out of her thoughts when she heard a door open. Jannat looked up and found the doctor walking towards Shaad and New Sanam with a worried face. Jannats silently prayed for a good news but her 6th sense told its not exactly what she thinks.
The doctor with a heavy voice declared - We are trying our best but we can't be sure, Mr. Aahil Ibrahim has been injured with two bullets. And with the amount of blood loss he has including internal bleeding , we are not sure if he will able to make it! But lets hope for the best...Nurse bring bags of blood of A+ group.
Jannat felt as if her world just ended there. She had felt same during her stay in Dharamsala...the day when Shaad brought a fainted Aahil in their hotel room.
She felt more connected to this stranger instead of her husband.
She doesn't know why she feels so much close to Aahil when she doesn't know anything about him.
Jannat walked towards the door of OT absent minded.
She looks through the glass hole as tears started to form in her eyes from no where.
Her heart pained seeing Aahil in this condition. The doctor was operating on him as the machine indicates the heartbeat abnormal.
Jannat couldn't stand there anymore as all of sudden she felt suffocated seeing the scenario.
Jannat ran away from that spot as it was becoming really hard for her to watch and bear the pain she was feeling right now.
Tears started to flow from her eyes as she began to cry her heart out.
Jannat ran down the stairs of the hospital and went to the prayer room as she stumbled on her feet .
She wailed...wailed her heart out. All of sudden she started to feel guilty. Guilty for all the bad words she said to Aahil, all the hurtful things she had spoken to Aahil, all the blames she has thrown on him.
He had saved her but instead what has she done! Hurted him in so many ways!
Jannat cried out loud as she fell on the floor helplessly and knelt down before God.
Jannat wailed- Alllah...Forgive me for whatever I have said! I am sorry for every single word I have told to Aahil. I never meant to hurt him...but I just couldn't understand why I feel so connected to him. I am sorry for every mean words I told him. Please Save Him Allah! I beg you, I don't know who he is to me and what he means to me! All I know is save him Oh God...He has saved my life! I pray to you save his life! If anything happens to Mr. Aahil I won't be able to forgive myself! Please Allah!
Jannat remembered all those moments with Aahil. Whenever she needed he was with her!
She always felt safe whenever she hugged, she felt secured whenever he was near, she felt happy whenever he was happy, she felt sad whenever she saw him upset, in the end she felt she felt highly attracted to him.
And Just when she heard the Doctor saying his life was in danger...she felt she just died in that moment!
What is it! She didn't feel this even when Shaad was in hospital bed after being poisoned. Forget about it...she didn't feel anything similar to whatever she felt with Aahil! What was it? Is she in...Love...with Aahil!?

Her thoughts broke as she felt a hand on her shoulder as her body stiffen with the touch.
Jannat quickly turned around and found Shaad looking at her lovingly.
Jannat hesitantly smiled at him through her tears.
Shaad smiled- Its Okay! He will be fine...
Jannat hiccups- will he be okay?
Shaad pulled Jannat into a side hug which made Jannat pulling away immediately.
Shaad confused by her behaviour- ofcourse if Allah wishes to...
Jannat quickly excuses herself as suddenly she wanted to stay alone - errmmm Shaad! I want to wash my face...
Saying this she got up and started to walk out of the room when she heard- Jannat you were praying for Mr. Aahil?
Jannat stopped at her tracks and turned around to face Shaad.
Shaad with an unsure voice- I mean...you seriously have great humanity! But I think now we should go back to mansion. You should rest! I will keep informing you! Too much happened today, you should rest!
Shaad tried to hold her hand when suddenly Jannat shoved him away.
Jannat strictly- No I am fine! I am absolutely fine...I am not going anywhere before I see Mr. Aahil well and good.
Saying this Jannat leaves from the prayer room as Shaad stood confused.
*************

Jannat walked through the corridor as she recalled her earlier thoughts.
Jannat in her mind- What the hell am I thinking? She is in love with Aahil? No how can it be! But I love my husband more than anything! Then...what is it which always makes me restless!

Jannat came out of her thoughts as she bumped into a heavy figure all of a sudden.
Jannat looked up and found Latif starring at her happily.
Latif- Itni kya khoyi hui ho? Ki nazar hi nahi araha samne kaun kaha se araha hai! Chalo achha hai! Wase khabar suni?
Jannat confused- Kya hua?
Latif beaming- Alllah ka lak lak shukar hai! Aahil baba ko hosh agya! Mein toh pareshani mein maari jaa rahi the...Alllaaah...mein toh hui chui mui!
Jannat shocked- What? I mean unhe hosh kab aya! Kisi ne mujhe bataya nahi!
Latif shrugs- Abhi kuch minutes pehle! Woh Kameeni unke room mein apne nakli asooo gira raha hai ese jese kitne fikar hai unko...huh! Mein toh hui chui mui!
Latif makes a disgusting face.
Jannat confused- Kameeni? Kaun?
Latif bites her tongue- Ssshhh Nawab Begum ko batana maat! Mera matlab tha Begum Sahiba matlab Nawab Begum Aahil BaBa ki ICU mein Rone ki mehfeel bana ke rakhi hai!
Suddenly Jannat felt a wierd feeling in herself hearing that Nayi Sanam was in Aahil's room perhaps All Alone!
Latif continued- Acha toh mein chali! Allah...kitna thak gya hu! Kya hoga mera iss nazuk si shareer ka! Mein toh hui chui mui...
Saying this Latif went away.

Jannat wasting No time started to walk towards Aahil's ICU.
********

Jannat could hear loud sobs of Nayi Sanam inside the room as she peeped through it.
She could hear Nayi Sanam crying- Why Ahilji? Kya Jarurat Thi! Why did you endanger yourself for that Stupid Sanam! You know how much I care for you...Then why? I am pregnant with your child! Then Why? What would have happened if anything had happened to you? Answer me Aahil ji! Sanam is gone...When will you understand this?
Jannat was confused what this woman talking about! Sanam? From where did she came? Aahil saved me! Not any Sanam! Then What on earth...wait is Sanam back? Or was Aahil imagining Sanam in her!
Jannat felt wierd and upset suddenly! Something hit in her mind...Aahil did take Sanam's name before getting shot!
Does that mean...Sanam is back or does he see Sanam in her?!
Jannat suddenly feels highly sad as if she will just burst into tears.
Jannat peeps into the room for last time and found Aahil looking down at his bandaged arm absent minded as Nayi Sanam continued blabbering.
Jannat ran from the place as she felt her mind would burst if she stays sometime more.
*******

It has been 3 days since Aahil got discharge from the hospital. He has been brought by wheel chair which was completely against his wish. He seriously hated that 4 wheeled small van. When the doctor suggested him to wander around with wheelchair till he gets proper rest, Aahil felt to strangle the doctor then and there...but he had no choice!

Finally he was home! He was fed up of Nayi Sanam's crocodile tears and tantrums and all the nonsense talks she usually speaks. The only face he wanted to see was of his Sanam. He wondered why she didn't came to meet with him. Though he knows she doesn't remember him . But out of humanity she could have come to see him. Does she hate him that much? He sadly sighs. Shaad, her precious husband came to see him but not a single sign of her was seen. And now even there is no sign of her in the house. Where is she? Lots of guests has come to visit him and between all of them he was searching for one face. Did she leave? Suddenly Aahil couldn't breath. His heart ached at the thought.
So was it really the end? End to their love story?
She didn't even bid last bye to him!?
Aahil was upset with this thought. If she really left then Shaad would have told him or Shaad himself would have been vanished.
Aahil wished she is still around.

Jannat peeped through a pillar as she observed the Nawab. He looks highly disturbed, she wondered why!
Jannat has not gone to the hospital for 3 days. She just couldn't bear the sight of him in this situation.
Somewhere she blamed herself for Aahil's condition.
Jannat has cried her heart out in these 3 days. She was highly confused of her feelings. She couldn't even confess to Shaad. She felt helpless.
And she decided not to face Aahil ever as it was only good for them both. If she is really in love with Aahil it really doesn't matter cause he will always love his Sanam. And there will be no place for her in his heart. She sobbed silently. Wish she could see that lucky woman! Or Wish she was that lucky woman!

*********

It is night. And the whole Nawab Villa looks quite. Nayi Sanam is out for a while. Latif and Khala busy in kitchen with their daily chores. Shaad seems no where around the house perhaps went in search of Shashi Kapoor.
Jannat is in her room laying on the bed upset from whatever happening in her life. She is feeling restless too.
Aahil on other hand is in his room with a laptop in his hand doing some typing amidst of the pain in his arm. Well the truth is he is highly annoyed and irritated with the fact that Jannat can't be seen no where. Where is this girl?
His life was broken already and this situation was making worst.
To divert his mind, he started to do some official work but unfortunately his arm is hurting really bad.
Aahil took a sip of coffee from his side desk as he continued to work.
Aahil muttered- Ouch! Damn!
He felt a pull in his right hand.
Aahil being all irritated called out- Latif! Latiiifff!
Getting no response within few minutes he muttered angrily under his breath- Kaha margya sabke sab! Oh God!
Aahil shouted- Khala...Latif! Damn these people...and Damn this wheelchair!

Jannat stood up hearing Aahil's voice.
Jannat in her mind- is Mr.Aahil okay? Is he in some problem!
Jannat heard Aahil's voice once again calling out Latif.
She wondered- Where is Latif? Should I go and check what's wrong with Mr. Aahil! No No...its not a good idea.
After thinking a lot, Jannat gave up and thought to check on Aahil.
********

Jannat tip toed towards Aahil's room checking carefully if anyone saw her.
Jannat peeped into his room and found annoyed Aahil looking at his laptop screen.
Jannat decided to walk in.
Jannat nervously- Do you need anything?

Aahil without noticing the voice, started to shout all annoyed.
Aahil turned around towards the door as he halted seeing the sight- Latif...you...

Aasmaan tera mera hua
Khwaab ki tarah dhuaan dhuaan
Aasmaan tera mera hua
Saans ki tarah ruaan ruaan

Aahil was stunned maybe surprised too.
Jannat gulped seeing Aahil face to face after long time.

Ho jaaye jahaan tu jaaye
Paaye mujhe hi paaye
Saaye ye mere hain tujh mein samaaye

Aahil couldn't believe his eyes. Jannat aka his Sanam was standing right here. She didn't go anywhere. She was still in this house or was he dreaming!

Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara
Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara

Jannat kept on staring at Aahil's dark orbs. She felt as if getting lost in them. Aahil was afraid to move his eyes away from her as if feeling she will be gone as soon as he will look away.
Jannat stepped inside a bit more and Aahil realised it was no dream, she was real! His Sanam didn't go anywhere.

Tu jo mila toh yun hua
Ho gayi poori adhoori si duaa
Tu jo gaya, toh le gaya sang tere
Mere jeene ki har wajah

Jannat doesn't know what to say! After that incident, she was afraid to open her mouth infront of Aahil! As if scared of her own words and her own feelings. This person has made her mind messed up. Even in her dreams, she used to feel his presence! She feels completely different with him as if in a real world.

Ho jaaye jahaan tu jaaye
Paaye mujhe hi paaye
Saaye ye mere hain tujh mein samaaye

Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara

Suddenly Aahil felt his anger returning to him. He was annoyed, annoyed with himself and with this Jannat. Suddenly he didn't want to talk to her as if afraid to get insulted once more. He quickly moved away his face breaking the eye lock and concentrated on his laptop.
Jannat was confused by his sudden change in behaviour.

Aahil finally spoke in his dark voice- You! I mean Miss Jannat.
Jannat looked at him stunned not knowing what to say.
Jannat stammered- Eeerrrmmm! I...I...
Aahil cut her off- You has finally come to visit me with your grand appearance!
Jannat didn't like that tone a bit.
Aahil looked at her sharply- I appreciate that and I am glad too! So How's you doing...Shaad ki Biwi, Jannat?
Aahil smirked.
Jannat was shocked. Was he taunting her!
Jannat nervously- I...I...
Aahil inturpted- You What? Showing some courtesy just like everyone do?
Jannat didn't like this behaviour of his. She felt insulted.
Jannat boldly- I am not doing any courtesy! I just came...to thank you for saving my life.
Aahil frowned- Thanking me? Wow that's something new! I didn't know you knew how to thank people.
Jannat eyes were filling with tears. This was too much. Why was he being so harsh with her! The tears didn't go unnotice by Aahil. He knew well he was hurting her but he just couldn't control himself. Must be medicines effect! He was feeling highly annoyed at Sanam. Why can't she just understand who is she?
Jannat sadly- What's wrong with you Mr. Aahil? I came to thank you and you are so rude!
Aahil acting shocked- Oh was I rude? I didn't know. Anyways thanks for the information. You may leave...
Aahil didn't want to talk to her anymore as he is afraid he will end up hurting her more and he doesn't want to hurt his Sanam. He loves her too much to do that.
Jannat felt she will break down anytime soon, its better to leave before her emotions take control of her.
Jannat quickly left from there before Aahil could say anything.
Aahil sighed. He doesn't know what to do. It's better if Jannat doesn't come infront of him. This girl frustrates him big time.
********

It's just after an hour, Aahil felt his spine getting numb. It will be better if he just take a nap after taking his medicines. Aahil wheeled towards his bed and was about to take his medicines just when a female hand stopped him from doing so.
Aahil looked at the hand and then towards the person, knowing well who was it.
Jannat standing behind looking beautiful as she smiled at him , holding his left hand softly .

Jannat smiled- Not before you take your dinner, Mr. Aahil!
Aahil frowned- What do you mean?
Just then he saw a tray full of food cooked by Sanam.
Jannat grinned- You forgot to take your dinner, Mr. Aahil! So I brought them for you! You take your dinner first, then the medicines!
Aahil felt as if His Sanam was back from the imaginary character. Jannat looked sexy just like Sanam used to look when she used to speak to him.

Aahil sternly- You don't need to worry for me! My wife is there to do that...
Jannat sounding sexy- I don't care about your wife! What she thinks and what she does! Besides your wife is no where to take care of you, Mr. Aahil.
Jannat slyly smiled.
Aahil was shocked. He didn't expect that...well he didn't expect Jannat to talk in that way. She sounded just like Sanam.
But Aahil didn't buzz.
Aahil frowned- I am not hungry.
Jannat- but you should take some food before medicines.
Aahil suddenly felt as if Jannat was doing all these out of pity.
Aahil spoke out- I don't need your pity Jannat! Take these food away and leave me alone. You don't need to feel guilty! I can take care of myself.

Tumpe miti tumse bani
Tumse hua hai haan khud pe yaqeen
Tu jo nahi to naa sahi
Main hoon yahaan toh tu hai yahin kahin

That's it! Jannat had enough. Here she was dying due to all these messed up thoughts and he is talking about pity.
Jannat angrily stared at Aahil as she spoke- What is the matter with you! I am trying to help you. And you are acting as if you don't care.
Tears started to form in her eyes as she continued- There has not been a single day I didn't think about you! That day when you got shot , do you have any idea what was going through me? How much I think I hate you, things go opposite the next! You didn't even spare my dreams. You torture my mind every moment!
Jannat was crying by now as angry tears rolled down her eyes.
Aahil was more than shocked. He seriously didn't expect this.

Ho jaaye jahaan tu jaaye
Paaye mujhe hi paaye
Saaye ye mere hain tujh mein samaaye

Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara

Jannat continued- I know I said many things which I shouldn't have said. But what should I do? I am confused! Confused about me...confused about the connection I feel with you!
Jannat knelt infront of Aahil as she stared at his eyes.
Jannat stated- I don't know what is the truth! Nor do I want to know. All I know is perhaps I fell in love with you.
Aahil was stunned. His eyes widen at the revelation.
Jannat confessed- I don't know when and why...maybe I am becoming mad! Maybe...I...I am imagining too much! Maybe I fell with the love of your's for Sanam. I...I...
Jannat sobbed as Aahil felt as if he was imagining things.
Jannat- I know you love Your Sanam a lot! And I can never be your Sanam. But still I want to say...
Jannat took a deep breath - I Love You ! I Love You Mr. Aahil! I Confess...I Love You...
Aahil couldn't find any words to what he just heard. He stared at her being all numb. Did Sanam just choose him?

Jannat put her head on Aahil's thighs as she continued to cry.
Jannat sobbing- I Love You Aahil!
Aahil put his hand on her head as she rubbed on her head trailing her hairs not sure what to do.

Jannat looked up a bit with her tear filled eyes- Won't you say anything? Why are you quite? I just confessed my feelings!
Aahil felt out of words for the first time in his life- eerrrmm...I...
Jannat sadly- I know you love Sanam! I know you must be imagining Sanam in me.But can't you love me for once...just as Jannat.
Aahil chuckled hearing her which made Jannat confused.
Aahil knelt down a bit as he pulled Jannat's head up as he wishpered near her lips- There is nothing left to say you said it all!
Aahil took Jannat lips in him before she could speak.
He sucked her upper lips as he took her mouth and started to kiss passionately. Jannat couldn't help but join herself into the passion as she tried to match with him.
Jannat fisted Aahil's hair as she sucked his lips with full passion. Aahil muttered under the kiss- I love you too.
Both of them parted as they looked at each other passionately.
Aahil put his finger under Jannat's chin and made her look at him directly.
Aahil smirked as he said with a wishper- You know one thing, Jannat! Remember I said everything related to Sanam to you in Dharamsala?
Jannat nodded in yes being confused.
Aahil- Actually I never said anything to Jannat! I described my Sanam to my Sanam who forgot herself. ...for who she is!
Jannat looked at Aahil confused not able to understand a thing.
Aahil smiled- You won't understand now!I will tell you when you are ready.
Saying this he took her lips again and started kissing her with all his heart.

********The End********


P.S I seriously didn't want to post this one shot specially after reading prags two shots šŸ˜† cause this shot has same theme as prags Jannat realising she loves Aahil before the pakkao marraigešŸ˜› and secondly I know this was really boring but please do comment still šŸ˜†

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LoveSonu2408 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its nt boaring naffs!very beautiful.i lv it..
hw i wish actually ahil ignore tht annoying jannat..bt koi nehi,u wrote tht..
ahil avoiding her & she cm behind him..
uf!!famous jannt's annoying dialog,koi vi frustrated ho jayga..
finalyy,ahil tried to say truth bt again..
dimag chahe kuch vi kahe dil hameshasabkuch sach kahe jate hai...jannat k dil ne vi apna jawab de dia..
ahil bearing so much pain..the frustration,anger,pain of seeing his love with another man is ahwed very well..
aww!hw much ahil relievd whn jannat confessd..she CHOOSE him...
& the KISS-thr intense love,thr promise evrythng is very beautiful...hihi!ya rit she will understnd later wht ahil meant...
i love the updt.write more pls pls..
&& special mention i love the banner...
šŸ‘
Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 9 years ago
darkice7_12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww, yay! Jannat chose Aahil. Like she was supposed to. 🄳 And I liked how you mirrored the moments when he got hurt the first time. It seems that Sanam needs these jhatkas every time to make her realize her feelings. She's too dense otherwise.

Thanks for the PM. I love the banner! Great story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Firstly, the banner is so awesome šŸ‘šŸ¼

A very intriguing OS I must say and I love it šŸ˜›

From the beginning it was with such a suspense that I just want to read it in a speedy mode šŸ˜†

Jannat is so confused, blaming Aahil for her messed up mind and it was so funny šŸ˜†


Aahil slowly turned around and faced her...and he
realised How Beautiful Sanam Was Looking Today In The Bridal Dress! But for someone else...

I can imagine how he would stand before her and with so much pain, oh Aahil šŸ¤— 😭. So glad that he could control himself and be very calm. And Jannat, why on earth is she yelling at him!?😔 She wants answers, but is not ready to hear the truth. I loved it when Aahil called out that Shaad is a lier and Jannat for being stupid. Way to go Aahil šŸ‘


I was just wondering, who shot Aahil??? šŸ˜•


Jannat took a deep breath - I Love You ! I Love You Mr. Aahil! I Confess...I Love You... ā¤ļø


Aahil- Actually I never said anything to Jannat! I described my Sanam to my Sanam who forgot herself. ...for who she is!

Love the above quotes šŸ˜‰
Aah, I was really hoping that he would show her their wedding photo šŸ˜”

The sad part is, that I don't understand the convo in Hindi šŸ˜” . And I was like this šŸ˜”šŸ˜†

Very beautiful OS and thx for the pm!



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Long time, Nafs. šŸ¤—
Hoping to catch up with everything I missed in Sahil land this weekend..including Prags'...

So I begin with yours.

Such a timeless couple- Sahil.ā¤ļø I have moved on, carrying them in my heart.

Lovely shot! šŸ‘

I am loving all the versions what should have been..

So Jannat finally came to terms with her feelings...chose her heart over her brain...
Loved how Ahil wanted her to come and meet him...and she stalled. Until she finally made up her mind...to disregard her husband and his wife...and simply cook a meal for him. She knew that'd make him happy, right?😳 Finally she accepted her love for him triumphed over any shame she felt having feelings for him.

And I loved his response...he found it so funny that he did not have to look for his Sanam in Jannat anymore...there was simply no Jannat at all.šŸ˜†

Keep writing. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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šŸ‘ Lovely Banner. šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Naff! Shit man! Okay, so I didn't know why you said "shit man" on my story but clearly now YOU do know why I said that šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Aww, you are so sweet! So what if its on the same theme! And why you thought of not posting it? And mostly, why you thought its BORING? Hell, not even close to it! Don't underestimate yourself! šŸ˜†

You are an amazing writer! 😳

Now to the story! Can I just I loved the scenario! The gun shot and all the rush, and how she was so concerned, her guilt, and everything!
Specially his ignorance and annoyance! Haha HOW much I love his annoyance over her, you have no idea! šŸ˜†

And ofcourse, how you incorporated the same Manmarziyan scene all over! Can I fangirl over how Sanam behaved so sexy there?! šŸ˜³šŸ˜† Damn! How much I missed it! Thank you for that!

And ofcourse, the KISS! ā¤ļø How he was so happy to be chosen by HER and how he would now tell everything to her..

You say it was similar?! Yes it was but yet different! I think you ended a little differently! You'll realise it when you'll read the 2nd part of my story! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

But this was so amazing! You are awesome, girl! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome... Very few couples leave a mark like Sahil did. they are such a lovely couple.
it was gr8 to read how Jannat chose Aahil...finally.
her blame game...šŸ˜”šŸ˜†
do write more if you think of something. it is a pleasure to read. I can't write to save my life, but I look fw to works of other Sahilians.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

its nt boaring naffs!very beautiful.i lv it..

hw i wish actually ahil ignore tht annoying jannat..bt koi nehi,u wrote tht..
ahil avoiding her & she cm behind him..
uf!!famous jannt's annoying dialog,koi vi frustrated ho jayga..
finalyy,ahil tried to say truth bt again..
dimag chahe kuch vi kahe dil hameshasabkuch sach kahe jate hai...jannat k dil ne vi apna jawab de dia..
ahil bearing so much pain..the frustration,anger,pain of seeing his love with another man is ahwed very well..
aww!hw much ahil relievd whn jannat confessd..she CHOOSE him...
& the KISS-thr intense love,thr promise evrythng is very beautiful...hihi!ya rit she will understnd later wht ahil meant...
i love the updt.write more pls pls..
&& special mention i love the banner...
šŸ‘

thanks,i always wanted aahil to ignore jannat after that jungle sequence but it never happened šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all, I'm in love with that banner! šŸ‘ Beautiful creation. Such a great story, Naff. I really enjoyed it. The confusion and need was very well portrayed. Thanks for sharing this one, Naff. šŸ¤—


It's always a delight to read some work from you. ā¤ļø

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