New AsYa FF - Rejected by Husband ~ Epilogue ~ Pg. 147 - Page 41

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazedfan19

woohoo I am so happy for Zoya and how she told him off!! Zoya is finally standing up for herself which is amazing to see, no one deserves to be treated like that. I love her attitude!! I feel that Asad will be repenting soon. Maybe Zoya can support herself by opening up her own jewellary business in the future? thanks again for the lovely update!!! amazingly written!!

Aisha



Thank you for reading and comnenting 😊
Glad u liked this update
Oh, Asad is surely going to repent 😉
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -simmi-

Wow fantastic update dear!!
Omg the last words of zoya that was just amazing 👏
Well in my opinion asad was partly wrong coz he felt trapped and blamed zoya for his sorrow
Which any person would have, guys we are not saint atleast m not so who m i to judge him when in reality most of people would do the same!!
See asad was in misconception that zoya was well aware of the deal where she was not & he love/loved someone else so obviously he would hate her or feel trapped although its not zoya's fault but if we will be forced to marry someone we don't love or like our state of mind would be the same as asad we'll definitely hate the other person !! 😊

But it surely doesn't mean that zoya is wrong she was too naive that time and may be still is and now i like the way she is fighting with him for her rights

After knowing the truth i expect asad to change that stupid monologue of his but alas!! atleast he is trying to change after discovering the truth and i know as much as time zoya need to forgive him, he also need some time set things out in his mind afterall it is not easy for him to accept the truth when he so strongly despise a girl and now he lost the reason to despise her it was so sudden for him too 😊

Before asking forgiveness we have to ready ourselves to ask forgiveness though we have guilt again human nature its very difficult for us to accept we r wrong although we know we are!!!!

Srry kuch zyada ho gya nahi 😆 i just want people to understand asad's POV 😊

But hey again an awesome update and pls do continue asap 😊


Very well written Simmo..
Agreed completely..
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Posted: 9 years ago
I better comment here for this chapter before the next one comes up.
Well I would just say that both are right in their own way..
I just read simmi's comment above n I agree to what she said.

But here now after knowing the truth asad is trying to mend his ways.
Though we don't know why agreed for the wedding, but he did marry her.

Since he despised her he never took interest in her life.
Spending 18 months in a loveless n disrespectful marriage is not easy.

Her self esteem was so broken coz of her father.
She did what she liked but not even her husband is aware of her own workshop in his own house.
So this surely is painful..

Though I see asad trying to rectify his acts but again his monologue..
I guess it must have come out of his mouth just put of habit.

So I would say I want their miseries to end soon and have some light moments with each other.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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aww juhi u r all smiles tht is ok was too caught up in Quantico😊

loved the update
so no hovering asad as zoya returns home
but she found herself in her bed she share with him the next morning even though she didnt sleep there
well obviously he brought her
so the nausea has zoya thinking is it possible and hoping it is not so not when she have a chance of getting her life in control
wow even I almost got a heart attack asad came home early to spend time with his wife
so she designs jewellery and he just found tht out
he is a very observing for man who knows nothing abt his wife he remembers humi jewellery she wore
so he thinks she is good and should show her work but she dont and he is upset knowing it is her father words who made her think so
I know I am not the bride u would have choose for yourself 😭it hurt zoya to say tht and me too
she know things abt him and he thinks it as stalking really asad when u love someone u learn abt them
but he had no time to know nothing abt her and now he says she has been keeping secrets
aww asad asad asad just bcuz u know a woman physically doesnt mean u know her just bcuz u can take her to heaven and back in bed doesnt make it lovemaking
as zoya called it is is just sex or as a another beautiful word I like to say they f***ed
oh boy he didnt like tht but it was so true and the truth hurts
he felt trapped and he resented her ...haha she told not past tense but present he says things change😕
y does men think they can fix everything with sex
asad knows once he touch zoya she is jelly in his hands and he uses tht against her
thier coming together could have been beautiful if he didnt say those words at the end
give me a son his constant mantra
because this time he made eye contact and zoya saw what she never saw before but still he holds back lets see for how long
he hurted zoya with his words and she hurt him by say she is going to do what he does before
scrub him off of her
aww asad now it hurts he dont want her to say it was just sex
wow he goes to comfort her when he sees her tears but she distance
he is not ashamed of her really so how he never took her anywhere met anyone related to him
seen his friends know nothing abt him
sorry asad guess it will not be so easy for u a long road ahead.
waiting





Hi Anopama,

As usual such a wonderful feedback 😃
My problem is the same with this hero in this story. I do understand why he did things which he did but my heart doesn't accept or forgives him.

Why didn't he believe her for 18 months when she kept saying she didn't understand what deal he was talking about. 😕

And in this chapter when he again asks for a son, I just lost my patience 😡
I don't know how the heroine can tolerate him 😡

As you can see I just hate this guy so much 😆

I hate the hero in this story not my Asad Ahmad Khan 😳 ❤️

What time Quantico finishes? I can update little later.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I better comment here for this chapter before the next one comes up.

Well I would just say that both are right in their own way..
I just read simmi's comment above n I agree to what she said.

But here now after knowing the truth asad is trying to mend his ways.
Though we don't know why agreed for the wedding, but he did marry her.

Since he despised her he never took interest in her life.
Spending 18 months in a loveless n disrespectful marriage is not easy.

Her self esteem was so broken coz of her father.
She did what she liked but not even her husband is aware of her own workshop in his own house.
So this surely is painful..

Though I see asad trying to rectify his acts but again his monologue..
I guess it must have come out of his mouth just put of habit.

So I would say I want their miseries to end soon and have some light moments with each other.



Really happy to read your feedback.
I do agree with Simmi but I was really angry when he asked for a son again. 😡
He does try really hard to fix this marriage but there is just this one particular thing he does later in the story which make me dislike him a lot. I will point that out when the story reches to that stage.
I like stories that have 'happily ever after' but this is one story where I wished Zoya do forgive him but still don't accept him back in her life.

Will be updating around the same time today.
And will be looking forward to read your feedback also 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Really happy to read your feedback.
I do agree with Simmi but I was really angry when he asked for a son again. 😡
He does try really hard to fix this marriage but there is just this one particular thing he does later in the story which make me dislike him a lot. I will point that out when the story reches to that stage.
I like stories that have 'happily ever after' but this is one story where I wished Zoya do forgive him but still don't accept him back in her life.

Will be updating around the same time today.
And will be looking forward to read your feedback also 😃


Ohh I thought when he asked for a son again I thought it must have come out just out of habit.
But if this was on purpose then really I'm.angry with him.
This story is going on a very different route ...
Where u can't really decide what is right and what is wrong..

And yes last chapter I wanted to ask whether Ayaan is aware of asad and zoya's relationship dynamics..


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



Ohh I thought when he asked for a son again I thought it must have come out just out of habit.
But if this was on purpose then really I'm.angry with him.
This story is going on a very different route ...
Where u can't really decide what is right and what is wrong..

And yes last chapter I wanted to ask whether Ayaan is aware of asad and zoya's relationship dynamics..




I think asking for son did come out from his mouth out of habit but still I was angry. But my readon for disliking is something else which I will tell later. Don't worry next chapter have some lighter moments. And his redemption will start from the moment Zoya will tell him about pregnancy. Which will be from next to next chapter

Ayan and humeira do know some of the things about their relationship but not entirely.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Hi Anopama,

As usual such a wonderful feedback 😃
My problem is the same with this hero in this story. I do understand why he did things which he did but my heart doesn't accept or forgives him.

Why didn't he believe her for 18 months when she kept saying she didn't understand what deal he was talking about. 😕

And in this chapter when he again asks for a son, I just lost my patience 😡
I don't know how the heroine can tolerate him 😡

As you can see I just hate this guy so much 😆

I hate the hero in this story not my Asad Ahmad Khan 😳 ❤️

What time Quantico finishes? I can update little later.


Who don't love AAK good or bad
No need to update later
Quantico is only on Sunday and finishes at 11 pm
So no worries stay the same
By self and Juhi was their the same time
But guess she pressed post faster
No worries I can share first spot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Zoya pregnant that's superb. ...but if it is a girl I want to know asad reaction. ..will he be supportive ...but before that I want them to have a lip kiss
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear
Asad came home early to spend time with her. He like her jewellery designs. Long way to go for asad to pacify his wife & rectify his mistakes. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

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