AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 19

Originally posted by: -SilverSparkle-

Okay, I'm a season 1 fanatic, and not familiar with new writers on the forum, however saw this thread on the first few pages a few days ago, I'm not sure what enthusiastic readers are called, but I was curious, not a username I was familiarized with or recalled seeing often. 😳 And then I read the first four chapters all at once, but I was using my cell phone, and was lazy to log in, just because I'm logged in from my ipad and laptop.

And I have to say:

This is amazing, I have been following the updates since then, you're doing a remarkable job with this narration and fiction as a whole. Highly captivating it is, I also appreciate that you update regularly.

Look forward to the upcoming chapters, with a lot of revelations to AAK's feelings and a little groveling as well.

Keep Up the Good Work!

Awww thanks for such a lovely comment.
Oh me too...I'm a season one fanatic too, as you can tell by my username 😆
I love reading AsYa FanFiction's.
When I read this novel i fell in love with it and I knew it will rock in AsYa's version.
You will love the next chapter as it is my personal favorite. It will finally reveal some of Asad's feelings too. Will update real soon. Thanks again for all the appreciation :)

Originally posted by: fatima30

I love this story
Thank you so much for the PM and for all that you do to give us an update

Asad really is a complete jerk

Thanks Fatima 😊
I am so glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

aww thats ok..

lovedd the update!

God knows what asad wants.

he came with ananya and wanted to leave with zoya.

loved the way zoya reacted.

asad deserved that attitude.

crazy he is..

hope he returns her earings.

continue ASAP.

and thank u for the pm!

He couldn't control himself after seeing Zoya 😆
He does like her but doesn't want to confirm him feelings.
He wants her but does't want to be involved emotionally. He expects the same thing from her.
But she's not like him. That's the conflict. Next chapter will reveal his side also.
Will update soon.
Thanks for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Ha ha ha 😆 ok...I'll think about it but I haven't updated all the chapters yet. Next chapter will be long one anyways. You'll enjoy the next chapter a lot 😃

but then if she update it all in one go
we will be happy to read it but we will be craving for more
i love this 24 hrs anticipation
it keeps me on my toes
last nite I was on my way to bed when i saw the update so then i just sat on the steps to read and forgot all abt bed and my hubby.😆

Originally posted by: iluvasya

I guess Ananya didn't know anything about Zoya wearing her dress. Asad did say those last few words. He's an ass 😆 Samar is a great guy and he's in love with Ananya. He wants to make both Asad and Ananya jealous. You'll get to read Asad's POV in the next chapter. Next chapter has some funny moments 😊

Thank you for reading and commenting
Will update soon.

Awesome update..loved it..zoya's attitude towards asad was required..but asad shouldn't have said those words to her..he hurted Zoya too muchhoping for asad's pov also...Samar helping Zoya alot..nice update

Originally posted by: anopama

Res for chap 8😃

unres

aww what can I say I hold off from commenting as we seems to hog all ur space
amazing update
zoya was dressed to kill even samar was speechless
so love their ideas of how to get through the night
awww love zoya telling let asad come to them 😆
so samar has it bad for anaya and what is anaya deal she is looking at them so she seems interested
so y the hell is she with asad ...what because he is a more better ...(dont let me say the word)
what she prefer the president to the vice president
zoya worked hard and kept her cool👏so proud
but tht guy is like a leech he wants all the attention on himself from all the women
what does he think he is GOD
the audacity did u missed me aww love zoya answer
and he wants to know his score how he did well from what i read in the chapter it wasnt impressive
so his score would have been low for me
all he wanted was to be inside her and nothing more it was like he have a checklist he have to tic off
got the young innocent clueless virgin⭐️
he is totally unbelievable he was ready to leave with her come with one leave with another 😡
glad zoya caught herself and plainly refuse
cant believe he said tht if I was zoya I would have said I woud rather be with an inexperience man where we can learn the art of lovemaking together than be with a hump n dump me slime like u
aww the earring bit was fun anaya can have him but she wants her earring
plz zoya stay srong and irresistable and tottally ignorant to him
at least for a while even though we want asya let him grovel and beg and learn to appreciate women
continue soon soon plz so i dont comment and comment more

p.s. one thing I keep forgetting is the sexy red dress
it irked me tht he send his woman dressed to zoya
I keep forgetting abt tht like how can u do tht
but then zoya had the last laugh seeing the woman in the dress
after she has worn it and was close to being seduced in it
I wondered if when he saw anaya in the dress if he though of zoya

p.p.s it is a surprise in the throws of passion asad dont say another name
and how does he remember all the names correctly.😃

Hi Anopama, I was eagerly waiting to read your feedback. Today I'm literally counting my post so I don't max out 😆

Asad is treating Zoya just like all the other girls he has been treating. Girls throw themselves at him and are okay with one night stand since he is rich and handsome. Zoya also find him to be very handsome. She has told him too and lost her virginity to him. All this makes him think Zoya will be ready to sleep with him again. He really wants her but not emotionally. Trust me Zoya will not bend down until he say the magical words. 'I Love You' 😳

Later in this story he'll madly in love with her. That's the reason I love this story so much and I don't hate him because he changes a lot.

I shouldn't be giving out this but just to calm you down he is not sleeping with Ananya. He is doing the same thing Samar is doing. In his own way he is also trying to bring Ananya and Sanar together again. Samar is his best friend...remember 😊

Will update soon, and I'll be waiting for your feedback 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Yes I kind of get that...

So do we get an update tomorrow?

Yes, I'll update tonight 😊

Originally posted by: jaanu013

Awesome update..loved it..

</div>zoya's attitude towards asad was required..but asad shouldn't have said those words to her..he hurted Zoya too muchhoping for asad's pov also...<div>

Samar helping Zoya alot..nice update

Thank you 😊
I'm so glad u liked it.
Asad's POV will be there in the next chapter.
Will update soon.

Originally posted by: anopama

but then if she update it all in one go
we will be happy to read it but we will be craving for more
i love this 24 hrs anticipation
it keeps me on my toes
last nite I was on my way to bed when i saw the update so then i just sat on the steps to read and forgot all abt bed and my hubby.😆