AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 17

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

@Amy: Hello! *waves*.😳 Your reviews are always sprinkled with so much humor and they're so entertaining to read!

@Shreya: Thank you for the little shout out. I'm so very glad you liked the lines😳🤗

sweetheart ! u absolutely deserve it 😃👏

I loved the detailing of ur story it makes my imagination go to that era and feel what kind of life people lead there...
Mahira stayed back in the inn to help the owners... but still she was not sure to be safe there.. she still feels that zaroon and others will find her there... she is really afraid of them so much na...
the lone castle over the hilltop started to get her interest and her destiny gave her a chance to reach at the place and she grabbed that.. so heres the main story starts i think... nafar forbid her to go there and she was well aware by the myths and danger about the wooded hills and castle.. and also the mysterious chieftain who was a kind of monster's slave... but still she decided to go there without thinking again... it shows the mettle of the character... i really loved that touch...

so onb the way to hill mahira meet amad mirza..😆.. interesting... now want to see how the eq between amad nd mahira unfolds..😛... they are one of those few characters whom i really enjoys watching on screen together... now wanna see how their relationship develops here...

overall as usual an wonderful chapter...though your story pace is slow but still i enjoy reading the detailing u gave... so keep it up...👍🏼

Ria Baby,
looks like my story is tad too slow and old fashioned for the taste of readers...keu serokom porchei naa...or rather invisible hoe porche, views dekh ar like dekh !

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Ria Baby,
looks like my story is tad too slow and old fashioned for the taste of readers...keu serokom porchei naa...or rather invisible hoe porche, views dekh ar like dekh !

arey di tumi chap nicho keno... believe me too ur story has much fare no of likes... 20+ likes are really good... aar invisible reader der katha jadi balo too😆... actually emon anek reader ache jara IF er member noy but they do keeps tab on IF and read the stories... me was also silent reader of IF for one year before joining😆...

You don't worry... as teh story will progress the readers will also be interested in this story more and more..

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

3895 views but only 25 likes ???
tumlog chori chupke kyu padh rahe ho bhai ?? 😲
khul ke jio, likes marro, comment karo...bichari writer ki takleef ko thoda toh samjho !!

Oye Shreya, tu kuch bhi kar..lekin haar mat man na!! Arrey sirf 3 chaps down..abhi toh picture baaki hain!! Firstly, AzMa fans are very few in comparison. Secondly, urs is on a diff tangent altogether...sadly uniqueness doesn't guarantee popularity from the get-go..ur story is yet to grow on ppl..I had mentioned earlier that ur 3rd chap did more than the 1st two ..so u got to wait it out..

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Oye Shreya, tu kuch bhi kar..lekin haar mat man na!! Arrey sirf 3 chaps down..abhi toh picture baaki hain!! Firstly, AzMa fans are very few in comparison. Secondly, urs is on a diff tangent altogether...sadly uniqueness doesn't guarantee popularity from the get-go..ur story is yet to grow on ppl..I had mentioned earlier that ur 3rd chap did more than the 1st two ..so u got to wait it out..

Last but not the least, mujh jaise aalsi log adhik hain..it takes time for our brain cells to function.😆😆

P.S: If you don't mind me saying, write kyunki tujhe likhna hain.Dont ever let that sweet smile of urs falter.😃Dont quantify success.Personal satisfaction is the priority.You have got some solid backers here.

P.P.S : I know..I know..we haven't chatted much and yet I am yapping here😆😆 Mwaf kar de!!

Amy, Ria Kruti !!
u guys really know how to cheer up a depressed soul ! thank u so much, sugar pies ! I am very much feeling positive and ready to pull out the monster eating my brain, give him words and make him see light of the world😃 For the sake of my own sanity !

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Amy, Ria Kruti !!
u guys really know how to cheer up a depressed soul ! thank u so much, sugar pies ! I am very much feeling positive and ready to pull out the monster eating my brain, give him words and make him see light of the world😃 For the sake of my own sanity !