#2-AsYa-FF-Ek Pal Jo Dil Mein Utar Jata hai-ch22-pg#30-28/12/15

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

First of all, sorry for being late & it was a good surprise to see another update after reading first. So Zoya trust asad completely. Ayaan was angry & hit Zoya which made her unconscious. Asad felt the pain as well when she was hit. Ayaan become so cheap. Hope asad will save her soon. Thanks for pm

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Good timing
Isn't it
Got the first spot

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Interesting update

Loved reading it

Loved how zoya trusted asad

But hate this ayaan😡

Hope asad does not agree for the deal and soon comes to save his zoya

Please continue soon 😊

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Wow meri jalebi kya likha yar thrilling
ayan asad phone convos bohat ache likhe
specially ayan ke dialouges ek dam villian ki amusement aur gusse wale
writing part A1
bt ese dekha jaye stry ke hisab se to ayan na ergh!

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Happy diwali jalebi 🤗

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

And ye kya be? Late update kyu karegi? Pta ni kese wait karu mai
tera khurapati dimag kounsi deal karwayega?

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Shaila

@raspi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

idiot ayaan plzz meet asya soon luved it tnxx fr pm

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Ye kya? Tune Ayaan ko Faiz bana diya?😲

Dis Ayaan is too irritating hurting n kidnapping Zoya😡

Still, I am 50% sure dat dis wud have happened in Season 1 if Tanveer was there as a cameo only but cvs changed it n passed dis storyline to RaHaFa but u r showing it in AsZoYaan way😆

Poor Zoya. How she will react on waking up?😭

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Gr8 part

Omg ayaan is really behaving cheap

Zoya trust asad wow

I hope asad save zoya

Cliffy end

Excited for next part

Thanx for pm

Plz pm me for next

Continue soon

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Two updates are awesome Nona 🤗
Asad so much excited to meet zoya
But this ayaan 😡 he has gone mad😡
How can he do this
Bechari zoya 😔
Hope asad jaldi se wahan pohunch jaaye aur zoya ko bachale
Continue soon 😊
Aur tera alag story bhi likh na tu tho gayab hogai aaj kal