SaHil OS: Tears In Heaven

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Very nice...refreshing too.
Thanks.

Hey thank you so much for loving this! :)

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: simran_singh_24
Prags🤗 lovely read, thanks for writing.

Simmy darling! 🤗 So nice to see you here!

Thank you so much for reading. Glad you loved this piece!

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

" The last para. Hey, don't mind but it should actually be Aahil KI Sanam and Sanam KA Aahil. You changed the "ki" and "ka" 😆 Anyway, yes! Eternal saga! Aww, you mentioned that VM. Thank you so much for loving these things! Its an amazing feeling! "

Darn it! 😆 Would you believe if I told you I KNEW.. 😆 I knew when I pressed Send, that I needed to change it. But I was kind of hoping no one would notice the small mistake. 😉 Oh well.. Prags, I cannot wait to read the next OS you have in mind. Must be as passionate as this one - if not more. I just can tell.. ❤️ Update soon and I'm glad you liked the feedback. Beautiful comment to a amazing writer. 🤗

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Loved the OS. 👏

You had the mood just right . . . from the rain to the despair (and the thoughts that Sanam had running through her head) slowly turning to hope and then he finally awakens! I was with them the whole way. That scene of Aahil's end in the show . . . I've only seen glimpses of it, don't want to see it and can't bear to see it in its entirety. But with this we get the light at the end of the tunnel.

A happily ever after for SaHil. He awakens . . . they profess their love and recharge for the next day and their continuing fight against evil. 👍🏼

Additionally, I thought it was so senseless that both of them would go down that mountain, pushed to their "deaths", and the fragile girl survived while the strong man didn't. So, thank you for writing this and having Aahil wake up!

Edited by darkice7_12 - 9 years ago

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miss.namrata96

@miss.namrata96

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautifully written os.❤️

I wish whatever is written here was true

I wanted this type of story for saahil only

Thank you for writing it 👍🏼

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Prags,

So very beautiful. It is painful to be reminded of that moment...when we were cheated of what we were promised..

...This is so very lovely to read this...in spite of the sadness in my heart, given the scenario..

You simply brought them alive...that feeling of seeing them on screen...you have captured it...it was so easy to imagine the show ended like this...I guess I don't even care how they ended it...because they couldn't have given this beauty, given their corrupted minds...

Beautiful...That feeling of warmth returning..the safety of his embrace..the slow rush of emotions that kiss brought on...

Keep writing. ❤️

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neha

@-shimmer-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Beauuutifulll ... I went into Sahil land!! Its Amazing Os!!

SaHil together 4ver!! I Really like Title!

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

beautiful update! very well done!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: darkice7_12
Loved the OS. 👏

You had the mood just right . . . from the rain to the despair (and the thoughts that Sanam had running through her head) slowly turning to hope and then he finally awakens! I was with them the whole way. That scene of Aahil's end in the show . . . I've only seen glimpses of it, don't want to see it and can't bear to see it in its entirety. But with this we get the light at the end of the tunnel.

A happily ever after for SaHil. He awakens . . . they profess their love and recharge for the next day and their continuing fight against evil. 👍🏼

Additionally, I thought it was so senseless that both of them would go down that mountain, pushed to their "deaths", and the fragile girl survived while the strong man didn't. So, thank you for writing this and having Aahil wake up!

Thank you so much for an amazing feedback! I wanted to make it more from Sanam's point of view. I thought, her regret was not shown properly in those last moments.

And yes, that scene, I purposely wrote "shown lying there" in the note above, couldn't really use the "D word" ...

Oh yeah! That crossed my mind too! It was really silly to show that! But well, no point in going back to those terrible things..we have our stories with us and ofcourse our happy SaHil! ❤️

Thank you so much again!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: miss.namrata96
Beautifully written os.❤️
I wish whatever is written here was true
I wanted this type of story for saahil only
Thank you for writing it 👍🏼

Thank you so much! :)

Oh yes, we all wanted such an ending or atleast close to it, for them! But well..sigh! Thank you so much for loving this!