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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: -shimmer-

jsa k tune mere last comment ka javb dia ho .. like tak nai kiya bewafa!!

i wil read it @ night...Sukoon se prhungi..samjhi??

haww ! kab jawab nehi diya main teri post ka ? meri itni himaat 😲😆
haan thik hai, santi sey pathda, and long review dena samjhi !

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Aahana.

@Aahana.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

LOL !! Main kuch nehi bolne wali hoon abhi 😉

See, I have posted the list of characters as per ur req !😃

sukriya character list post karnekeliye😆 pm tum sab ko ek saath kyon nahi karthi

phir tume arram milega

why pming each and everyone individually

haath duktha nahi kya😳

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Aahana.

@Aahana.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

LOL !! Main kuch nehi bolne wali hoon abhi 😉

See, I have posted the list of characters as per ur req !😃

hmm azzu seeks pleasure in hunting young gals

aisa bhi tho tumne mention kiya tha

I hope its amaad's bacchi

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: Aahana.
hmm azzu seeks pleasure in hunting young gals
aisa bhi tho tumne mention kiya tha

I hope its amaad's bacchi😡

yep I wrote that...and what it implies, I will reveal later after 4/5 chaps😆

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz
Ria !
janis toh I wanted to write an archaeological-historic romance ff on Mirza-razia ! but the forum was total blah and the show quality declined drastically...truth is they were never close to original historical facts but the way the killed nasir and the whole family and showed total ultakahani after that, I just stopped watching it ! toh meri tamanna adhuri rahgayi jo main yaha poori kar rahi hoon in fractions, ofcourse ! like I have incorporated mirza surname, used the same zaroon, about to use the name Naseer ...like that. Althouth the story that I thought for mirza was something diff altogether.

di even i don't follow the show anymore... i don't know about historical facts but the show was really loosing charm for me.. i didn't watch the show for almost 2 months now and not even used to visit in forum nowdays...

go for it... include naseer miyan also.. i would love to read...😆

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: ifians

di even i don't follow the show anymore... i don't know about historical facts but the show was really loosing charm for me.. i didn't watch the show for almost 2 months now and not even used to visit in forum nowdays...

go for it... include naseer miyan also.. i would love to read...😆

but i was totally in love with the mirza guy, rohit purohit...haye such fathomless deep green eyes 😳
Nasser will make appearance not in person but in references. here he is azad's dad who died young.

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

but i was totally in love with the mirza guy, rohit purohit...haye such fathomless deep green eyes 😳
Nasser will make appearance not in person but in references. here he is azad's dad who died young.

not rohit but me still in love with the character mirza... the carefree vagabond,,,😳.. though i don't watch the show anymore.. and yup his eyes are actually magical... always have a thing for such guys who have expressive beautiful eyes and his eyes are just exceptional.😛

Okk no probs... hum naseer miyan kee little screen space se hi kaam chala lengey...😆... di agar maseer azaad ke abbu hain too please uski ammi kaa naam fatima rakh dijiye..😆

even i may update my ss today... if i could manage ti finsih..😛

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: ifians

not rohit but me still in love with the character mirza... the carefree vagabond,,,😳.. though i don't watch the show anymore.. and yup his eyes are actually magical... always have a thing for such guys who have expressive beautiful eyes and his eyes are just exceptional.😛

Okk no probs... hum naseer miyan kee little screen space se hi kaam chala lengey...😆... di agar maseer azaad ke abbu hain too please uski ammi kaa naam fatima rakh dijiye..😆

even i may update my ss today... if i could manage ti finsih..😛

i meant that only, the characters are there to be fantasized , i hardly fall in love the people acting it. rohit is doing an amazing job...and his sparling green apple eyes, haye dnt get me started on that😆
yaa plz update ur ff...bahut din hogaye.

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PurpleCrayon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

I'm here!

While you described at the desolate fort, i could totally imagine the scenery. No shor except for the birds chirping and insects buzzing. Once she entered the secluded garden though, it felt like a hushed silence descended and it was world unto it's own. The aura you created carried on to the description of the Neela Kachnaar. The inner garden seemed like a place one could get totally lost, especially Mahira, who has found all the herbs she could possible imagine. I could see a smile on her face as she explored and I wasn't surprised that was startled when Azaad spoke.

Side note: 1)Him being a poet and penning those line makes me want to give a hug. Poor baby!😆

2) There is more to the little girl? I thought she'd be one of his adviser's children.

I was really looking forward to reading Azaad and Mahiras first meeting and boy did you deliver! I had this goofy grin while Mahira dhulofied the mighty chieftain of the Mirza clan. Waise Rafiq Azaad Mirza has such a nice ring to it. Are you making him a vamwolf? or a vamp or a werewolf? You know which one i'd like the most😳😛

Looking forward to the next one baisa! Keep 'em coming!😃