Episode 762 - AzMa - The Way I Wld Hv Liked It 2 Hv Been- - Ch 3 pg 3

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My take on how it should have been and how it should flow...😊
I broken this down into three parts or chapters.

Chapter 1

Mahira got into the auto-rickshaw... She barely could see, blinded by the tears streaming down her face.

"Chaliye" she said to the rickshaw driver, her voice thick with hurt of leaving him and with what he had said. She broke into heart-wrenching sobs as she pulled away from him. The driver, shocked, glanced into the mirror and he felt sorry for her.


Azad, walked towards the gate and watched her getting further and further away from him. He clasped his chest. The pain was unbearable. It was like his heart was being wrenched from his body. He started rubbing his chest to make the pain go away. He had to keep blinking his eyes to keep his vision clear as he didn't want to lose sight of her till she disappeared out of sight.

"I love you, Mahira. I love you" whispered Azad brokenly. "Even though I love you beyond the end of time, you are not safe with me. I am a monster. I rather you hate me and be safe than love me and be in harm's way. Forgive me, darling for hurting you so bad. I had to. You are the most beautiful woman in this world and beyond to me.".


When Azad could see the auto no more, he raised his eyes to the heavens and cried. "Muala mere, please take care of Mahira. Please, Maula, make sure that she comes to no harm. She is pure. I am the wicked one." He then turned slowly to turn back into the house. He was like the walking dead. He just could not step inside the house. He sat down by the steps.


Kainat was watching the proceedings from a distance and her heart went out to both Azad and Mahira. She was sure that Azad would have sent Mahira away.

"Azad bhaijaan always had a weird sense of logic", she thought to herself. "I have faith in Mahira but I need to get some sense into Azad bhaijaan". She scanned through her playlist, till she found what she wanted and tapped on the play icon.

The song wafted over the air... and Azad hearing this drifted to his moments with Mahira.


(Song from Anwar: Maula mere maula)

maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - (4)

My Lord, my God...

aankhein teri - (2), kitni haseen

Your eyes, so beautiful,

(Azad remembered the time when she stared into his eyes...He remembered he was drowning in her eyes..)

ke inka aashiq, mein ban gaya hoon<

that I have become their lover.

mujhako basa le, iname tu

Give me place in these eyes.

(ishq hai

love is

maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2)

My Lord, my God...

ke inka aashiq, mein ban gaya hoon

that I have become their lover

mujhako basa le, iname tu

give me place in these eyes

mujhase yeh har ghadi, mera dil kahe

every moment, my heart says to me

tum hi ho usaki aarzoo

you only are its (heart/moment) desire

mujhase yeh har ghadi, mere lab kahe

every moment, my lips say to me

teri hi ho sab guftagoo

every conversation about you only

(Azad remembered their time together at the old forsaken barn, when the tire had gone flat..)
baatein teri itni haseen, main yaad inko jab karta hoon

your talks are so beautiful, when I remember those

phoolon si aaye, khushaboo

I smell fragrance of flowers

rakh loon chhupa ke main kahin tujhako

let me hide you somewhere

saaya bhi tera na main doon

I will not share even your shadow

rakh loon bana ke kahin ghar, main tujhe

I will keep you in a home that I'll build

saath tere, main hi rahoon

and only I will live with you

zulfen teri, itni ghani

Your tresses, so dense

(Azad smiled as he remembered her smile when he sprayed water to help her clean up when she fell into the mud puddle)

dekh ke inako, yeh sochata hoon
I see them and think

saaye me, inake main jiyoon
I have to live under their shade

(ishq hai
love is
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3
My Lord, my God...

mera dil yahi bola, mera dil yahi bola,
my heart said only this

yaara raaj yeh usane hai mujh par khola
oh dear, it (heart) has divulged the secret that

ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
one whose heart is filled with love

usko pasand karta hai maulaa) - 3
God loves him too.

He saw her then in front of him. He stared at her in wonder, how could I have ever asked her to go. He stepped closer to her and pulled her tight into his arms, promising himself that he would never let her leave from his sight again. He gently cupped her face in his hands, bent his kissing her forehead, both her eyes, he moved his face slowing down, leaving trails of hot kisses, on his journey to her luscious lips...He lifted his hands and with his fingers, he gently traced her lips...



For those who would like to listen to the song.

http://sound2.mp3slash.net/indian/anwar/anwar01(www.songs.pk).mp3


CHAPTER 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4477191#p127233337 pg 1

CHAPTER 3: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4477191&TPN=3&#p127453264 pg 3



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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome post
cnt wait for next part
thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i just love this song one of my favourite
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Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

awesome post
cnt wait for next part
thnx




Thank you.
I will do so soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankiecool

i just love this song one of my favourite




It has become one of my favourites too.
I had just chanced upon this song.
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Chapter 2


The auto-driver didn't know what to do...Mahira had started bawling...


"She's going to have no more tears left in her body" he thought to himself. "if she goes on like this.. I wonder if I should turn back?" and then she said stopped...The driver glanced at the mirror and watched in amazement as anger jostled her out of her bawling. Mahira hadn't actually believed Azad would have let her go. She knew that Azad was watching her from some hidden place of his and that he would stop her from actually leaving. She thought that they would have had a good clearing-the-air fight, followed by pledges of eternal love.


Instead, the foolish man had let her go. He did not even come to say goodbye, stupid Mr.Darinda, she thought with a hearty stomp of her feet on the auto floor. The driver jumped in his seat...


"I hope she's not going to turn violent" he thought to himself... "maybe I should just turn back"...


The fury in her started building up, as she kept moving further away from Azad...Blast him...He had invaded her thoughts and upset her balance with her "I love you Mahira"...


"What kind of man does that?" she asked aloud of no one. The auto-driver watching her through the mirror thought it was wise to keep from saying anything. "STOP" she shouted. The auto-driver breaked...luckily he was wasn't going fast...She hit her head against the rod and screamed at him, "What is wrong with all you men?"... "Sorry ma'am", said that auto-driver apologetically. "but you scared me with your Stop, though I should have expected it"...

But Mahira, did not hear him...as she went on a rant... "Am I that easily forgettable, then? Is it that easy to say I love you' in one breath and in the other, say get lost' ?'


The auto-driver cleared his throat. She looked at him blankly, took the clearing of throat as a negation. "No, you're right. I bloody well am not forgettable. The man's crazy for me and doesn't even really realise it". She remembered him crying out loud "I love you Mahira" and the tears that fell on her arm while she had been turned to stone. She hoped he was remembering her and it was tearing him apart. But even if she was sure that he was being tortured by the memories of what he'd tossed away, it wouldn't be enough to ease the emptiness inside.


"How dare he turn his back on me? On us?" She muttered...as she got off and stomped around in the middle of the road. "What gives him the right to say there's nothing? Am I to listen to him and go away quietly, like some schoolgirl afraid of punishment?"


As if in sympathy with her dark emotions, the heavens opened with little drops of rain...but Mahira did not notice it...She continued pacing, going around in circles around the auto. The auto-driver thought he would go dizzy watching but knew better than to interrupt her...


"Thinks I'll just sit with my mouth shut, does he? Accept what he says as a declaration, looking down on me from his snooty nose and go on with my life?. She tapped her fingers impatiently against the side of the auto. "And why shouldn't her think that, Mahira, you great idiot? Didn't you walk away, as well? Didn't you let him slip through your fingers without ever once telling him that you love him?" "I like you Azad sir" she said to herself mocking herself and then cringing.


Lowering to admit as it was, Mahira had to concede that she had allowed her own pain and disappointment to walk away. If she hadn't been so stunned by him telling her that he didn't love her, that she was ugly and the woman...and the woman... and her temper rose again, she might have stood her ground. She might have told him exactly what she thought of a man too afraid to love. She might have...


"And this is doing no good at all. Not for either of us, What good is it to shout the sky down when he's not here to listen?"


He had to listen, she thought. She had to make him listen. Her thoughts and her feet slammed to a stop and she whirled around, staring at the auto...


Before she could think better of it, she walked directly to the auto...patted the auto driver on his shoulder...looking at him weirdly when he ducked and shied away from her hand in fear... "Weird man...but then men are weird and my Mr. Darinda is the weirdest of them all", she thought to herself and go into the auto.


"Mr Darinda, you've no idea what's in store for you". ...she shouted to no-one in particular...



TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I read both parts 2gethr.very well written,gd work...
The song is one of my fav song.
Aww!our cupid cute kainath,azad in tears thinking abt mahira,
why thy dnt undrstnd pushing her away,thy hurt thr lvd one's more...
Yes,mahira!UR stupid Mr.darinda...lol.
Poor auto driver,seriously azad hv no idea wht his lady lv gonna do with him...lol
Btw,the kiss!was azad imagining or actualy hapening?
Cnt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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read both the updates... very well written 😳
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

I read both parts 2gethr.very well written,gd work...
The song is one of my fav song.
Aww!our cupid cute kainath,azad in tears thinking abt mahira,
why thy dnt undrstnd pushing her away,thy hurt thr lvd one's more...
Yes,mahira!UR stupid Mr.darinda...lol.
Poor auto driver,seriously azad hv no idea wht his lady lv gonna do with him...lol
Btw,the kiss!was azad imagining or actualy hapening?
Cnt soon



Thank you...
I had never heard the song before...and yeah its become one of my favorites too.

@bold: Qubool Hai-Want-it-like-this dekhiye...in this space soon...and you'll know 😛😆😆

Will be uploading the last part end-of-my-day.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Anisha.

read both the updates... very well written 😳
waiting for the next part



Thank you... will upload the next part soon

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