Azaad, Amaad and the stew of resentment.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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While recounting his dukh bhari kahani to Mahira, Amaad didn't seem all that dukhi to me. Even the BG score wasn't all that serious.


I don't know why I've been under the impression that Afreen died. Things can never be that easy can they? She's probably waiting in the wings to swoop in and create some drama right when she is not needed.

Recipe: Afreen-Azaad-Amaad- stew of resentment:

Ingredient 1 : Azaad.

He is very reserved and keeps everything bottled up. Heavily season that with the fact that he is a supernatural creature with crazy blood lust, things are not looking so good for him on the relationship front.

Ingredient 2: Amaad.

He is more outgoing of the pair. Unappreciated and in the shadow of his big brother. Resentment constantly bubbling under the surface. Ammi loves Azaad more. Azaad gets everything he wants. When he wants something he has learnt not to ask and wait patiently, he goes and takes it unabashedly.

Ingredient 3: Afreen.

She caught Azaads attention precisely for being so different from him. He watched from afar , this- according to him at least- delicate, innocent, can do no wrong-paragon of femininity, an ultimately fell in "love" with her. Really, if he's watching from afar how well can he know her?

Amaad on the other hand is all charm and mischievous smiles right from day one. What is one to do under such an onslaught of attention? She begins to soften towards him.

Stir thoroughly and bring to boil:

Azaad broods silently while taking all this in. Amad ke samne sab ladkiyon ka dimag kharab kyun ho jata hai? He is well aware of Amaads attitude toward women and cannot take his little brothers supposed affections seriously. He's trying to drop hints for Afreen.

Amaad is lavishing attention on Afreen. He's being quite sincere, no girls on the side, until one fateful day there is an accidental relapse of his casanova persona. Really, what were those girls doing in my room? Afreen catches him and who is the ready shoulder to cry on? You guessed it. Azaad. Amad jo bolta hai woh karta nahi aur jo karta hai woh bolta nahi.

Amaad thinks Azaad set him up for a fall. Begins to wonder if Azaad has feelings for Afreen.The old resentment toward big brother rears its ugly head. How dare he steal my love? (This is love. Right?)

Azaad is finally proven right when it comes to his brother. The fair Afreen deserves someone better. It's on the tip of his tongue to tell her her loves her. But he holds back and reminds himself again, She deserves someone better. Not me. She looks so damned heart broken. Could she ever love me?. Vexation-Exasperation-Resentment. But I saw her first.Loved her first.

After simmering, leave to cool:

Afreen leaves. In her absence both the brothers have placed her on a pedestal. Both assuming the other stole the love of their life.

To garnish-Add Plot Twist at own discretion:

Afreen is a scheming, conniving, vindictive, villainous little... witch, who is another player in the black magic world and had her own plans for gaining power.

I can imagine Mahira, "Bewakuf bana ke gayi woh aap dono ko". No points for guessing whose fantasy bubble is popped first (Amad).
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!! This recipe is delectable.
*claps *
The best imaginative writing I have seen so far. It seems pretty close to what the writers have in their mind.
Great writing!!!
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Perfect... Hope cvs have a similar recipie in mind :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Raj-

Wow!!! This recipe is delectable.

*claps *
The best imaginative writing I have seen so far. It seems pretty close to what the writers have in their mind.
Great writing!!!


Thank you 😳.

I could be totally off the mark and Afreen could be a vindictive, villainous *beep* who came into their lives with her own designs on gaining power, like Akram was.
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Originally posted by: angelpureness

Perfect... Hope cvs have a similar recipie in mind :)


Thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow 👏 ... Aptly written. am liking this stew a lot... A likely happening

And Azad is seeing history repeat itself with Mahira.
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Originally posted by: beekay1

Wow 👏 ... Aptly written. am liking this stew a lot... A likely happening

And Azad is seeing history repeat itself with Mahira.


Thank you 😃
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Res! Loved it! I'll comment on this in a while! <3
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Originally posted by: amare_ashy

Res! Loved it! I'll comment on this in a while! <3


Will wait patiently😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

While recounting his dukh bhari kahani to Mahira, Amaad didn't seem all that dukhi to me. Even the BG score wasn't all that serious.


I don't know why I've been under the impression that Afreen died. Things can never be that easy can they? She's probably waiting in the wings to swoop in and create some drama right when she is not needed.


Aah !! Amad is not at all dukhi ! He looks totally a photocopied version of Daniel Cleaver ( of Bridget Jones's Diary, U will instantly understand what I am trying to say, if u have seen the movie 😉). Daniel wanted easy attention and sympathy from the girl Bridget and the he more that anything wanted to take her eyes away from his rival Mark Darcy...and what is the easier way to do so ?? Shed a bucket of fake tears to the girl how Mark stole his girl and broke his heart...while all the while it was Mark's wife and he, the marriage wrecker !! How efficiently he gained trust of her although all the while Bridget was aware that Cleaver was a reputed philanderer and absolutely untrustworthy !! She believed because she was eager to believe everything bad about the guy who put her down upon her face in her mom's party...because he was awkward,proud, reserved and did not have Cleaver's glib tongue or killer smile.
somehow it feels like , the story is same here too. It was Azad's love and Amad took advantage of his secretive nature and mysterious disappearances. He is a total attention seeker, now bcoz he cannot get the coveted attention of their mother , he somehow sought revenge in stealing bhai's ladylove.
Edited by milinda.shreyz - 9 years ago

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