m sry mene ye itni late padha
was hunting a gud tym and secluded place to read ths and ab weekend he to padhai ka itna tension ni he isiliye aaj padha update
di i love the situation in those lines whr u said she didn't knw wat was between them bt whatever it was was wrong!
How deep! And clouded thought!
A condition a tym between lovers abt to stay away whch idk any1 had ever described in as simple words as u did! 👏
and when zack and asad came oh di it was heart melting to read asad who had in his mind thaj her leaving so soon have somethng to do with him! Written well
and oh the bestest thng ever read was the whole car ride with the apt song
di i love that song and ths just potrayed all the emotions u wanted to write jst so perfectly
that line whr their eyes meet above the lyrics nigaahon me ...
My fav line di
woah and then he made her laugh
di only u cn write a beautiful switch frm gloom to friendly
and loved how zoya reffered them as WE
and oh did he hug her! Yayy he did hug her awesome di
amazingly written
ab bichadne ke din and hardwork ke din aaye he
di waiting fr update
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