AsYa SS - Blood On Her Hands #2: Ch 17 B Pg 127 COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

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What to say? As I expected Zoya was such a victim. I am losing my words now after reading this chapter. Even if I knew about, I can't stop myself from feeling each of her words. As woman, it's a part of us that turned to ashes, not only a part but sometimes all of our soul.

Each of your word was true, and the last part where Asad was trying to convince her to fight and to stand strong has a really really strong impact. Allah only test those who can handle his test.

It was true that women will always feel shame for being abused, what was the logic in this? I never knew how can we think like this? when not only society, but also women turned against women, pointing to her bad manners. What was the logic in this?

Just like her, I wouldn't feel any regrets by stabbing him again and again, but still you show at the end of the flashback, her humanity going away like her soul and his murderer. It was so beautiful and so well written. Even in her trance to save her dignity, she realised what she did. I can't describe more about her feeling, because I will lose myself in some pain. Ironically, she choose death instead of her rights, . what was the logic of this?

Actually all the flashback was beautifully described, you avoided any gross details and for this thank you so much. Even if I closed my eyes and my heart constricted in pain with each word of her story.

it 's a beautiful and good subject and I can't see anyone here from all the writer who will be able to handle it with so much purity and respect like you did. Allah also give you gift, and it was writting, and chosing words to describe darkness with purity. Was it logical what I am saying?

You are blessed and stay always blessed with this gift.


You were lost for words at my update and I am lost for words at your comment

Thank you so so much for having that faith and trust in me as a writer.

I really appreciate it.

I agree with what you have said, we live in a world that is as cruel as it is beautiful.

Lots of love
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

wow saima

i m stunned and speachless...
it is so very true...every days hundreds and thousands girls n young girls become victims of such monsters
asad is right... she has to raise her voice and get justice ...not for her but for all.
pls continue soon


Thank u so much Sanjh

Yes Asad is right and he will make her fight 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

But u did cheating Aapi...

U were giving us hopes of double update


I know

Sorry Tehs, this one was quiet a heavy one so thought it was better to give just the one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I am back...

Aapi...
It was ... Just written so welll..

It could be only u who could have handled such a subject with so much delicacy an yet be impactful..
I mean I don't mean any disrespect to other writers here... But here on this forum I don't know of anyone else who could write so perfectly as u...
👏
The flashback part it was so painful...
I could hardLy read through it and thank u so much where u were not so explicit about the incident..

The way she realized what she had done was written so well..

N I'm glad that she dint regret what she did as I wouldn't want anyone to regret such a thing..

The message given by Asad at the end was out loud and clear...
It was amazing...



🤗

Thank u so so much Tehs

Am so grateful

Like I said to Chotu, it really was a hard one for me to write, am glad it came across well

Love u lots
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
I liked the scene where zoya stabbed jai.* hehe*
I Mean I don't know :(
But that was awesome. :p
too much of studying revenge dramas I suppose is to be blamed for the day :p
Good day/night
Will come back soon. XD
Keep updating di. :*
Love n more Love
:-*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I liked the scene where zoya stabbed jai.* hehe*

I Mean I don't know :(
But that was awesome. :p
too much of studying revenge dramas I suppose is to be blamed for the day :p
Good day/night
Will come back soon. XD
Keep updating di. :*
Love n more Love
:-*


Hey Ankie,

Hope you are well where you hiding?

Thank you so much

Lots of love right back at ya

It's definitely night for me lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: azsumay

Hey she is our favorite writer
Adorable sis
Started new thread for story
That's why resing our post


Sumi that is so sweet of you

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Awesome update
Loved reading it
Finally zoya confessed the truth to asad
Hope that she gets justice soon
Loving the way asad is handling zoya and supporting her
Beautiful banner
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


Thank u so much Sanjh

Yes Asad is right and he will make her fight 😊

this update remind me of my childhood incident.
we were coming back from school and one guy told us about some types of flower and ask us to come with him.
my friend left with him and i was looking for paper or bags to carry them
same situation...when i reach there... he was trying to take advantage of her by threatening her that he has a knife... but lucky for her i reached her on time and he was scared and left from that place.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


Sumi that is so sweet of you

Thank you 😊

Oh really
Thanks but I am very emotional also
Reading this update
Felt bad for zoya
Every woman deserves their freedom
Loved your writing ways
It's perfect
No one written better than you
Lol 😊

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