Azma Os ~Woh lamhe , woh baatein ~ Updated, page 5 !

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heartbroken1

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi guys , i am thinking to write an os on Azma i have written a teaser hope you enjoy it and hope i have created some interest , please guys tell me if you like it and if i shoukd continue it and also hit the like button

Teaser ~ Woh lamhe ,woh baatein ~

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,
Koi na jaane,

He was standing in front of his window , shirtless in a full moon night ... His deep and enigmatic light brown eyes were turning red ...
But in his mind ... He had just one thought ... Of his wife ... And that one night ...

Thi kaisi raatein,
Hooo, barsaatein,

That one rainy night ... Where there was only him and her ...

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

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Devakshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hey it's interesting do continue soon

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 10 years ago

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yeh, it looks interesting. plz continue, Vinni !

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Asheley

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice start dear

please continue it dear

i will be waiting for further updates

Thanks for PM dear

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Eshita

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey nice teaser. Hope u do continue soon and do pm me.

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Beautiful teaser

I think it is the first time that someone is writing an azma os where they both are husband and wife

Really looking forward to it

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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Aimee

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Interesting prologue!!! I think you should continue!!!

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floral

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hey its nice starting dear plzzz do continue soon😊

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 10 years ago

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lovely 👏

do continue ...

and once agin my fav song. 😊

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MyAnastasia18

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Posted: 10 years ago

What are you waiting for? Go for it!!!! This is just amazing...definitely want to read more..

Plz pm me

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