AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 16

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey just read ur story
Its amazing plz plz continue soon n pm me😊

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

thank u Esha ! I am glad u njoyed.
can u umm ...press the like button on the 1st page. I usually pm the whole list. so u will get a pm by default when I update!😆

Originally posted by: noesha

That was the only page I hadn't pressed like yet haha

Just did!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Amaad ke piche dark shadow nehi that was an enormous hound dog . And yaa he is kind of flirtatious and happy go lucky !

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

UN- RES!

I read the forest path wala scene again in the middle of the night and scared myself. Reminded me of my favourite episode from this cartoon on Nickelodian called "The Wild Thornberrys", itne saal beet gaye and i still remember it😆

U know once when I was like 9 or 10 I nearly got lost in the forest of Terai ( Himalayan forest , North Bengal ). I ran after a peacock and then all of a sudden there these wall of coniferous trees all around and tourist party was out of sight. All of a sudden I started hearing all kinds of scary sounds, imaginations of a frightened child definitely, but I ststill remember those 10 mins of real life nightmare ! 20 yrs have passedbut the traumatic experience is still vivid in my mind. I used that along with some supernatural twists. I hope I made it lifelike.

The moment where Mahira meets Azaad is building up really well. How does she meet him? I hope its some sexy takraar at first sight😳
Next chapter mein hi milenge aur takrayenge bhi. and u would be the 1st person to read that ! infact itz mostly ready. so get ready for editing buddy !

Amaad miyan is the flirtatious devil that he is on the show. I wonder what you have in store for him. Evil manipulator? Or is he going to be one of those younger sibs who loves teasing their older sibling relentlessly with a healthy dose of sibling rivalry.

Zaroon mere haath lag jae bas! Uff, aise logon ko toh maar maar ke halath kharab karni chahiye! I hope Azaad fulfills this fervent wish of mine.
yes thatz my wish too ! Azad aisa haal banayenge dekh lena 😆

I will love you forever for adding Shiraj (Kutte ka bhi itna sexy name? wah!😃 I might get a puppy soon and I'm going to name him/her shiraaz). Itna fierce looking dog and his name means sweet. I like the contrast. Sounds just like Azaad.😆
oh yes, u liked the name ?? good ! I was thinking historical story mein dog mane kya ho sakta hai, then I clicked 😆

I wish i could get into your head and read a couple more chapters.
chinta mutt karo baisa, after all aap i toh sab se pehle padhte hai !

PS: Thanks to you and Amy I just heard the song "ishq da ruthba" Loved it!
Isnt it good ?? isnt it !! haye looks like i am doing free campaign of that sureshot too-horrible-to-watch movie, but the song just melted my heart 😃

Originally posted by: Aahana.

guess I have to read it again

waise can you everytime post character sketch's along with the updates

some of them I tend to forget

zaroon I know mahi's fianc

and innkeepers I know

nafar and jamilah

rest of them's I tend to forget

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Aww ! I am glad u liked it ! yes, I will let u know when I update again.
P.S- ur id, jaanipaichani si lagrahi hai mujhe... which forum were u before this ?😃

Originally posted by: shailu123

am in music corner n games forum also jyada yahi rehti hoon😊

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

yaa, I think games forum mein dekhi thi aapko !