AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75

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Pia23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

This story has a happy ending 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
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So they are finally reached farm house
I was as shocked as asad after reading the party atmosphere...
I love Asya's moment alone on beach n the part with n after mr. Number...
So curious to know what's on Asad's mind as he is becoming mysterious update after update
Excited for alone asya ...
Continue soon...
Hopefully by the time you update tm you will be a groupbie...😊

After reading the next chapter, you'll know what is in Asad's mind.
Glad you enjoyed reading it.
Yes, hopefully I'll becone Groupbie...lol...I'll be able to make more posts.
Will update the next chapter today at usual time 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: -ovi-
Awesome update loved it

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
awesome update..

Thank you Arpita 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: friendsall
Sweet story...

Thank you 😊

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

So sos sorry for the lateness

And thank u for the past

Sorry I didn't comment till now as I didn't get time to read

Omg what can I say

I love it

Zoya is definitely playing a dangerous game

Oh boy I hope it don't blow up in her face

I can imagine her shocked when she learn Asad is the boss of AAK

Omg their first meeting was so cute he took he for a child

But boy hen she cleaned up she cleaned up beautifully

It is like the ugly duckling to a beautiful swan

And after tht u couldn't stop the attraction

So dilshad seems to be a snob so she didn't raise Asad

So tht is y she don't seem to care need to know Asad back story

He is not opening up to Zoya but he wants to know all of her

So Anaya seems to be his current gf would she have a roll in the story or not

So he seems filthy rich as his grandfather helped tony And nearly everyone at the party wants to talk business with him

Love Zoya as his distraction so glad he didn't push he to bed with him as he seems like a playboy

Looking forward to reading more

I love the frequent updates it make the story flow better

U are an amazing writer hope to see more of asya stories from u in future

Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: fatima30
Thank you for the PM!
Superb update
Zoya is in love with Asad...she wants to get him to him care about her!
Looking forward to Asad's reaction to her late arrival the next morning

Loving how quick your updates are!

Thanks Fatima 😊
Glad you are enjoying this chapter.
Farm next ch the story will pick up it's pace.
This story is pre written and I can easily update on daily basis. It's like a daily soap opera 😆
Will update the next ch real soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA
OMG. u updated alreadyy!
are u updating daily..??
if yes keep doing it.
i would love to read ur update as first thing in the morning..
this one was amazinggg...
zoya is in lovee with asadd...
and how stupid of mona thinking her of 18 years told. stupid people always judge others..
and how materialisticc they are..
anyway the update was awesome.
continue ASAP.
and thank u for the pm!!

Yes, I'll be updating daily. Daily soap opera 😆
Zoya felt bad when Mona was badmouthing about her.
Yeah they are all materialistic. After next ch things will change a lot.
Will update tonight again.

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Sorry for commenting late

coming to the update its just awesome

I keep checking again n again whether u update or not

I m in love with this story

My curiosity about reading this story increases with the speed of bullet train

wonderful update

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Pia23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: anopama
So sos sorry for the lateness
And thank u for the past
Sorry I didn't comment till now as I didn't get time to read
Omg what can I say
I love it
Zoya is definitely playing a dangerous game
Oh boy I hope it don't blow up in her face
I can imagine her shocked when she learn Asad is the boss of AAK
Omg their first meeting was so cute he took he for a child
But boy hen she cleaned up she cleaned up beautifully
It is like the ugly duckling to a beautiful swan
And after tht u couldn't stop the attraction
So dilshad seems to be a snob so she didn't raise Asad
So tht is y she don't seem to care need to know Asad back story
He is not opening up to Zoya but he wants to know all of her
So Anaya seems to be his current gf would she have a roll in the story or not
So he seems filthy rich as his grandfather helped tony And nearly everyone at the party wants to talk business with him
Love Zoya as his distraction so glad he didn't push he to bed with him as he seems like a playboy
Looking forward to reading more
I love the frequent updates it make the story flow better
U are an amazing writer hope to see more of asya stories from u in future
Continue soon

No problem Anopama. I am glad you've got the time to catch up on this story. It's one of my all time favorite novel and I was dying to convert it on AsYa. By the time this story finishes, I'm sure you'll be in love with it too. Poor Zoya doesn't the whole truth about Asad yet and yes, he's a big time playboy. But Zoya is Zoya...she'll teach him a good lesson 😉

The story is pre writre which makes it easier for me to update daily. Me too, I wish everyone update their FF's on daily basis...it makes it so much more fun to read:)

For the writing, I will give the credit to the author of the book Judith McNaught. She's an amazing writer. I love her books.

Will update the next chapter soon.

Thank you for your feedback 😊