New AsYa FF - Rejected by Husband ~ Epilogue ~ Pg. 147 - Page 96

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
The surprise party was great. He introduced her to his family. Liked the talks between Zoya & his mother & sister. All enjoyed her birthday party. Last part was intense. He clearly told her what he felt for her & what he did after realisation but it was late. He prayed for daughter as it got him more time. The gift was wonderful. Waiting for new story from your side to start. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was awesome and amazing..!
I loved the ending..:)
Finally he told her everything. .
at last love won..:)
This was a great story .
thank you for sharing it with us. .:)
Hope you'll come back with another one..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful ending.. will miss reading it :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
i have enjoyed this very much...it was emotional romantic drama...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am sad that this ff is finished but I loved how you tied up all the loose strings and gave every character a proper ending. 👏 very well written overall. LOVED it!!!!! thanks for all the PM, I hope you write something new soon!

Aisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
This story was amazing. I loved it. Do write some other novel too. Im not sure if I will like the sequels cuz i got the closure in this. Hope to read another novel.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful ending
Asya conversation was just perfect
Zoya's surprise party organised by Asad was lovely...
Can't believe the story has ended...

Please continue to write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved it
YAS
You should totally write the whole series
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unres pg135
Will miss it 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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Wow a woman of her word
U promise tehs u will finish before 21 Oct and u did
Love the update
Sorry to see it end
But it was a very beautiful heartwarming ending
We got to see Asad as raw as he can get with all his messy emotions
Aww wife trumps family ..the woman thr hold his heart in her hands
So she can crush it when she want too
Aww her akwardness to kiss him good morning
Love the surprise birthday party
Humi and ayaan were the culprits along with Assad
She was shocked when humi told her she knew Asad love hr for a long time
Aww Rehan always knows how to tease Asad he is so jealous
His family surprised was nice glad they came around
And dint realizes Asad told them the truth till after his abbu death
And she got thumbs up scoring points for meeting rashid even thought she was despising their son
So she brought peace to a dying man bcuz he could have seen th love she had for his son
So happy with the talks they had both in the morning and the night after the party
It clear all her doubts it made it all better
His gift to her was MA he did tht and wouldn't have care if his family disapprove
So mahek was the ice princess he thought he wanted
But then seeing the innocent beauty I feel don't of him some raw passion awaken he never knew existed
And he would have had her so much time had her abbu not spoil it
But he still couldn't control and his life became the one thing he didn't want an
Emotional mess where he could satiate himself with his wife he just wanted more and more
Until he couldn't get her anymore and it drove him crazy thinking he lost her and in the process of losing her forever
The baby he so desperately wanted became the noose around his neck
And so he prayed for a daughter to get his second chance his redemption his time to make it all better his time to worship the woman he loves like no other the woman he was ready to walk away from his family so many times for the love of his life the mother of this child and future children the woman who holds his heart in her hands
Wow I will miss this so much
Will we be seeing u with something new
U r my bedtime story I have to have every night
Lots of love for these amazing stories👏



Awww such a lovely comment
Thank you Anopama for being such a wonderful reader
And this story ends too. The end was beautiful
Will start another story very soon 😃

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