Azma Os ~Woh lamhe , woh baatein ~ Updated, page 5 ! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailu123

wow so interesting plzz continue soon



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ill post it now 😃😃⭐️
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Originally posted by: moonlight_shine

sounds very interesting !
pm me please when u update :)



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im glad you liked it 😃⭐️

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hi guys, thanks a lot for your comments and likes , hope you like this OS on Azma , please tell me how it is and also please hit the like button 😃😃⭐️⭐️




Wo Lamhe, wo baatein



He was standing in front of his window , shirtless in a full moon night ... His deep and enigmatic light brown eyes were turning red ...

But in his mind ... He had just one thought ... Of his wife ... And that one night ...

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

Flashback starts ...

He is standing in front of his car ... He is wearing a white shirt and black trousers ... And she is right besides him wearing a white and pink punjabi suit with floral dupatta and her hair is loose ...

He. Mahira ... Car kharab ho gayi hai ... Aur yahan aas paas koi mecanic bhi nahi hai...

Mahira touched his shoulder and he looked at her ... His eyes were craving for her beautiful smile ... And those beautiful big eyes ... Looking at her his bigest problems seems to become nothing ... A slight smile drew on his face when he looked at her

Mahira . Azaad ... Koi baat nahi ...

Na main jaanoun,

Na tu jaane,

Kaisa hai ye mausam,

Koi na jaane,

A. Mahira chalo car mein behttehain...

And he opened the door and mahira sat ... And azaad sat down right besides her...

Mahira was loiking at the window and azaad ... He was looking at her ... With a smile on his face ... Looking at her lovingly ...She looked at him ... And they had an intense eyelock... He unknowingly ... Was leaning towards mahira...and mahira too... Was leaning towards him...

Kahi se yeh fizaa aayi,

Ghamon ki dhoop sang laayi,

Khafaa hogaye hum,

Judaa hogaye hum,


But suddenly... He had flashes of his real self... A darinda... A man who is willing to drink bloid in a full moon night... And he suddenly backed off and got out of the car... Mahira was left completed shocked ... She married him forcefully by kb insistance... But deep inside.. She had fallen in love with him...

Azaad put his hands in his pockets... And was standing at the back side of his car, controlling his emotions ... Standing thete helplessly ... Mahira got out of the car as well ... But when she was almost there... She stepped wrong and got her anckle hurt ...

M. Ouch !!!!

A. Mahira !!! ( he went towards mahira and heldher by her waist , and mahira placed her hand on his shoulder ... She looked at him... He was really worried ...

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

At that moment , it started to rain... , azaad saw a cottage near there ... So he lifted her up in his arms ... Mahira placed her hands on the back of his neck to hold on him tightly... He took her there...

They entered the cottage , and Azaad placed her on the ghaas phuss next to the little window ... From where some light was coming and then he turned around to light up the lentarns abd the fire ... When he was lightening the lentern mahira eyes were looking at his back well toned back which was visible due to his wet white shirt ... He then turmed around and walked towards the wood pieces and he lit them... Abd then he looked at mahira ... Who was staring at him intensely... He removed his shirt and mahira lowered her eyes dye to shyness... He kept his shirt near the bonfire to let it dry ...

Saagar ki,

Gehraayi se,

Gehra hai,

Apna pyaar,

Sehraoun ki,

In hawaon me,

Kaise aayeee-gi bahaar,

Still in the eyelock He walked towards her with slow and steady steps .. And with pationate and ibtence glare ...Mahiras heartbeat was increasing as he came closer ... He reached her ... His well toned body... His bare chest was in front of mahira ... He got onto his knees and still lost in the etelock. ...he placed his hand on the nape of her neck ...mahira closed her eyes with that touch and a visible blush appeared on her cheeks ... Azaad sawthat blush... And he leaned forward ... Mahira started feeling his breath ... Soon... Their noses touched ... Azaad leaned a bit more and placed a kiss on her cheek... Which made mahira shiver... He then... Kissed her other cheek... Eventually...he looked at her pink lips... And leaned a bit more foward...

M. Achi !!! ( mahira sneezed )

Kahan se ye hawa aayi,

Ghataayen kaali kyoun chhaayi,

That sneeze brought Azaad back to his senses and he backd off ...completely shocked...mahira sneezed once more and azaad went to bring his shirt which he had kept to dry ( it wasnt wet now ) and he walked where mahira was sitting... Shyly ...and he got on his knees ... He slowly removed her wet dupatta and covered her with his full sleeves white shirt ... while coveribg her.. Their eyes met and... They had an intense eyelock but... This time ...their eyes were asking questions... Questions that they didnt know the answers of... Azaad tried to get up. ... But mahira grabbed his hand and didntlet him go... He turned around and azaad sat there ... Her eyes were teary ... And she hugged azaad tightly ... Placibg her head on his chest ... azaad ... Hugged herback ... Carresing her back and then ...her hair ... Soon they slept in each others arms listening to the sound of the rain.

Flashback ends.

Khafaa hogaye hum,

Judaa hogaye hum,


Mahira comes from behind and hugs Azaad tighly placing her head on his bare back ... His eyes which were now red ... Began getting normal ...abd tutbed into hus light brown eyes ... He smiled and and touched mahiras hands which were on his chest ... He turned around and cupped Mahiras face in his large hands... He leaned foward and kissed her forehead ...

A. I love you mahira

M. I love you too Azaad

She hugged him after those 3 beautiful words ... He hugged her back ... And they were lost in the most pationate embrace

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awww, that was a cute OS, you wrote it very well!!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Amazing os
Loved reading it
Please write more😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
hey darling !
this is lovely, romantic and hot as well. liked it very much ! write us some more ! and nice song selection !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Beautiful OS 😳
very well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awesome os. Loved it😳
Write more stories on AzMa.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
cuteee lovely os!!!

me likesss...

continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Lovely OS dear,loved d car n cottage scenes 😳 esp dt line "Azaad placed her on ghaas phoOs in cottage" n when he was leaning twrds her pink lips n she sneezed 'Acchhi' n bckground men sng Kahan se ye hawa aai 😆 dt was cute n funny 🤣 🤣
thanks fr pm 😃

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