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Originally posted by: ashlesha2

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awesome dear
it was to the fullest



thanks a lot 😃⭐️

im glad you liked it 😃

@bold , dont say sorry 😃 its completely ok 😃
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Originally posted by: AmritaIPKKND

Chapter 3 is brilliant!! Well done!!😊


thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️

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hi guys , sorry for the late update hope you enjoy this part , please leave your feedback and likes 😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️



Chapter 4

He was coming towards her... Abd she didnt know where to go... She was blocked. ... Asad continued to unbottun his shirt. .. His full chest was visible now... He was now quite near her ... He unbottened the last button of shirt ... Zoya looked down ... She couldnt face him... What if she couldnt cantrol herself in frobt of him .. . What if she says those three words ...

Laana kuch baadal laana

Unko mujh par barsaana

Boondein teri ho jinme, unse bhigaa do...

Zoya . ( in her mind ) yeh akhir karne kya yalein hai ? Zara bhi sharam nahi hai inhe?

He removed his Shirt and kept it on the sofa ... he was just a metre far from her now ... zoya to took a step back in shyness and nrvousness ... But she stepped wrong and was incapable to maibtain her balance , hence fell on the armchair ...

Na yaad teri tujhko

Na yaad mujhe hoon main

Aa mujhko pehan le tu

Aa tujhko odh loon ma

Asad walked towards her ... Slowly... He reached her ... He then placed his hands on both sides of the armchair locking her in his strong arms and with his eyes on zoya... looking at her pationately... He slowly leaned foward ... His eyes were giving her such an intense look ...it was like he was going to kiss hr with his eyes ... Zoya was so lost in his eyes that she couldnt even noticed that his bare chest was so close to hr heart ...

Katra katra main girun

Jism pe tere theharun

Katra katra main girun

Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

He brought his face really close to hers ... With barely few cm of distance between them ... Between their faces... Between their lips... They could feel each others breaths easily on their faces. ... Zoya closed her eyes due to the proximity . ...

For a moment ... Asad just looked at herface ... Staring lovingly at her eyes ... Her hr blushy cheeks ... Her trembling lips...

Khud se khaali ho jaaun

Aaja tujhse bhar jaaun

Tinka tinka jal jaaun

Aise jalaa do.. ho..

After looking at her face ... He came even more closer to her ... Zoya felt his presence even more closer ... Her breathing was alrrady so fast ... .. Tgat even asad could hear it. ... Their lips were just few mm away ...

He softly blew in her eyelids delibrately... Making her shiver due to his actionn... He then blew in her lips ...

Tarun main tan pe tere

Thehrun angon pe tere

Gehari jo khawahish teri

Unme duba do..

He stood there ... Locking her in that position after blowing in her lips for a while ... Zoya slowly opened hereyes ... He was very close to her

... His eyes were looking at her big beautiful eyes ... He moved his eyes to her cheek ... Asad leaned forward at her side and placed a soft kiss on her cheek...zoya closed her eyes . .. ..

Na yaad teri tujhko

Na yaad mujhe hoon main

Aa mujhko pehan le tu

tujhko odh loon main

He then looked at her eyes ... Her eyelids ... And she was really afraid... Her expressiobs were of fear... . She was scared . ... What was he gonna do Next... He looked at her lovingly and patiinately ... Then... Slowly. . ... He started backibg off... zoya noticed that so she opened her eyes ... He was standing in front of her ...

Qatra qatra main girun

Jism pe tere theharun

Katra katra main girun

Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

Zoya stood up... And he turned around ... In that moment... It started thundering... Which made zoya really scared and unknowningky... Out of fear... She hugged asad from behind. ... Placing her hands near his chest... And closed her eyes in fear...

Z. Mr khan mujhe chod ke mat jaiye...! Please mujhe chod ke mat jaiye ... ! Please mr khan mere paas rahiye...

Her hands were on his bare chest and hr body was in direct contact with his back...

He placed his hands on hr hsnds for a while closing his eyes... Wishing this moment between them to freeze ... Ifhe had been given a chance to wish... He would have asked for having close to him just like how theywere now. ...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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😳
Both so in love but not telling the other...
This was such a sweet update...
And it made me blush too! lol
I loved the update and can't wait to read on!
Update soon
Edited by fatima30 - 9 years ago
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Such a sweet update...
Loved it a lot...
Please continue soon...
Thanks fr pm dear...
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Such a beautiful update dear !
To tty loved it
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Awesome Parts Viny
Don't understand wat Asad n Zoya feels for each other
Do they hate each other wen in senses?
Then why they married each other?
Love how u r giving musical romance in every part
Plz, write longer parts to get to d main plot soon

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