AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#611

Awesome Story...Very Well Written...👏

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don girls

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Posted: 9 years ago

#612

Awesome
Love the storyline
Beautifully written
Can't wait to read more of your stories

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Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: nikii11
wow awesome loved this story took 2 sundays to read it
read this from last sunday half

and this sunday full in a go

its superb

more rocking than rejected by the huband story

this is soo good

thanks tehs dii

for suggesting me this😎

I loved this story from the 5th chappy😆till the end😉

sorry couldn't catch it before when tehs dii had recommended long back

coz of my exams

Thanks for reading and commenting
Glad u liked this story. Even I like this one better than Rejected by Love
Thank you Tehs for recommending this story to your friend 🤗

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Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Awesome Story...Very Well Written...👏

Thank you and the credit for writing goes to the author of this book Judith McNaught:)

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#615

Finally I m back after so many days 2 put up a comnt here😳

1stly I m sorry Pia I had read this story but competed late & comnts main bhi time lag gya😳

Quickly moving It was a very Brilliant story

I have 2 say very upclass wid a lot of Twist & turns

Zoya chosen by Sidiqui 2 spy on AAk's company but she was not feeling write so deliberately gave wrong impression in her IV but when she met Asad she decided 2 join just 2 b close 2 him

I loved how their relationship grew wid time. I knew both were attracted at 1st sight only but while Zoe was loyal 2 herself that she fell 4 him he was not & obviously his past was reason 2 it.

I must say my heart went out 2 him when his childhood part was revealed. A small little lonely chide after d death of his father wanted nothing but his mother & that cold hearted woman went away getting married again & having another son & how she despised him & his gift when he went 2 meet her on Christmas. I felt like strangling her just like Zoya thought.

But I coud not vision Dilshaad like that Shireen would have fit in that role well😆 & I know I shouldn't b but I was happy know she got Sidiqui as Husband who cheated her behind her back & a son like Imran cuz she never deserved a Pure hearted son like Asad

On d other hand Zoya fell in love while Asad thought he was just attracted & wished 2 have just physical relation which she refused & once his identity as owner was revealed she wanted 2 stay away

I loved those scene's when Asad used 2 get jealous seeing Zoe & Malik 2gather. Those were just pure delight 2 read😉😆

But than came a storm shaking their love nest when Sidiqui blackmailed Zoe & Asad & party fell 4 this trap blaming & insulting Zoe so badly. That time I was Super angry on Malik cuz Zoe had told him everything about herself & Sidiqui & he didn't even gave her benefit of doubt.

Loved Tony 4 how he kept his promise & took her under his wings & going ahead 2 even fight bravely 4 her infront of Asad who was a total idiot

Than finally truth was revealed & Asad came back running from his Board meeting 2nd time 😆lol that was so hilarious but I guessed he would do that again when d same meeting's name came in d updt.

So he went Shimla 2 see her 2 beg 4 apology & guess he got that very easily.. Here I felt Zoe left him so easily off d hook after so much humiliation she forgave him very easily I wished she would have resisted a little long but what 2 do if that's how d original story was..

But thanks a lot Pia 4 sharing this super Fantastic story wid us😃...I m very happy 2 have read this btw I m gonna read this again now when I will get some free time.😆

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Aashka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#616

Give us an epilogue for this as well please?

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MonnaS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#617

Omg..I just finished reading both, rejected by husband and worst kind of betrayal in 2 days & i absolutely loved both stories. ..couldn't stop reading it...these two have become my 2 favorites and how I wish it kept going on...Pliz do add me to ur pm list if u start a new story anytime soon.

Thanks again for a wonderful read

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: msingh27
Omg..I just finished reading both, rejected by husband and worst kind of betrayal in 2 days & i absolutely loved both stories. ..couldn't stop reading it...these two have become my 2 favorites and how I wish it kept going on...Pliz do add me to ur pm list if u start a new story anytime soon.

Thanks again for a wonderful read

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